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Name: FanFicFanatic12 (Signed) · Date: 07/30/06 11:16 · For: Chapter 2
I like the fact that Peter figured it all out. Kudos to him!
I also like that Sirius doesn't like to open up to anyone but Remus. :-)
Next, please!


Name: anotherdestinyinc (Signed) · Date: 07/23/06 19:20 · For: Chapter 5
I just found this story and have to say I'm loving it. I really hope you update soon. I'm not a big slash person- but I do like this one...

Author's Response: Hello! I would like to thank you personally for reading "Dog Years" here on Mugglenet and leaving me a lovely review!rnrnUnfortunately, I also come bearing bad news. I will no longer be updating the story on here, as the mods are, in my opinion, a tad too picky about canon and I really don't have the patience to change my story to suit their needs. I love it just the way it is, even if some references are ahead of the time frame, and if I use way too many fragments and don't decipher descriptions as much as they seem to want me to.rnrnIf you are indeed still interested in reading this story (and perhaps some of my other fanfiction works), you can find me at http://www.fanfiction.net/~thejazz and "Dog Years" is under the title "Here's To The Future". I've enabled anonymous reviews, so if you are currently not a member do not feel as though you have to sign up to leave me a review!rnrnAgain, thank you SO MUCH for reviewing "Dog Years", and I hope you keep reading!rnrnxo Jazz


Name: Purplemage (Signed) · Date: 07/14/06 22:39 · For: Chapter 5
Finally! I've been waiting a while for the update of tis fic! The beginning of the chapter was a bit awkward, because sometimes it was hard to tell who was saying each line, maybe it's just me.

"His tongue was stuck between his teeth as he squinted at the pages, his quill dripping ink on the floor beside him." This is such a cool image, I don't know why, but I love it. It's a very Sirius thing to do, being concentrated on the newspaper and totally forgetting about the ink falling on the carpet. It made me giggle. "“I want you to move in with me —”
But Remus leant in at that moment and captured Sirius’ lips in a heated kiss" I loved this part! Is so sweet and very in character both of them. Remus wanting to find a muggle job because he's a werewolf anf Sirius not letting him and finally asking him to move in with him. It was great character interplay.

And the ending! It was so hot! I wanted more. "Teeth biting swollen lips, tongues engaged in fierce battles." That's a great way to describe a heavy make out session. I also like how you describe the scene without mentioning their names, but still you understand very well who's doing who and you get what's going on.

Overall, a great chapter. A bit short, but sometimes short chapters are necesary. I'll be waiting for the next update.


Author's Response: Hello! I would like to thank you personally for reading "Dog Years" here on Mugglenet and leaving me a lovely review!rnrnUnfortunately, I also come bearing bad news. I will no longer be updating the story on here, as the mods are, in my opinion, a tad too picky about canon and I really don't have the patience to change my story to suit their needs. I love it just the way it is, even if some references are ahead of the time frame, and if I use way too many fragments and don't decipher descriptions as much as they seem to want me to.rnrnIf you are indeed still interested in reading this story (and perhaps some of my other fanfiction works), you can find me at http://www.fanfiction.net/~thejazz and "Dog Years" is under the title "Here's To The Future". I've enabled anonymous reviews, so if you are currently not a member do not feel as though you have to sign up to leave me a review!rnrnAgain, thank you SO MUCH for reviewing "Dog Years", and I hope you keep reading!rnrnxo Jazz


Name: ImNotACanOfSoup (Signed) · Date: 07/11/06 0:50 · For: Chapter 5
pa da pa pa paaaa.... I'm LOVING IT! IT flippin rocks man!

Author's Response: Hello! I would like to thank you personally for reading "Dog Years" here on Mugglenet and leaving me a lovely review!rnrnUnfortunately, I also come bearing bad news. I will no longer be updating the story on here, as the mods are, in my opinion, a tad too picky about canon and I really don't have the patience to change my story to suit their needs. I love it just the way it is, even if some references are ahead of the time frame, and if I use way too many fragments and don't decipher descriptions as much as they seem to want me to.rnrnIf you are indeed still interested in reading this story (and perhaps some of my other fanfiction works), you can find me at http://www.fanfiction.net/~thejazz and "Dog Years" is under the title "Here's To The Future". I've enabled anonymous reviews, so if you are currently not a member do not feel as though you have to sign up to leave me a review!rnrnAgain, thank you SO MUCH for reviewing "Dog Years", and I hope you keep reading!rnrnxo Jazz


Name: Elphin (Signed) · Date: 07/09/06 9:25 · For: Chapter 5
Aww, I really like this chapter. It's really sweet and your description of their...er...fornications is really beautiful. I liked how it was indirect and whatnot. Keep it up, I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hello! I would like to thank you personally for reading "Dog Years" here on Mugglenet and leaving me a lovely review!rnrnUnfortunately, I also come bearing bad news. I will no longer be updating the story on here, as the mods are, in my opinion, a tad too picky about canon and I really don't have the patience to change my story to suit their needs. I love it just the way it is, even if some references are ahead of the time frame, and if I use way too many fragments and don't decipher descriptions as much as they seem to want me to.rnrnIf you are indeed still interested in reading this story (and perhaps some of my other fanfiction works), you can find me at http://www.fanfiction.net/~thejazz and "Dog Years" is under the title "Here's To The Future". I've enabled anonymous reviews, so if you are currently not a member do not feel as though you have to sign up to leave me a review!rnrnAgain, thank you SO MUCH for reviewing "Dog Years", and I hope you keep reading!rnrnxo Jazz


Name: aintcrazy4you (Signed) · Date: 07/08/06 16:18 · For: Chapter 5
Yeah! You updated!!! I liked this chapter! It wasn't too short, so no whining from me. Update soon.


