That's brilliant. I really enjoyed this story. Very cute!
I like the ending, like the last sentence :) Great story!
lolz. sirius squinting fearfully along with peter's twiching is hilarious. you go girl. lily evans is awsome.
ha ha!!!!!!! i love your fanfiction so farrrrr!! i always think about how lily found out about james's animagus form, this chapter covers it perfectly. I LOVE HIS TEMPER, AND HOW HE CONTROLS IT...HE HE SOMETIMES.
the story is amazing!!loved the waqy lily heals them and james is such a sweetie
Fabulous. Totally going on my favourites.
I loved this. I think it would work as two chapters but the division needs to be somewhere else because it was kind of awkward where the second chapter began. All in all, fantastic piece!
my favourite bit has to be the ending. its one of the funniest things i've ever read
my favourite bit has to be the ending. its one of the funniest things i've ever read
OMG! I luved this fic! I luved how Sirius was always walking in on them. Lol.....He is So like Ron.
you just gotta love sirius lol have added this to my favourties
Lily is actually older than James, by two or three months or something. You find that out in the seventh book.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know that now, but I didn't when I wrote it. Sorry. Thanx for the review! :)
Lily is actually older than James, by two or three months or something. You find that out in the seventh book.
lol luv that part where lily scraed the bloody hell out of sirius lol HILARIOUS!
That was wonderful, as usual. I think it's good that you expanded it, you didn't leave anything out. Keep writing!
i think you should continue this story because this is a good base to start a longer story on. i think you have a good plot going.
This is really cute - I love the end with the twitching eyes and such - very funny. I think it's so sweet how Lily took care of James and Sirus, by the way! Great story!
Danielle.....amazing....loved it so muchhhhh!!!!!!
U write real well
And please write some more
