Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/17/06 18:08
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
Hahaha. For once, I liked Peter. He couldn't have started out bad. He's just a rat.
Reviewer: Little_hoole3333
Date: 06/29/06 17:08
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
I wonder what it would be like to get stuck down a drainpipe.........(Not that I'm actually going to try!)
Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 06/09/06 19:59
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
This story was quite amusing. I liked that you included Peter in the story- so many people chose to ignore him completely. Although I don't see his friends as the type to constantly remind him of being fat. Granted, he was stuck in the pipe, but I felt that it was uncalled for. But really the idea of him hiding in a sink and getting stuck was quite unique.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I don't really see the Marauders as the type to remind Peter of his weight problem either, but well . . . it WAS kinda the reason he was stuck in the pipe in the first place, and Sirius isn't precisely the mosttactful person in the world, either. But, yeah, thanks! Cheers! --- Loki
Reviewer: keysers1girl
Date: 04/28/06 13:25
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
Cute story......I don't think it would have taken the others that long to figure it out, though. I think maybe there should have been more? It was good and enjoyable, though. I really liked it.
Reviewer: Dory_the_Fishie
Date: 03/18/06 12:59
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
Oh, that was great. Hilarious, and so Marauders-ish. I love your characterization of them. It's so perfect, exactly how I picture them. I love reading about their various pranks, and even though this wasn't really a prank, it was still great. Another great Marauders adventure. Honestly, Peter stuck in a drainpipe? Wonderful. Excellent job. 10/10
Reviewer: phoenix_fire
Date: 03/02/05 20:04
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
Oh, so funny, I love humorous one-shots, 'specially yours.
Reviewer: muggle4ever
Date: 03/02/05 12:32
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
thats sooo funny.
Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 02/15/05 11:02
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
Ha ha ha! Very good - wonderful idea for a one-shot. Well done!
Reviewer: Masked One
Date: 01/26/05 4:45
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
*laughs* Very nice. And look at the marauders going about their day to day business---how to get into as much trouble as possible, and get out of it again without getting caught. I found it funny, and I thought the image of the three boys standing around staring down the drain after their best friend was funny. I also thought the ideas they came up with to get him out were quite interesting and very realistic--overall, it was both humorous and believable, a hard combination to achieve.
Reviewer: Catana Snape
Date: 01/15/05 14:38
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
I know a better way to get him oout *Turns into a cat and eats wormtail* there now no dead lily/james!
Reviewer: Avian020391
Date: 01/04/05 7:22
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
Well, you write alright, but the main point of the fic has been defeated; there isn't much humour in it. I guess this would do better under the 'general' section.
Reviewer: Hedwigs Queen
Date: 12/17/04 14:47
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
Oh that was sooo cool
Reviewer: Vocalion
Date: 11/21/04 16:13
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
A wormtail story: the forgotten Marauder. A very well-developed and well-written one shot featuring an overlooked character. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Yes! Peter was a Marauder! He does need to stop getting looked over. Thanks for the flattering review (and the correction email), btw. Cheers!
Reviewer: Scarlet Salamander
Date: 11/21/04 9:44
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
A fat rat... hey, that rhymes! Anyway, I loved the fic.
Reviewer: pretty_lights
Date: 11/20/04 11:37
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
You balanced description and dialogue very well, it's a hard balance to achieve. Good idea, and plausible, too. Good writing style. And my review is more than one word long. *clapclapclap*
Author's Response: (Blushes) Thanks. What more can I say? Just thanks very much for the review! Cheers!
Reviewer: Bella
Date: 11/07/04 14:00
Chapter: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes
lol
Author's Response: As you're reviewer number one, yes, I have to thank you (and do so wholeheartedly-- I assume you like it?), butwill future reviewers PLEASE go into a little more detail? THis isn't very helpful. Thanks! Cheers!
