Hi, I really enjoyed this so I felt that I ought to review and say how much I enjoyed it.

I came across Snupin accidentally only a week ago, but I daresay I continue to be intrigued by the ship. However, the end of the story made me think that perhaps Lupin was cheating on Sirius with Snape...perhaps there's more to him than meets the eye.

I really loved the description, especially the Buldger hard ice at the beginning. However, I felt that the ready "Ask away" was slightly OOC for Snape, although I felt that the sneer and feeling stupid afterwards sort of made up for it. Despite this, aside from a few other things similar to the one I mentioned, the characterisation was good, especially with such mysterious and multi-layered characters (but which ones aren't?). I know first hand that Snape is very difficult to write, and I imagine that the others would be just as difficult, because they are human (at least most of the time)!

Well done on such a good piece!

um....
o-k. weird.

niiiiiice , wish there was more to it though

I find it amazing at how you can keep throwing out awesome fan-fics! This is like the fourth i've read already and I love them all! The only thing that I HATE about your work is that most of the fanfics that I read by you are one-shots that could easily be a whole lot more! other than that? No complaints whatsoever!

Author's Response: :D

I loved it. You described their emotions so well.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you read more than one of my fics. :D

Interesting idea... but a little too unrealistic. I thought the part about the chocolate was very clever

Author's Response: Yeah, I suppose it is a bit unrealistic. XD Thanks for the review!

I love this story. Thanks for writing it!!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you so much!

very nice i dont normally read remus/snape slashes but that was good very good

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm a big shipper of Snupin and I'm so happy you liked the story! :D

This is a good story. I like how the first paragraph sucks the reader in, making the reader want more. You continue to keep all the characters in character, and not have anyone do or say something OOC. You make Snape's attraction to Lupin seem completly natural, and you explain his confusions on his sexuality very nicely. However, I think it was confusing how you kept switching between Lupin and Remus and Snape and Severus. Chosing one would have set the mood of the story, but using both was a bit confusing. BUt the detail is wonderful, as is the description. Great job!

Author's Response: Oh, thank so much for taking the time to write this comment. I've alway had a problem with the first paragraph and for you to say you liked it, it means a lot. I wrote this fic back in February and since then I've realized using selective names is essential to the story. Thank you so much for pointing it out!

that was so wrong on so many levels

Author's Response: I'm sorry. Ahaha -- thanks for the comment!