great story i cant wait to read more. oh and i loved the chapter with the valentines dance. :]
Great chapter!
I wonder why Kit was al supertious??
Cont soon!
I can't wait to see what happens next !!
Wow!! I loved it so far! You have a great writing style and can capture the mood of anything. There were some small grammar errors and such, but that was to be expected. Being a writer myself, I once wrote 'Progressor' instead of 'Professor'. Anyway, have you got an estimate of how many chapters there are to be in the entire fic? I know it's just a matter of getting them accepted, but it'd still be helpful to know, as a devoted reader.
The plot is very imaginative; I never would've thought of anything quite so illustrious (and I mean that in a good way, of course)! I appreciated the Queen appearance as well. :-P Thanks for a fantastic story and piles of enjoyment!
~Rhadamanthia
Great chapter!!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Cont soon!!
great. but dose ron and hermione get to gether or dose he tell her how he fills for her? i love the story
shrim5191
Great chapter!!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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Yea!!!! (jumps around in excitement) Hermione is coming back. Tra lalalala
Great chapter!
Cont soon!!
I wonder what will happen in the hall and i wonder when Krum will be back!!
I can't wait until the next chapter!!
Cool. I'm glad Hermione is coming back. I hope everything is ok with Lupin. Keep the great writing coming
more more more.
i love the story, i love you( just kidding!)
jacki
shrim5191
Great chapter!
I hope Krum finds Hermione and she is fine and safe!!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Brilliant writing!
Cont soon!!
Hello?? What happen to Hermione are we ever going to get a conclusion out of that???
Author's Response: You will get a conclusion! Don't worry, it's coming asap.
I kinda like the story so far. Sounds a little complicated, but sounds good.
Going to the next chapter.
Great chapter!!
I loved they weddig vows they were really romantic!!
I can't wait to see what happens and i am so happy that Ron did not drink the alcohol!!
Brilliant writing!
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I love this chapter! Are you planning on having Harry be with Ginny toward the end of the story? or is it strickly going to be Harry and Kit??
Just curious. I almost feel bad for Ginny since she really does love Harry.
Author's Response: At the risk of giving away the story, no, he won't be with Ginny. In fact, I sort of neglected her. Heck, I'm still neglecting her, 20 chapters into the sequel (yes, there's going to be more!). But don't be sad for her, she has ... other things going on.
bloody good update soon
Great chapter!!
Cont soon!
I can't wait to read more!!
Really good writing!
