Reviews For Bedtime
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/23/08 15:02
Chapter: A Story

I've read this before and it was no less brilliant the second time around. I love your characterisation of Snape and his insite into Draco's behaviour. I think my favourite part was Draco saying his prayers - the good things better keep coming and if they don't Draco will want to know why - excellent.

Reviewer: Insecurity
Date: 01/20/08 13:28
Chapter: A Story


Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 09/03/07 18:59
Chapter: A Story

Oh my gosh! That was so strangely sweet!! I loved it!! I haven't had any idea how to react to Snape from book one 'til about five chapters until the end of the series. I really enjoyed this fic. Thanks os much for letting us enjoy it!!

Reviewer: needsomefelixfelicis
Date: 08/31/07 15:01
Chapter: A Story

this is so well written. i love it!! do you have any other stories about snape?

Author's Response: Thanks! Er, yeah, you might say I have a couple. Check the authorpage... ;)

Reviewer: draco_lover333
Date: 08/31/07 6:39
Chapter: A Story

looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it

Reviewer: JKR_is_God
Date: 08/30/07 21:33
Chapter: A Story

Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: blibbering_weasel
Date: 08/25/07 6:53
Chapter: A Story

I like this a lot because it makes the reader Snape and you almost feel bad for Draco.

Reviewer: Merlynne
Date: 08/24/07 23:27
Chapter: A Story

I love the style, the way the story sort of meanders, and the use of the present tense. You characterize Draco brilliantly, and still keep true to Lucius' character as well. The characterization of Snape is also beautifully done. I enjoyed every second of this story, how practical Snape was, how annoying little Draco was. Great work. I'm very glad I read this.

Reviewer: Rhetor
Date: 08/24/07 9:25
Chapter: A Story

Very lovely. The second-person voice is not easy to pull off (I know from experience), but this was exactly the right place to use it. Also the very difficult balancing of Snape's disdain, his fear, his dignity and even (gasp!) a little compassion, was handled beautifully. The voicing is superb. Well done. ~Ken

Reviewer: gen_potter
Date: 08/23/07 2:30
Chapter: A Story

Sweet. Malfoy was a spoilt little brat even then.:)

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 08/22/07 12:56
Chapter: A Story

Very daring to put it in second person, but I'm glad you did, the effect was marvellous.

Reviewer: Stella Lovegood
Date: 08/18/07 19:57
Chapter: A Story

I love this.
A lot.
It's extremely well written, and the point of view is very unique.
Well done.

Reviewer: The_Seer
Date: 08/18/07 15:03
Chapter: A Story

A really charming, inventive, well-written little story. I like it a lot.

Reviewer: LaylaEarth
Date: 08/17/07 11:35
Chapter: A Story

Nice story! I like the POV!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 08/15/07 20:58
Chapter: A Story

i loved this story it was great

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 08/14/07 21:20
Chapter: A Story

Cool story. I like the concept of Severus being Draco's godfather.

Reviewer: serpent_child
Date: 08/13/07 18:08
Chapter: A Story

i really like this outlook on draco malfoy. too often are there stories submitted that basically divide the world of harry potter into 'good people and death eaters'. i, personally, am very intrested in the early life of many characters who are shown as one-dimensional--in draco's case, cruel and cunning, pureley malfoy; not showing us a side of him that he hides, perhaps a side that enjoys baking--such as umbridge or skeeter, the malfoys, or even someone like cormac mclaggen, who isnt necicarily 'bad'.
i really enjoyed this. thank you.

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 08/13/07 9:16
Chapter: A Story

Cute and very, very realistic, if I might add. I really liked it, because I've never read a thing like this on Mugglenet before. Good job! Quite worthy of Kudos, I'll say!
Great job!

Reviewer: chocklit
Date: 08/11/07 23:22
Chapter: A Story

wow! this is such a good story! I loved the ending. There was something to it that made it stand out and shine, if only for a little bit.

Reviewer: coming_home_soon22
Date: 08/08/07 22:45
Chapter: A Story

Great story! Not at all what I expected from a story about Snape putting a little Draco to bed. Very, very well written, I know the "you" tense can be hard to write in. I loved the last two lines at the end.

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