Great part cont soon!
Great Chapther!! Cont soon!
No! there aren't any more chapters to read. =( You better update soon...I loved reading this fic so far!
I am always skeptical about stories when writers disregard books. But this has come along very nicely and gives a different perspective to things. Love that Lupin has come back as the dark arts teacher, but Krum come on "Icky Icky", let Ron win out in the end.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're skeptical! So am I. But this was written before whispers of the plot of HBP arose. Or at least until they met my ears. But I'm glad you approve, and hope you will keep reading! The entire story is finished, and, uh, you might just be pleased with one of the final ... well, you'll just have to keep reading!
Great part!! Continue soon i want to see if Harry meets that girl again!!
this is turning into a great story keep it up
Great chapter. Wonder whats this "business". Well please Continue soon!!!
Interesting chapther!! I wonder who will save Hermoine!!
Interesting reaction from Remus. I think it was a mistake of Molly's [following Remus]. It will split the Order up if something doesn't change soon.
They keep putting off Hermione. Why? Why? Something bad is bound to happen that way.
Petunia and Harry had (one of?) their first real conversation(s). Yeah!
I wonder what Fred and George did. They seem a little bit more mature/worried/aware not that they're older. I'm glad they are in the picture.
I love the start--very suspenseful. I also like the Hermione thing. It may not be as canon as it could be, but you're not JK Rowling. I'll definatly continue reading!
great so far! hurry with the updates, I want to know what hapens! I really like the less sullen harry.
Good start... I'm definitely intrigued. I love both Lupin and Tonks, so I'm happy to see them around so early in the story. ;) I'll be watching for updates!
You are allowed to put in author notes. As for your story, it's a promising start.It hasn't got a lot of the action in it, though. But that's coming up in the later chapters, right? Great start.