Reviewer: ginny96
Date: 07/02/12 11:17
Chapter: Beginnings

AWSOME!
i love it. evil lily!!! hehe

Reviewer: Aquamarine39
Date: 04/21/12 11:01
Chapter: Beginnings

That's brilliant. I really enjoyed this story. Very cute!

Reviewer: HermioneJeanPotter
Date: 09/23/11 13:43
Chapter: Beginnings

I like the ending, like the last sentence :) Great story!

Reviewer: HPFOREVER62442
Date: 05/14/11 0:33
Chapter: Beginnings

I see this appearing in a movie :)

Reviewer: lilyfan
Date: 08/26/10 18:47
Chapter: Beginnings

lolz. sirius squinting fearfully along with peter's twiching is hilarious. you go girl. lily evans is awsome.

Reviewer: lilyfan
Date: 08/26/10 18:30
Chapter: Discoveries

ha ha!!!!!!! i love your fanfiction so farrrrr!! i always think about how lily found out about james's animagus form, this chapter covers it perfectly. I LOVE HIS TEMPER, AND HOW HE CONTROLS IT...HE HE SOMETIMES.

Reviewer: this_is_the_life
Date: 04/02/10 0:52
Chapter: Discoveries

the story is amazing!!loved the waqy lily heals them and james is such a sweetie

Reviewer: dumblond-katie
Date: 04/13/08 4:54
Chapter: Beginnings

Fabulous. Totally going on my favourites.

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 12/07/07 14:40
Chapter: Beginnings

I loved this. I think it would work as two chapters but the division needs to be somewhere else because it was kind of awkward where the second chapter began. All in all, fantastic piece!

Reviewer: Honorary_Marauderess
Date: 10/28/07 16:52
Chapter: Beginnings

my favourite bit has to be the ending. its one of the funniest things i've ever read

Reviewer: Honorary_Marauderess
Date: 10/28/07 16:50
Chapter: Beginnings

my favourite bit has to be the ending. its one of the funniest things i've ever read

Reviewer: I Luv James Potter
Date: 09/25/07 21:32
Chapter: Beginnings

OMG! I luved this fic! I luved how Sirius was always walking in on them. Lol.....He is So like Ron.

Reviewer: Honorary_Marauderess
Date: 09/17/07 6:44
Chapter: Beginnings

you just gotta love sirius lol have added this to my favourties

Reviewer: LakamaK
Date: 08/28/07 4:45
Chapter: Discoveries

Lily is actually older than James, by two or three months or something. You find that out in the seventh book.

Author's Response: Yeah, I know that now, but I didn't when I wrote it. Sorry. Thanx for the review! :)

Reviewer: LakamaK
Date: 08/28/07 4:33
Chapter: Discoveries

Lily is actually older than James, by two or three months or something. You find that out in the seventh book.

Reviewer: Jamesie_girl101
Date: 08/18/07 23:13
Chapter: Beginnings

lol luv that part where lily scraed the bloody hell out of sirius lol HILARIOUS!

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/04/07 8:53
Chapter: Beginnings

That was wonderful, as usual. I think it's good that you expanded it, you didn't leave anything out. Keep writing!

Reviewer: manchester90
Date: 05/08/07 13:54
Chapter: Beginnings

i think you should continue this story because this is a good base to start a longer story on. i think you have a good plot going.

Reviewer: flyingphoenix
Date: 04/01/07 16:14
Chapter: Beginnings

This is really cute - I love the end with the twitching eyes and such - very funny. I think it's so sweet how Lily took care of James and Sirus, by the way! Great story!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 03/20/07 6:17
Chapter: Beginnings

Danielle.....amazing....loved it so muchhhhh!!!!!!
U write real well
And please write some more

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