Reviewer: Divess
Date: 11/01/11 22:24
Chapter: The DA

I know this is your story but slow down a little please. There's so much more that could have gone into the first meeting of the DA. Good though. Thanks.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 11/01/11 22:16
Chapter: Nice Right Hook

I think Kit is Hermione in disguise. At least I'm hoping. That would mean she is safe. The way Kit is teasing Ron just screams Hermione.....

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 11/01/11 22:06
Chapter: All Aboard!

A little bit of fluff....but still nice. Are we possibly setting up for an additional storyline? Yay.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 11/01/11 21:58
Chapter: Surprises

Wow. Headquarters is going to have to be magically enlarged pretty soon. I'm a bit confused though. In your story were Neville's parents still normal? Were they killed at home or do you mean they were killed in St Mungos?

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 11/01/11 21:45
Chapter: Another Prophesy?

A little convoluted but interesting. Nice to see old friends and meet new people. Jealous much Ron? Ron should remember that all prophesies do not come to fruition. Nice chapter even if it was short.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 11/01/11 21:36
Chapter: Portraits and Walks

Good one. Mrs weasley was being very sneaky. LOL. Keep the suspense going.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 11/01/11 21:25
Chapter: Number Twelve Again

I see someone is thinking just like me. I hope you have something good up your storyline sleeve regarding Hermione. Nice job.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 11/01/11 21:20
Chapter: The Visit

Love it. Don't care too much for Draco threatening Hermione. It almost seems that it would take someone a lot tougher than Malfoy to get over on Hermione. Just saying. I love the twins. You even gave Dudley a little bit of a personality, "cool."

Reviewer: Ravenclaw Goddess
Date: 09/09/07 16:40
Chapter: All Aboard!

how old is Charlie, i wonder.

Reviewer: Ravenclaw Goddess
Date: 09/09/07 0:33
Chapter: Surprises

I can't stop reading!!!

Reviewer: Ravenclaw Goddess
Date: 09/09/07 0:26
Chapter: Another Prophesy?

Getting pretty good...

Reviewer: Ravenclaw Goddess
Date: 09/09/07 0:15
Chapter: Portraits and Walks

Interesting...

Reviewer: Ravenclaw Goddess
Date: 09/09/07 0:00
Chapter: Number Twelve Again

i'm anxious, in a good way, about this story

Reviewer: Ravenclaw Goddess
Date: 09/08/07 23:59
Chapter: Number Twelve Again

i'm Anxious, in a good way, about this story

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 08/18/07 13:30
Chapter: Birthdays & Weasleys

So, Hermione spiked the punch then, eh? Oh, that would have been a good time for Ron to tell her what has going on with him. Well, he will have to tell her sooner or later but maybe later is better than sooner for now.

Reviewer: shrim5191
Date: 08/18/07 11:46
Chapter: Birthdays & Weasleys

so are ron and hermione togeather now?

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/26/07 2:18
Chapter: Caught

Ok, I just have to say a few things.
1. Ron's birthday is on the 1st of March not the 22 of February.
2. It's Apparition not Apparation
Nothing big it just bugged me a little. Now I can't wait to see what happens with Ron and Hermione. I also want to know what happens with Harry and Kit. We haven't seen much of Ginny latley either. At least I was right about Hermione being Krum's true love but Ron being hers. (I'm sure Remus and Tonks are talking now-a-days too.... right?)

Author's Response: Thank you for correcting me. I know I had a few mistakes but ... well, no one is perfect, right? You've been right all along. And you'll keep being right! Thank you so much for your reviews and input and EVERYTHING! It's people like you who keep me writing.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/26/07 1:57
Chapter: Heart Break Day

NO HERMIONE THIS IS A HUGE MISTAKE! YOU DON'T LOVE VICKY! YOU LOVE RON! No! This isn't right! Ron! Don't do it! You're stronger than that!

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/26/07 1:40
Chapter: Friday the Thirteenth

Finally! Yes! What's up with Kit? She is being a bit of a jealous prat...

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/26/07 1:33
Chapter: Thursday

That's better. Ron still needs to tell her how he feels though.

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