Reviews For Right Here
Reviewer: Revy-Rider
Date: 10/02/11 13:51
Chapter: Right Here

Great Story. But you spelt Viktor wrong, in the story its spelt with a K not a C. Not a big deal but it's just a little point

Reviewer: lunar-eclipse
Date: 05/23/11 19:22
Chapter: Right Here

I liked it. I'm a huge Romione fan, and I can so see them kissing like that. All that arguing-it's just sexual tension, and you captured it between then well.

Reviewer: chelseabarcelonadrogba
Date: 06/12/10 0:19
Chapter: Right Here

amazing beginning to an awesome story arc... congrats on wherever you are, hopefully writing more stories =)

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/27/09 15:28
Chapter: Right Here

I really like this story. Like alot.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 12/22/08 8:47
Chapter: Right Here

wow it was a great story. I loved it so full of candid emotions. Very well written. I can't wat to read the sequals.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 08/10/08 21:25
Chapter: Right Here

I don't know why but this has me beaming. Perhaps reading it straight after 'Everybody does it' was a good idea after all. I really liked this because we don't really see Ron and Hermione get together in canon, there's no specific turning point. Tweak a few details and this might have been a missing moment from DH. It's still nice to see the deep emotion I've come to expect from your writing. You have the characters all perfect and I particularly liked Ron's 'got nothing, know nothing, worth nothing' speech, it shows how he must feel about himself and also that he can't believe anyone could think anything other than that of him. He appears to be projecting his views from other people back onto himself, if that makes sense. He believes Hermione is too good for him so assumes it must be her making him feel that way. I know alot of people like that, you do have the human condition pretty well figured out. I'm sorry i've gone on about Ron so much in this review, but I felt that this piece was more about him than anyone, even Hermione.

Reviewer: goldenniffler
Date: 07/16/08 2:07
Chapter: Right Here

i love it!

You know a story is good when it makes you go AHH! *and put your hands on the side of your face*, and then OHH! *and put your hand over your mouth), and then WOW! *and scroll over to the review box to write something*

i think your awsome. =D

Author's Response: Heh, thanks. And thanks for bringing this story up to triple digits in reviews. Been waiting for that for a long time now, actually. Anyway, I would say more, but all I've really got to say is that I hope you'll read the rest, and then pop by the website and check out the story I got cooking up over there.

Reviewer: goldenniffler
Date: 07/16/08 2:04
Chapter: Right Here

i love it!

You know a story is good when it makes you go AHH! *and put your hands on the side of your face*, and then OHH! *and put your hand over your mouth), and then WOW! *and scroll over to the review box to write something*

i think your awsome. =D

Reviewer: Riddala
Date: 07/03/08 10:38
Chapter: Right Here

That was a very wonderful story and i enjoyed reading it. I like how you did put a song in there. It made it even more romantice, cause it helped discribe the feelings of Ron and Hermiones feelings. Good job on it

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 06/20/08 10:04
Chapter: Right Here

Aaw, that was ultra-cute :) Thanks for brightening my dull weekday summer morning. :)

Reviewer: proudgryffindor
Date: 04/14/08 20:09
Chapter: Right Here

ok i've already read all of your stories awhile ago but you updating "the nightshades" inspired me to go and reread them all again, and so now ive chosen to review all of them as well. lemme start out by saying that i love scenes like this, where 2 people who u already know want each other get into some kind of fight or argument, and there feelings end up surfacing. i think you were definitly right about this being perfect for ron and hermione, and i think you captured the emotion and feel of the whole situation perfectly!!! ON TO "ONE GOOD DAY"!!!!

Author's Response: Well, thank you very very much, and I'm glad that you're going back and rereading and reviewing anything. I hope you'll come along and join us for the final chapters of the Nightshades, and hope to get that story wrapped up pretty soon. Only, what is it? Only four chapters left, and I think I'm going to have a lot of time tomorrow to work on them, and in fact I may try and get a head start tonight. The opening of chapter 20 is a little tricky, and I've ditched it several times already, but maybe my next shot will be the one that sticks. Anyway, this story. Ah yes, the one that started it all. It originally was just to see if I could do as well if not better than some of the fanfics that I had read leading up to this point, and while it is rather lacking now in retrospect, I find myself with mixed emotions because of it. The writing at that point, I think, was pretty lame compared to where I'm at now, but on the flip side, it did get me going on what has been a very long journey, and now that journey is almost over. Despite the fact that my writing has definitely evolved, I think there are still some core components here that didn't go away, but instead provided a backbone for how I would continue to write, and in the end serve as a pretty solid foundation. Anyway, I'm babbling, so thank you very much and hope to hear from you again very soon.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/26/08 12:26
Chapter: Right Here

yay!! i loved it!! VERY entertaining!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you did!