Name: Elphin (Signed) · Date: 06/28/06 22:38 · For: Chapter 4
This story is really cute. It's very realistic and the Marauders and Lily are well in character. I can't wait to read more. I'm puzzled as to whether James is proposing to Lily or what so I'm excited to find out what happens.

Wow...this'll be the third Remus/Sirius story I've added to my list in the past few days. I wish I could have left a more in-depth review but I'm dead tired at the moment so my mind isn't working properly. Anway, a very good job and keep it up! ^.^


Name: Riddle (Signed) · Date: 06/22/06 11:16 · For: Chapter 4
Now i'm curious... Good chapter.. Update soon ^^

Author's Response: Hello! I would like to thank you personally for reading "Dog Years" here on Mugglenet and leaving me a lovely review!rnrnUnfortunately, I also come bearing bad news. I will no longer be updating the story on here, as the mods are, in my opinion, a tad too picky about canon and I really don't have the patience to change my story to suit their needs. I love it just the way it is, even if some references are ahead of the time frame, and if I use way too many fragments and don't decipher descriptions as much as they seem to want me to.rnrnIf you are indeed still interested in reading this story (and perhaps some of my other fanfiction works), you can find me at http://www.fanfiction.net/~thejazz and "Dog Years" is under the title "Here's To The Future". I've enabled anonymous reviews, so if you are currently not a member do not feel as though you have to sign up to leave me a review!rnrnAgain, thank you SO MUCH for reviewing "Dog Years", and I hope you keep reading!rnrnxo Jazz


Name: Purplemage (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 5:57 · For: Chapter 4
GOD, that Peter is so annoying. I'm happy the guys joined the order, I'll wait and see what happens next.


Name: ImNotACanOfSoup (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 1:44 · For: Chapter 4
cool, this is really gettting very interesting! but there's not been much slashyness in the last few chapters.


Name: aintcrazy4you (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 1:04 · For: Chapter 4
Okay what's up with James or did I forget something here? Not that exciting but was fairly good. Liked the threesome line. Verry funny. Well, update soon and keep on writing! You are really good.


Name: pheonix_flight (Signed) · Date: 06/15/06 22:47 · For: Chapter 4
ewwww. . . ewwwww. . . grosssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh my goodness - why? What's gross? ha ha ha, I don't know if I should take it good or bad!


Name: Kerian (Signed) · Date: 06/15/06 22:38 · For: Chapter 2
I like the idea that Peter figured it out before James, and that Lily had a hand in giving the two some time together. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Hello! I would like to thank you personally for reading "Dog Years" here on Mugglenet and leaving me a lovely review!rnrnUnfortunately, I also come bearing bad news. I will no longer be updating the story on here, as the mods are, in my opinion, a tad too picky about canon and I really don't have the patience to change my story to suit their needs. I love it just the way it is, even if some references are ahead of the time frame, and if I use way too many fragments and don't decipher descriptions as much as they seem to want me to.rnrnIf you are indeed still interested in reading this story (and perhaps some of my other fanfiction works), you can find me at http://www.fanfiction.net/~thejazz and "Dog Years" is under the title "Here's To The Future". I've enabled anonymous reviews, so if you are currently not a member do not feel as though you have to sign up to leave me a review!rnrnAgain, thank you SO MUCH for reviewing "Dog Years", and I hope you keep reading!rnrnxo Jazz


Name: ImNotACanOfSoup (Signed) · Date: 06/02/06 0:23 · For: Chapter 1
HOLY CHIPOTLE! That was awesome! I "awwww"ed the whole way without barfing, which means it's and awesome fic!


Name: Purplemage (Signed) · Date: 05/29/06 19:59 · For: Chapter 3
hmmm, this is getting interesting, I really like the idea of Remus and Sirius having their own spot on the lake where they can cry, it's a neat idea. Great characterisations by the way. This fic has a lot of potential, I'll keep an eye on it.


Name: aintcrazy4you (Signed) · Date: 05/26/06 22:38 · For: Chapter 3
Very, very, Very Good!! Sorry I haven't reviewed before this but I really Love this story!!! This is one of my favorite Remus/Sirus storys!


Name: Hawkfeather (Signed) · Date: 05/14/06 23:55 · For: Chapter 3
Love your story, thought Peter's a bit OOC but other than that it's really good!

Author's Response: Hello! I would like to thank you personally for reading "Dog Years" here on Mugglenet and leaving me a lovely review!rnrnUnfortunately, I also come bearing bad news. I will no longer be updating the story on here, as the mods are, in my opinion, a tad too picky about canon and I really don't have the patience to change my story to suit their needs. I love it just the way it is, even if some references are ahead of the time frame, and if I use way too many fragments and don't decipher descriptions as much as they seem to want me to.rnrnIf you are indeed still interested in reading this story (and perhaps some of my other fanfiction works), you can find me at http://www.fanfiction.net/~thejazz and "Dog Years" is under the title "Here's To The Future". I've enabled anonymous reviews, so if you are currently not a member do not feel as though you have to sign up to leave me a review!rnrnAgain, thank you SO MUCH for reviewing "Dog Years", and I hope you keep reading!rnrnxo Jazz


Name: True Blonde7 (Anonymous) · Date: 05/09/06 18:49 · For: Chapter 2
wow, sooooo good! dont have any stories for u to check out srry, there getting approved


Name: True Blonde7 (Anonymous) · Date: 05/09/06 18:48 · For: Chapter 1
Wow, thats awesome!


Name: Riddle (Signed) · Date: 05/09/06 17:23 · For: Chapter 3
aaarg.. Ending the chapter like that.. Now i'm curious.. Great chapter!


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