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Reviews For The hidden legacy

Name: jj21 (Signed) · Date: 05/23/06 19:39 · For: The hidden legacy
It was nice. I liked it

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it!


Name: Malika Potter (Signed) · Date: 03/21/06 21:01 · For: The hidden legacy
This is good, but I have a suggestion. If you could write a chapter two, explaining what the horcruxes (according to Regulus) are, that would be really cool.

Author's Response: When I'll have time to write more, I surely will explain it, don't you worry, but I made this a one-shot (the part saying "completed: no" is quite wrong) because I have exams now... The suite I'm planning would be quite long, so first I'll write it all and then I'll begin posting, so that you don't have to wait too much between chapters. Anyway, thanks a lot for your review! Suggestions are always welcome.


Name: ginny_babe92 (Anonymous) · Date: 03/09/06 22:17 · For: The hidden legacy
Yay! First reviewer! Okay, there were lots of little spelling errors, like you spelt read - red. And you spelt Marauder maraunder three times lol. Also, you used which a few times when who/whom would have worked better. And the last paragraph of the letter isn't in italics; just so you know. Other than that, great! I like the idea but I'm surprised that If Sirius found all this out he wouldn't have told someone. I know it explains that, but still... and is this post-Hogwarts? It sounds like in his seventh year, but perhaps it's after that or you have it so he doesn't attend school in his last year. Other than all my criticism (sorry, it's a bad habit of mine) I think this is great! I'm not sure if you should add more to it, it really depends what you're going to add. It's nice like this, so I don't mind if you do or don't add more. Great!

Author's Response: Hello Ginny_babe, thanks a lot for your review, it'r really very very useful, I'll be more careful next time! I really appreciated it. Anyway, it's post-Hogwart because it's after the sixt year and he won't attend the sevent, you were right! I'd like to write more, but right now I'm very busy with university exams, so I won't have a lot of time! Thanks again!


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