The ending is sweet and nice but there really isn't a plot to this story
OK Fanfic. The idea is OK...writing is hurried and the scenes do not have smooth transitions.
very enjoyable. hate to be picky, but it should be "___ and I (not me and bill/ron) are having a baby." i was glad to see molly was still interfering in bill's and fleur's lives.
cool, ive always wanted them to get together, but whats gonna happen about dean. I like the bit about the argument about which school fleur and bills kid would go to
That was even better than the first chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!
I think it was really good. Some parts were unexpected, though.
Loved it! loved the dynamic between harry and ginny!
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! IT MADE ME CRY! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! IN A GOOD WAY! ! !! ! ! ! ! !
Author's Response: Wow! I didn't think it have quite that effect upon people, but I'm glad you liked it. I have two more chapters to put up for this story, but I am currently working on another post-Hogwarts story. Thanks for the review! -Bryant
omg this is totally irrelavent well not totalla but anyways i still havent added on to the sequel, which i guess is good cause people would be so confused if they read the sequel before the original is finished lol.
Author's Response: I know... I need to finish this one before you make the sequel... but now that I think about it, it could be a good idea. See, you could say in your summary or something that you need to read One Last Chance, before you read this. It would be a good solicitation for my story! lol
Hey. This looks very good! I'm so excited you got it through. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! You were so helpful with this story.
First review yeah! Very good. Glad they got together. Will she break off the engagement now? 10+/10
Author's Response: Yes, she does... but not in the next chapter. You'll find out!!!
Wow. It's nice to read stories that are fast but have an interesting plotline, post-Hogwarts but have a bit of romance (my favorite kind, personally), and have a genuinely happy mood. Your story meets all my highest expectations so far. 10+/10.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!! I'm glad you liked it. It does move kinda fast, but It slows down in later chapters.
ok this is pay back! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I <3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 it!
Author's Response: Wow. I'm glad you liked it.