Reviews For Finality
Reviewer: ashka
Date: 03/22/06 11:36
Chapter: One-shot

i think thisis a fantasticly written story. you perfectly captured hermione and dracos characters.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm pleased to hear that I achieved that in this story. Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: Morbid Princess
Date: 03/18/06 22:30
Chapter: One-shot

I loved it. I'm a fan of angst and humor, but I've never imagined them in a single one-shot together. You're a great writer and I hope you pursue it. I agree with you that Harry is more capable of rape than Ron. I also congratulate you of being able to form a story about rape and not being so graphic about it. I don't really hate smut, but some could be just downright disgusting. The 'fuck' words are fine, as I see a lot of reviewers react on them. They intensify the emotion. And for some people who think that Draco is too OOC, I don't think he is. People have good sides on them too, don't they? Draco's not as ruthless as people make him out to be. Okay, I think this is long enough. Sorry if it was too long for your liking, you're an amazing writer, though. I seldom write reviews but yours deserves a whole lot of it. Morbid Princess

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like the concoction of angst and humour, and thank you for the compliment. I'm pleased to hear you agree with me on Harry being the rapist. Yes, stories where rape is included can get really nasty and I find it very unecessary. It is possible to write a story with an undertone of rape and still be able to produce a good story where it serves as an important factor. I'm glad you don't think I had too many 'fuck's. They do intensify, as you so rightly said, and something like 'freaking' would just not work :) I'm pleased that you don't think Draco was too OOC, and you are right; people do have good sides too. Besides, in this story, Draco never really did something very uncharacteristic like confessing undying love for Hermione or something, and we don't even know his position - whether he's a DE or not - we only know he's sympathetic and wants to help her, and what happens after the end of the story is up the the readers. Don't worry about the length of your review - I love long reviews. I'm flattered by your kind words, and I truly appreciate your review (even more, since you rarely leave reviews). Again, thank you!

Reviewer: Morbid Princess
Date: 03/18/06 22:28
Chapter: One-shot

I loved it. I'm a fan of angst and humor, but I've never imagined them in a single one-shot together. You're a great writer and I hope you pursue it. I agree with you that Harry is more capable of rape than Ron. I also congratulate you of being able to form a story about rape and not being so graphic about it. I don't really hate smut, but some could be just downright disgusting. The 'fuck' words are fine, as I see a lot of reviewers react on them. They intensify the emotion. And for some people who think that Draco is too OOC, I don't think he is. People have good sides on them too, don't they? Draco's not as ruthless as people make him out to be. Okay, I think this is long enough. Sorry if it was too long for your liking, you're an amazing writer, though. I seldom write reviews but yours deserves a whole lot of it. Morbid Princess

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 03/18/06 4:32
Chapter: One-shot

Loved how you described Hermione's state of mind & rape with out being graphic, just implying.

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment! I'm pleased you liked my way of toning it down, so to speak. Thanks!

Reviewer: Pure
Date: 03/17/06 7:40
Chapter: One-shot

Hi! Your one-shot is great, the idea is very interesting and your style is fantastic! Congratz and continue with the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so flattered by your words. Another oneshot will be up soon! Thanks!

Reviewer: jamesnLily4eva
Date: 03/14/06 5:02
Chapter: One-shot

Brilliant freaking story!!!! Loved the whole hell freezing over thing...not too keen on the whole Harry raping Hermione thing...would have preferred Ron or someone but I guess that just isn't as good as a Harry who everyone adores...Anyway at the start I thought argh depressing story!! (not that I don't like drepessing stories they just lose it in the end though...too melodramtic.) Not that yours isn't depressing or horrific with rape because that obviously is but yours had that excellent touch of humour...perfect and the ending wasn't too melodramtic for instance with other stories with Hermione screaming at draco something Like "I Love you!" When she has only really spoken to him for how many minutes, days years? So that was good...and I'm really just rambling here so I'm just going to stop oh yeah and one last thing with the whole 'fuck' thing you didn't really well you put it in the right places instead of making it all too 'well I've sworn once lets swear all the time' well after that load of drivel I would just like to make my review clear-I LOVED it :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Iím glad you like the Ďhell freezing overí parts. Why would you have preferred Ron over Harry as the rapist? Neither of them should of course have done it, but I thought Harry, with his incredible mood swings (as we see at the end of OotP, for example), would be an interesting miscreant. That he raped her was of course OOC but I chose Harry on purpose, and, as you said, heís the one everyone adores. Iím pleased to hear that you liked the concoction of melodrama, depression and humour. Since this is a one-shot that expands over two days, it would be very unlikely for Hermione to end up screaming ďI love youĒ at Draco. Iím pleased to hear that you preferred this open and actually rather unromantic ending instead of the predictable happy ending. I just couldnít picture this story with a happy ending, though I still made it happy in a way because Hermione gives in to Draco and, since it has an open ending, one is free to interpret whatever happens afterwards. You donít need to worry about rambling, dear, I enjoy reading long reviews. Iím not sure, though, that I got your comment on my use of the word Ďfuckí. If Iím right in my interpretation and think that you said I used it in the right places and not too many/few times, thank you. If Iím wrong, disregard this :) Iím so flattered that you loved it! And thank you for the great review!

