That wedding was beautiful. I've always pictured James' and Lily's wedding as gorgeous and perfect. I think you got it right. :)
That chapter was lovely. So sad. But you made their sadness beautiful to read.
That end was gorgeously written! The last line, I thought it was beautiful.
That chapter was very nice. Remus and Sirius have a sweet relationship. And I like the way you write Peter. He's got that sort of stupid naive thing but it's not overdone the way a lot of people write him.
I really liked all of the 14 chapters! I would have reviewed all of them, but why waste valuable reading time? But seriously. Well done! I like your writing style... Also, this idea was brilliant. I especially enjoyed your take on James and Lily's wedding, with the perspective of a couple of gays behind the scenes to pull the strings. Brilliant. Still yours is one of the best Sirius/Lupin fanfics I have read so far... And I have read a lot! Keep up the good work!
Beautiful chapter- But you put, 'Lames' instead of 'James' on the last sentence!
Oh damn, i've run out of chapters, i hate it when that happens. I've really been enjoying this fic, despite all the sad events that keep cropping up. You've really got a way of pulling the reader in and making them deeply care about the characters. I'm kind of hovering between wanting and not wanting the next chapter because i've got a terrible feeling that something i.e. Peter and his other masked mates are going to crash the wedding, is going to happen.
haha, i love this fanfic!! im realding it for like the third time, im gonna add it to my favs, definitly!!! a few of the comments are a bit un-maurauder-like, but its still really good. and i like the way you put it in third person, but in such a way that it centers around first. put simply, its really good and i really like it!!!!
Author's Response: Hello! I would like to thank you personally for reading "Dog Years" here on Mugglenet and leaving me a lovely review!rnrnUnfortunately, I also come bearing bad news. I will no longer be updating the story on here, as the mods are, in my opinion, a tad too picky about canon and I really don't have the patience to change my story to suit their needs. I love it just the way it is, even if some references are ahead of the time frame, and if I use way too many fragments and don't decipher descriptions as much as they seem to want me to.rnrnIf you are indeed still interested in reading this story (and perhaps some of my other fanfiction works), you can find me at http://www.fanfiction.net/~thejazz and "Dog Years" is under the title "Here's To The Future". I've enabled anonymous reviews, so if you are currently not a member do not feel as though you have to sign up to leave me a review!rnrnAgain, thank you SO MUCH for reviewing "Dog Years", and I hope you keep reading!rnrnxo Jazz
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Author's Response: Hello! I would like to thank you personally for reading "Dog Years" here on Mugglenet and leaving me a lovely review!rnrnUnfortunately, I also come bearing bad news. I will no longer be updating the story on here, as the mods are, in my opinion, a tad too picky about canon and I really don't have the patience to change my story to suit their needs. I love it just the way it is, even if some references are ahead of the time frame, and if I use way too many fragments and don't decipher descriptions as much as they seem to want me to.rnrnIf you are indeed still interested in reading this story (and perhaps some of my other fanfiction works), you can find me at http://www.fanfiction.net/~thejazz and "Dog Years" is under the title "Here's To The Future". I've enabled anonymous reviews, so if you are currently not a member do not feel as though you have to sign up to leave me a review!rnrnAgain, thank you SO MUCH for reviewing "Dog Years", and I hope you keep reading!rnrnxo Jazz
Please update!!!!!!
~ Hannah Abbott
Author's Response: Hello! I would like to thank you personally for reading "Dog Years" here on Mugglenet and leaving me a lovely review!rnrnUnfortunately, I also come bearing bad news. I will no longer be updating the story on here, as the mods are, in my opinion, a tad too picky about canon and I really don't have the patience to change my story to suit their needs. I love it just the way it is, even if some references are ahead of the time frame, and if I use way too many fragments and don't decipher descriptions as much as they seem to want me to.rnrnIf you are indeed still interested in reading this story (and perhaps some of my other fanfiction works), you can find me at http://www.fanfiction.net/~thejazz and "Dog Years" is under the title "Here's To The Future". I've enabled anonymous reviews, so if you are currently not a member do not feel as though you have to sign up to leave me a review!rnrnAgain, thank you SO MUCH for reviewing "Dog Years", and I hope you keep reading!rnrnxo Jazz
I love this chapter, because this is exactly how I imagined how it would be!
~ Hannah Abbott
Well written, and a lot of it does seem very possible about what really happened.
~ Hannah Abbott
Pretty sad, but very good!
Poor Lily...
~ Hannah Abbott
Hilarious and clever!
~ Hannah Abbott
Oh poor everyone... episcally Lily and Sirius.
~ Hannah Abbott
I may be stupid asking this, but isn't 'Marauders' capitalized?
Still really loved your writing!
~ Hannah Abbott
James is thick!
And I like you as a writer, you are pretty brilliant!
~ Hannah Abbott
I really do love Remus/Sirius, it's so adorable!
~ Hannah Abbott
Awww...I love this story, keep updating!
Author's Response: Hello! I would like to thank you personally for reading "Dog Years" here on Mugglenet and leaving me a lovely review!rnrnUnfortunately, I also come bearing bad news. I will no longer be updating the story on here, as the mods are, in my opinion, a tad too picky about canon and I really don't have the patience to change my story to suit their needs. I love it just the way it is, even if some references are ahead of the time frame, and if I use way too many fragments and don't decipher descriptions as much as they seem to want me to.rnrnIf you are indeed still interested in reading this story (and perhaps some of my other fanfiction works), you can find me at http://www.fanfiction.net/~thejazz and "Dog Years" is under the title "Here's To The Future". I've enabled anonymous reviews, so if you are currently not a member do not feel as though you have to sign up to leave me a review!rnrnAgain, thank you SO MUCH for reviewing "Dog Years", and I hope you keep reading!rnrnxo Jazz
