Reviews For Bedtime
Reviewer: luna_longbottom88
Date: 08/08/07 21:37
Chapter: A Story

This story was wonderfully written, excellant job!

Reviewer: T vin
Date: 08/07/07 1:29
Chapter: A Story

hmm that was oddly awesome

Reviewer: lumosnox
Date: 08/06/07 20:46
Chapter: A Story

This is a very funny story, written a distinctive style. I can imagine how hard it would be to write in 'you' format all the time, but you pulled it off perfectly!

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 08/06/07 14:06
Chapter: A Story

ooooh it was gr8! i loved it and am adding it to my favs! draco is my favourite character and you've portrayed him perfectly!

Reviewer: jajabinx66
Date: 08/06/07 13:35
Chapter: A Story

Wow.... I can't put it in words to tell you how incredibly good this fanfic is! I laughed when Draco was saying 'No' to all the beginings of stories that Snape was about to tell him. Good Job! Congrats on getting a featured story!

Reviewer: Lasweetie
Date: 08/05/07 14:49
Chapter: A Story

Aww! That is the best one-shot I've read in a long time! Very creative!

Reviewer: worshipJKR713
Date: 08/03/07 16:32
Chapter: A Story

awww cute...

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 08/02/07 13:31
Chapter: A Story

naaw, I loved this story!

Reviewer: iAMmissdelaney
Date: 08/02/07 0:42
Chapter: A Story

Oh, it's absolutely adorable.
Two thumbs up, my friend.
I just really, REALLY enjoyed this.

Reviewer: real_life
Date: 08/01/07 16:48
Chapter: A Story


Reviewer: TuneyDursley
Date: 07/31/07 9:03
Chapter: A Story

This is wonderfully written it makes severus and cute little five-year-old draco seem human :p`

god bless professor snape!

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 07/30/07 21:41
Chapter: A Story

Aww....he was almost cute!

Reviewer: Sky Starlight
Date: 07/30/07 20:51
Chapter: A Story

For some reason my heart ached. This was a lovely story.

Reviewer: M_Mhpfan
Date: 07/28/07 18:49
Chapter: A Story

This is a good, clam short story. Excellent work!

Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 07/28/07 18:29
Chapter: A Story

Cute and funny. Great job! 10/10

Reviewer: Leviosahh_
Date: 07/28/07 13:21
Chapter: A Story

love it. i love the idea, i love the writing style, i love the story.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 07/28/07 4:39
Chapter: A Story

That was an awesome fic. I simply love the way you write. It is very unique and gives a lot of information under the pretence. I also like how you make Snape sound like a human beeing( sorry, bad joke ).

Overall, it was a fantastic fic and an absolute pleasure to read and review.=Sammy

Reviewer: ChanellaBella
Date: 07/28/07 2:56
Chapter: A Story

This is an absolutely excellent story- well-written, charming, and from an interesting point of view. Keep u the excellent work!

Reviewer: A Cappella
Date: 07/27/07 22:55
Chapter: A Story

It seems to me that through your evident knowledge of a child's bedtime routine, you have had quite a lot of experience with kids! ;)

I love this story; second person point of view is not common, which makes it more unique.

You described everything so well (the images are imprinted upon my mind) and everything was perfectly in character--now I can't stop thinking how cute a young Draco would be.

Reviewer: mugglegurl
Date: 07/25/07 20:58
Chapter: A Story

I'm speechless. Really. It's been a long time since I read a really good story, one that I have absolutely no critique for. I can see why this story, of all you others (I've seen you're list, dear, and you do have an awful lot to choose from when selecting one to feature) has been featured. The narration, the dialogue . . . it all adds up to one amazing story. Three cheers for you!

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