Reviewer: Bon_Y_Bon369
Date: 03/13/06 21:54
Chapter: One-shot

Well...well...well... Chosen boy is a sadistic rapist eh? tsk tsk tsk! Harry? You are grounded for freakin LIFE!! Eilime, that was Fuckin BRILLIANT!! LOL! I love how many times you said fuck in your story. I laughed my arse off! I was like Dang girl! LOL!!! I don't know how you do it girl, but you're doing it!!! FANTABULISTIC!!!! I love this one too! definite 100000/10!

Author's Response: I'm grounded? Or Harry is? Definitely Harry! Thank you so much! I'm glad you laughed at all the 'fuck's... I'm pleased you think that I'm 'doing it' because another one-shot is on the way! I'm so happy you liked it!

Reviewer: mugglegurl
Date: 03/12/06 21:51
Chapter: One-shot

ok, i didnt like the fact that harry raped her, so u lose points for that..... BUT u ARE an amazing writer, just didnt care for the plot. 7/10 ~*~*~ please read and review my story called THE THOUGHTS OF TABITHA its a romance fic, and can be found in the other pairings section

Author's Response: I knew there was a possibility that some wouldn't understand that it was Harry. I never wrote it outright, no, but that was intentional. It's a matter of interpretation. But thank you for the compliment.

Reviewer: ashlee_hp
Date: 03/11/06 13:14
Chapter: One-shot

Oh... my... GOSH! This has to be one of the better fanfics I have ever read... man! This is such a good way to pull Hermione and Draco together, I would have never thought of it! MAN! GREAT STORY!!!!! I LOVED IT!

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliments. I'm thrilled that you liked it. Thanks!

Reviewer: Alizee
Date: 03/11/06 10:00
Chapter: One-shot

Wow, what an intriguing story. Very well written, and so original. I like the melancholy. It was a very interesting read. Things like Replacement of former familiarity? A search for the roots of a new? were so well put. I reread the story and there were things that I understood much better the second time. I really liked this: Hermione didnít know how long they remained there, looking at each other, neither waiting for the other to speak, both waiting for someone to come and reassure them that there was a way back. No one came. And they remained. Beautiful. You wrote in a review that you were writing another one-shot. Iím so going to read it when itís posted. Bye!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I'm so pleased that you liked it, and that you read it twice. Yes, I just posted New Year yesterday, I hope you like that one too. Again, thank you!

Reviewer: Cosmic_Bambi00
Date: 03/10/06 23:26
Chapter: One-shot

Wow this was really different than all the other Draco/Hermione's I have read. I really enjoyed it! This is one of my favorite one-shots not. Keep up the great work writing!

Author's Response: Yes, I believe it would be. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 03/10/06 14:35
Chapter: One-shot

That was really good, a little confusing, and I thought you used the word 'fuck' too much, but the storyt was awesome man!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I know it may seem confusing, but it was intended that it was, well, maybe not confusing but made you think. I don't know how much I used that word but it serves to emphasize the intensity of the story. I'm so pleased to hear you liked it! Thanks!

Reviewer: harryshunny91
Date: 03/10/06 13:18
Chapter: One-shot

Hey! What an amazing story! I bow down to you! *gets on knees and worships* I'm a little confused, just being blonde I guess, but it WAS Harry who raped her, right? 10/10 and onto the faves list! Whoopee! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I understand your confusion because it was never really told outright but, yes, it was Harry. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thanks!

Reviewer: Periwinkle
Date: 03/10/06 8:37
Chapter: One-shot

Very superbly written! This isn't the normal Dr/H. I like how you used the "hell freezed over" thing. I liked your style, your repetition of words. I'd definately want to hear more from you. Beautiful job. This one shot is going to my faves. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the different ideas I've had. I'm happy to hear you'd want to read more from me, and it just so happens that I have another D/Hr one-shot coming up soon. It's different from this one though. Thank you, I'm honoured to be added to your fav list!

Reviewer: Soap
Date: 03/10/06 8:35
Chapter: One-shot

Wow... very interesting! Definitely not the usual Hermione/Draco thing, for which I am grateful! I'm excited to see more...

Author's Response: Thank you. No, it's very different from the traditional D/Hr stories. I'm glad you liked it. There won't be more though, since it's a one-shot. But I have another D/Hr one-shot coming up soon. You can check my author page for any changes in updates or new stories. Again, thanks for the great review!

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