I know this is your story but slow down a little please. There's so much more that could have gone into the first meeting of the DA. Good though. Thanks.
I think Kit is Hermione in disguise. At least I'm hoping. That would mean she is safe. The way Kit is teasing Ron just screams Hermione.....
A little bit of fluff....but still nice. Are we possibly setting up for an additional storyline? Yay.
Wow. Headquarters is going to have to be magically enlarged pretty soon. I'm a bit confused though. In your story were Neville's parents still normal? Were they killed at home or do you mean they were killed in St Mungos?
A little convoluted but interesting. Nice to see old friends and meet new people. Jealous much Ron? Ron should remember that all prophesies do not come to fruition. Nice chapter even if it was short.
Good one. Mrs weasley was being very sneaky. LOL. Keep the suspense going.
I see someone is thinking just like me. I hope you have something good up your storyline sleeve regarding Hermione. Nice job.
Love it. Don't care too much for Draco threatening Hermione. It almost seems that it would take someone a lot tougher than Malfoy to get over on Hermione. Just saying. I love the twins. You even gave Dudley a little bit of a personality, "cool."
how old is Charlie, i wonder.
I can't stop reading!!!
Getting pretty good...
i'm anxious, in a good way, about this story
i'm Anxious, in a good way, about this story
So, Hermione spiked the punch then, eh? Oh, that would have been a good time for Ron to tell her what has going on with him. Well, he will have to tell her sooner or later but maybe later is better than sooner for now.
so are ron and hermione togeather now?
Ok, I just have to say a few things.
1. Ron's birthday is on the 1st of March not the 22 of February.
2. It's Apparition not Apparation
Nothing big it just bugged me a little. Now I can't wait to see what happens with Ron and Hermione. I also want to know what happens with Harry and Kit. We haven't seen much of Ginny latley either. At least I was right about Hermione being Krum's true love but Ron being hers. (I'm sure Remus and Tonks are talking now-a-days too.... right?)
Author's Response: Thank you for correcting me. I know I had a few mistakes but ... well, no one is perfect, right? You've been right all along. And you'll keep being right! Thank you so much for your reviews and input and EVERYTHING! It's people like you who keep me writing.
NO HERMIONE THIS IS A HUGE MISTAKE! YOU DON'T LOVE VICKY! YOU LOVE RON! No! This isn't right! Ron! Don't do it! You're stronger than that!
Finally! Yes! What's up with Kit? She is being a bit of a jealous prat...
That's better. Ron still needs to tell her how he feels though.