Brilliant job! You have so much talent. Please write another one. LOVED IT! I have no critisim. Sorry! You're so going on my favorites! =) 100/10.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really glad you like it, and I'm finished with my second fic, I'm just getting the chapters pushed through. That one's much fluffier until... well, you'll see.
Very well done! I'm a hopeless romantic and a huge Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny worshipper! Your fanfic brought a smile to my face and warmth to my heart. Thank you for your great talent!
Author's Response: Sorry I haven't responded to this until now, I try and answer all my reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I really enjoyed writing it, and there was a kind of release because for that song in particular, I have it melded in my mind with the HP romances, and it just felt so right putting something out there that finally puts the two together. That and I absolutely loved putting Ron and Hermione together like that. I think that when you get a chance to read the entirety of "One Good Day" (which I'm queuing up as we speak), it'll become obvious that I love to write emotions. That's what gets me, when you're writing and you feel it, and when you're characters are wanting to cry, you cry and everything just connects.
I normally don't read songfics. I'm glad I had some downtime today and read yours. Fluff? Sure, but I think you finally exposed what's been going on in their heads all this time, especially Ron's.
Author's Response: Awesome thanks. I think that's one of the reasons why I didn't want to write a songfic; because I typically don't read them. But, I'm really glad you had some downtime today too. As for Ron's head, I think maybe the reason this fight went the way it did was because Ron's part in all this is probably the least played out. Thanks for the review.
Very good!!!!! Fluff, fluff, fluff, fluff, fluf............................but good fluff!!! The fight was sooooooooo.............................intense!!! You really captured the relationship between Ron and Hermione!!! XXXXXXXXXXXX
Author's Response: Thank you, I really felt it as I was writing it. To be honest, I just put the song on repeat, and let the characters do the rest.
hey!! good story. i usually dont read ron/hermione fics, but this one was good!! i have to agree, slightly more harry/ginny and this story would have been better, but it was great for wat it was!!!~*~*~ make sure u read and review my story called THE THOUGHTS OF TABITHA its a romance fic, and can be found in the other pairing section
Author's Response: Thank you so much. As I said earlier, this was originally going to be just R/Hr, but Harry and Ginny crept in. The upside is, however, that I've got something waiting in the queue that is much more Harry and Ginny, and I really hope you'll like it. This time five chapters instead of just the one (and the last one is a monster). I'll pop by, too, and see what Tabitha is up to.
Well. I like this story. I think it's very likely that they have a fight like that... but I don't think you should have ruined Bill and Fleurs wedding, and I slightly more Ginny and Harry would be nice.. But otherwise I like it
Author's Response: First, thank you so much for being the first review. And I'm glad you liked it. As for ruining the wedding, bit sorry about that. But it was quite intentional. On one hand, I felt it necessary to break everything down. Considering the extremity of some of the situations that have characterized their relationship thus far, and the fact that they have still yet to get together, I think that means that you have to get even more extreme. No quiet moment will put those two together, and so I sought to make them both as vulnerable as I could, putting them in the most exposed setting available. Besides, I think that while the fight occurred, sure, the wedding may have experienced a down point, but I kind of think that theoutcome makes the event better than had they not fought at all. As for Harry and Ginny, originally, I wasn't going to even bring them up, but I wanted the narrative to be as close to JKR's style as I could imagine, which means keeping Harry involved. As I started to frame the story from Harry's point of view, I found this kind of subplot spring up. Thank you so much. I do have something much less angsty, and much more fluffy in the works. Oh yeah, and much more H/G too!