Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 05/12/08 10:56
Chapter: Dudley and the Thestrals

UhOh, Dudders has a crush on Luna!

Reviewer: Magic Muffin
Date: 03/30/08 18:57
Chapter: Dudley and the Thestrals

Wow! I'm not sure, but Dudley seemed a little bit in love with Luna. I adore Luna, and plan to be just like her... This peice of information was random...sorry. This fic was wonderful! I'm going to read it again!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/24/06 22:00
Chapter: Dudley and the Thestrals

Wow.... Luna is freaking amazing!

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 06/29/06 16:46
Chapter: Dudley and the Thestrals

I loved how Luna asked whether Harry called her Loony. That added a bit of vulnerability that really connects her, amid all her strangeness, to the readers.

Luna is delightfully wacky, but not over the top. Dudley is his normal ignorant self.

However, I had two characterization issues. First, I doubt Dudley could encounter something so strange without running to his mummy, unless Luna did something to make him more confident - which she didn't, but you could change that. Also, I can't see Harry staying up in his room if a friend comes to see him. That's a bit OOC for him.

Great job! Nice read, and great Luna characterization. :)

Kumy

Reviewer: kaisers_rockchic
Date: 06/06/06 10:51
Chapter: Dudley and the Thestrals

it dosen't seem quite done and should be in romance fics but still good

Reviewer: Christie
Date: 04/06/06 3:13
Chapter: Dudley and the Thestrals

Awwww! How sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter! xxChrissyxx

Author's Response: Thankies :) I'm working on another chapter or sequel, just need more ideas! Tabby xxx

Reviewer: DaddiesGrl1919
Date: 03/31/06 19:13
Chapter: Dudley and the Thestrals

Cute story. I like it. But you should have made it longer. Submit another chapter for it!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: DaddiesGrl1919
Date: 03/31/06 19:12
Chapter: Dudley and the Thestrals

Cute story. I like it. But you should have made it longer. Submit another chapter for it!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I may have another chapter or sequel up soon. :)

Reviewer: CrisCras
Date: 03/17/06 20:30
Chapter: Dudley and the Thestrals

This is great!!! But you OUGHT to write the next chapter!! I really want to know what will happen, if Dudley ever gives Harry that Askagnut spray or if he ever mentions that he had a chat with Luna Lovegood... Anyway, please, do submit a next chapter! This story is soooo good, you gotta continue writing. Bye. Pura Vida

Author's Response: Aww...all these reviews inspired me, and earlier today I wrote a page! :P Just need some more ideas, but I will hopefully have either a sequel or second chapter added by the end of the month. Reviews like yours give me confidence, so thanks. :) Tabby xxx

Reviewer: Princess Of HP FanFiction
Date: 03/15/06 20:06
Chapter: Dudley and the Thestrals

Aww ... how cute! Keep up the good work! :) *thumbs up*

Author's Response: Thankies! :)

Reviewer: MrsDanRadcliffe27
Date: 03/12/06 23:22
Chapter: Dudley and the Thestrals

That was really good. Nicely written. You kind of leave it open... Are you going to make another chapter? That would make it kind of interesting. Yes... I can see it now... Dudley beating Harry to get more information about the wizarding world... Hmm...

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I wrote this back in September 2005, and since then have had reviews on various sites and lots of people have suggested I write more, so I am considering it. I just need ideas and inspiration...also if I do, then I think it would be a sequel, a seperate fic rather than a chaptered one. Thankies :) Tabby xxx

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I wrote this back in September 2005, and since then have had reviews on various sites and lots of people have suggested I write more, so I am considering it. I just need ideas and inspiration...also if I do, then I think it would be a sequel, a seperate fic rather than a chaptered one. Thankies :) Tabby xxx

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