UhOh, Dudders has a crush on Luna!
Wow! I'm not sure, but Dudley seemed a little bit in love with Luna. I adore Luna, and plan to be just like her... This peice of information was random...sorry. This fic was wonderful! I'm going to read it again!
Wow.... Luna is freaking amazing!
I loved how Luna asked whether Harry called her Loony. That added a bit of vulnerability that really connects her, amid all her strangeness, to the readers.
Luna is delightfully wacky, but not over the top. Dudley is his normal ignorant self.
However, I had two characterization issues. First, I doubt Dudley could encounter something so strange without running to his mummy, unless Luna did something to make him more confident - which she didn't, but you could change that. Also, I can't see Harry staying up in his room if a friend comes to see him. That's a bit OOC for him.
Great job! Nice read, and great Luna characterization. :)
Kumy
it dosen't seem quite done and should be in romance fics but still good
Awwww! How sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter! xxChrissyxx
Author's Response: Thankies :) I'm working on another chapter or sequel, just need more ideas! Tabby xxx
Cute story. I like it. But you should have made it longer. Submit another chapter for it!!!!!!!!
Cute story. I like it. But you should have made it longer. Submit another chapter for it!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I may have another chapter or sequel up soon. :)
This is great!!! But you OUGHT to write the next chapter!! I really want to know what will happen, if Dudley ever gives Harry that Askagnut spray or if he ever mentions that he had a chat with Luna Lovegood... Anyway, please, do submit a next chapter! This story is soooo good, you gotta continue writing. Bye. Pura Vida
Author's Response: Aww...all these reviews inspired me, and earlier today I wrote a page! :P Just need some more ideas, but I will hopefully have either a sequel or second chapter added by the end of the month. Reviews like yours give me confidence, so thanks. :) Tabby xxx
Aww ... how cute! Keep up the good work! :) *thumbs up*
Author's Response: Thankies! :)
That was really good. Nicely written. You kind of leave it open... Are you going to make another chapter? That would make it kind of interesting. Yes... I can see it now... Dudley beating Harry to get more information about the wizarding world... Hmm...
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I wrote this back in September 2005, and since then have had reviews on various sites and lots of people have suggested I write more, so I am considering it. I just need ideas and inspiration...also if I do, then I think it would be a sequel, a seperate fic rather than a chaptered one. Thankies :) Tabby xxx
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I wrote this back in September 2005, and since then have had reviews on various sites and lots of people have suggested I write more, so I am considering it. I just need ideas and inspiration...also if I do, then I think it would be a sequel, a seperate fic rather than a chaptered one. Thankies :) Tabby xxx
