Ok, MAJOR MAJOR MAJOR cliffie! Don't do this to me! Please update soon!
You haven't updated in sooooooo long! I want to know what happens!!!! Pleassssssse continue it; this is one of the most interesting L/J stories I've read!!!!
That was fantastic! I love the humor; the pillow fight in the morning perfectly portrayed all of their characters... I really like the twist you kinda put on Peter, because I've never heard the words "Peter" and "lecherous" in the same sentence before...
I'm very fond of the dance scene. I like how you bring Olivia Brampton in; it gives the story that random humor that you only understand if you've been paying attention... which is what I always look for in a story! Yay, lol.
It's really good, Lei, you should be proud :). Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. Laters!
Ahahaha! I don't know why, but this chapter suddenly hits me as completely hilarious now. I like the way you did this chapter, especially since it was dedicated to the undeserving moi *wink*. Lol. Until the next...
Well, since it's been so long since I read this story, I am refreshing my memory... and reviewing again.
I really like this chapter, I get a very peaceful, wintery feeling from the whole thing. I also like the way you didn't try to start the story with a huge, life-or-death kind of bang, but with subtle hints and a more realistic approach.
Also enjoyable is the mischeivous nature of Lily when she's around Remus, I think that's very original. They seem to cute! Lol.
And of course, your portrayal of Remus is perfect, but then again, you are Lei, so I think that says why.
Well, dear WerePrefect, you've got an uncanny ability to write about Messrs Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs. The crazy kooks - it'd be just like them to have an insane pillow fight.
One thing that I really love about this story is Lily. If writing the right version of Marauders is hard, writing the correct Lily is ten times more difficult. I enjoy the fact that she's best friends with Remus. I love the fact that this story is original, starting at a completely random time during seventh year.
However, I'm going to have to give the crown to the part of the chapter in which Lily becomes the stalker of her best friend. This amused me to no end because, while Lily may like to think that she's not like James....she is.
Your story is engaging and delightful. You are my favorite James/Lily author. And my favorite Hermione/Remus author. And I love your originality. Even if something has been done, you find your own spin, and that is excellent.
oh my gosh a cliff hanger what is james' reaction
Ohhhhh.....SO close. I want more .... and I want it soon!
He he....Of Course she does. She REALLY want to go!
i'm glad that you have FINALLY updated this story... lol!! i thought i've read the first 2 chapters already a long time ago but i couldn't remember anything, so i had to read the whole thing all over again. This new chapter is soooo cute!!! great job! UPDATE SOON PLEASEEEEE!
Author's Response: I KNOOOW... I haven't updated in SO long, and I wrote this chapter in two hours. O.O That was a relief. I'll try to have the next chapter up sooner, but my other project [which is admittedly heavier and larger] is also hanging in the air, so I have to get to that too. *sigh* Anyway, thanks SO much for reviewing. :)
Awwwwwww.......I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is sooooo cute how James and Lily are getting along and their feeling for each other are slowly starting to show......i don't really like it when everything happens to fast or to slow.....your is moving at the right pace..LOVE IT!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I've read a lot of J/L stories and I'm really trying to step away from the norm. I'm glad it's working, thanks again!
I enjoyed reading about Lily and Remus' relationship and how he is her best friend. One thing that I quite like about this story was that you didn't go on about Lily and her girlfriends. Not that I have anything against Lily and her girlfriends, but I always imagined Lily being very close friends with Remus. Thanks!
Author's Response: Nah, I didn't have enough time or energy to write two or three more original characters. I also always saw Remus and Lily as very close friends. Glad you liked it! Thank you!
Hey! I really, really, REALLY liked this story. It's realistic, believable, and fast moving. It's in my top three favourites! QUICK! Stop reading this and continue the story!.........just make sure J/L don't get too carried away (ex: like getting all gushy -- I like the way they are portrayed right now) . Thanks!
Author's Response: Lol, don't worry, I'm not your usual romance writer. I always try to steer away from the gushiness, 'cause personally I'm not a big fan of it. I'm happy you like it; thanks a lot!
wow good story cant wait to hear or rather read more i love romance stories and ive read alot this is by far one of my favorites
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
you have to finish it, c'mon, cliffhangers arent my thing
Author's Response: LOL. That's kinda bad, because I love leaving cliffhangers *evil grin*. I'll try to get the next chapter up as quick as I can. Thank you!
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
I haven't really reviewed this chapter yet (and the review I did leave startled one of your other reviewers, lol), so this will be a short but real review for one of my favoritest authors.
This chapter marked a small stepping stone in the J/L relationship, and I liked it. Of course, it was hard to tell why James decided he should go get Lily. But he did, and that's what matters, eh?
And Lily stood up for him, too. That was sweet of her.
*sigh* I don't want to pressure you about finishing this, but consider this a gentle reminder not to abandon this story. I really do like it.
Oh, and guess what. I have a painful spot above my left eyebrow right now. I like the way you're characterizing Susan.
I think I'm just going to keep rambling until I run out of things to say. I just noticed that James and Sirius are pretty keen on not letting Remus and Lily spend too much time together. *sigh* Did you notice I've been converted to that ship?
Anyway, yeah. Just as long as this story's still somewhat alive, I'm happy. You have other things to be getting on with, anyway. *wink*
Have a nice day, Lei!
Author's Response: Dude, Remus/Lily is the ultimate MWPP ship. Not even J/L. Remus/Lily pwns all! ;) Thanks SO much, dear, your reviews always mean a lot [even the evil ones!]
I'm not a big fan of the Marauders apart from Remus, but this fic has changed my mind. :) I think you've captured each character's personality really well. I like that Peter's not a complete wimp like some people make him, and Sirius isn't a dreadful womanizer. I especially liked the chess scene between Sirius and Peter! It definitely seems like something they'd do, and the poor king was so funny. Another thing I noticed was your word choices; they're wonderful. I have the dreaded SAR disease - almost all I use is said, asked, and replied, and it's hard to stop. You don't seem to have any problem with it at all! This is a great story, I'll be checking back again :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Yeah, I'm a HUGE fan of all the Marauders, and I really enjoy writing them. I don't see Sirius as a womanizer either. And y'know what? I had that SAR disease in my early writing stages; my beta just forced it out of me. I'm glad she did, though. O.O Anyway, thank you SO much for your thoughtful review. :)
jus reviewin agn...is tat person who reviewd b4 sum1 u kno?....coz she or he is soooo rong abt the story...its jus soooo kool and YOU ARE an awesome writer!
Author's Response: Thank you! LOL. Yes, that person is a very good friend of mine, don't worry. ;)