Reviewer: RitaSkeeterWannaB
Date: 01/30/08 22:08
Chapter: Right Here

i like that you broke your own rules. this started a great series, so i'm not complaining!!

Author's Response: Well, thank you very much. Funny that, I don't even remember having rules, but here we are, I did at one point in time. At this stage of my fanfic writing career, though, I'm just at a place where I want to finish the last story I have, and move on. Thank you again.

Reviewer: MissMolliewobbles
Date: 01/14/08 18:20
Chapter: Right Here

Totally in-character! No girly giggling Ginnys, overly-lovey-dovey Hermiones, Intellegent, outgoing, super-de-duper happy Rons, or non-confused Harrys! I love it! %Thanks and I'm excited to read more,

Author's Response: Thank you ever so much. Can you believe that there was a site that actually rejected this story due to "poor characterization"? Sigh. That is one thing I try to do with all of my stories though, I try to stay, in the earlier stories, consistent with the characters in the books, andthen as the progression of my own plots affect them, I try and show how the characters have changed in regard to my stories. In any case, the characters are the most important part of the stories, so I spend an awful lot of time making sure I can get them as close to right as I can get. Thanks.

Reviewer: daffy
Date: 12/28/07 3:13
Chapter: Right Here

ps: u r a guy??? god u r so romantic!!??? dat line " i will" was like.... awwwww!!! welll headin of to the next one.... c ya der!!

Author's Response: Yup, I'm a guy. You know, I suppose it's reasonable for folks to not necessary be sure of my gender, but what I do find kinda silly is that men don't have the ability to write romance. Indeed, I think my gender has, on occasion, stumbled upon some decent romance in the past, both in fiction and in real life. Just a thought. Thank you.

Reviewer: daffy
Date: 12/28/07 3:09
Chapter: Right Here

dat was really awsome.... great fic yeah!! m not much of a r/hr shipper but dat was really good.... i think i felt a lump in m throat wen hr was sayin all dat!! 2 thumbs up yeah?!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Helbie
Date: 11/04/07 19:42
Chapter: Right Here

I am not the biggest stained fan but bro you have written a cool little story here, I agree that one chapter is not enough to sate me after 7 books that I have LOVED. I read this on the way home from work and I was as engrossed as I was in JK's books. Really cool man again I am reviewing this 2 years too late but I have loved every second of the stuff I have read. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: I wouldn't say you were two years too late (I don't think I've even been doing this for two years, maybe a year and a half at best). In any case, you're definitely not too late, though I must admit that it takes me a little longer to get around to answering reviews than in the old days. Anyway, thank you, and yes, i don't expect too many people to be fans of Staind's work, even for me it is something of a guilty pleasure, a band I shouldn't like, but for some reason still do. Though, you'll have to forgive me for asking, you read this on the way home? Isn't that kinda dangerous? I'm honored you would read what I have written, but don't hurt yourself! Thank you again so much!

Reviewer: mattyjam
Date: 10/30/07 3:58
Chapter: Right Here

Okay, from one over 25 male to another....that was a really powerfull start. I too hate songfics but you pulled it off nicely.

You have my attention...on to your next...

Author's Response: Thank you kindly. You got a ways to go, but I think it's worth it. At least for other people because other people seem to enjoy it, I can't stand a good bit of it, but there you go. Seriously, thank you, and look forward to hearing from you in the future.

Reviewer: acciobooks1111
Date: 10/08/07 12:17
Chapter: Right Here

i liked it. Im glad you had them together.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm very glad you liked it. Call me silly, I'm not one much for non canon romances. but hey, that's just me.

Reviewer: ObsEssedHRHLS
Date: 09/27/07 19:39
Chapter: Right Here

"I will." I LO VED that line! And Ron coming back and kissing her. Perfect.

Author's Response: THank you very much, I'm glad you liked. This is only the beginning though, and I hope to see you through the rest.

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