Reviewer: Leukhendian
Date: 07/07/06 10:33
Chapter: Summons

*stares at "Access denied"*
Why won't it go awaaaaaay? I wanna read... *hrmpf*
Are you gonna put up a quote thing on 10? Or do I have to wait for a read... *smirks*

Author's Response: All right, all right, I'll go find a suggestive quote and post it ASAP! :D

Reviewer: Leukhendian
Date: 07/07/06 7:13
Chapter: Summons

Hahah. I'm currently reading (well, this is a little break-up) Illusions of Spring, and the sentence "those two are notorious" made me crack up so bad. Not that the lone sentence itself is hillarious, lol, but I got reminded of this clip-video I saw on YouTube.
You've got to see it, it's brilliant!

Yes, it's with Snape, that's why I put the note here. *smirks* Might give some inspiration for this story, in whatever way, lol.

*Notice that the claps in the music match the glimps of current clips. Brilliant! And very, very funny... :D

Author's Response: Yay Duran Duran/Snape combo! Yes, the claps/clip match was fab. I give it a thumb's up! :D

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 07/06/06 17:51
Chapter: Observations

I had to read that book for Survey Lit. Poor Lennie. But I think George was right to shoot him. *sniffle* The movies pretty hood too. It's a good poem.

Author's Response: I like Burns better than Steinbeck. Maybe it's the Scots burr I hear when I read 'The best laid plans of mice and men gang aft aglay'. :D (Or it could be Steinbeck described scenery too much for my taste...and he was depressing, lol)

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 07/06/06 13:42
Chapter: Lures

Intresting, I like that Severus knows that he is rather socially inept. I hope he gets his info & he decides not to share it.

Author's Response: Whoa, deja-review! I think knowing he's socially-challenged makes him even more stiff and snarky, which I can't help but find endearing. :D

Reviewer: Leukhendian
Date: 07/06/06 11:46
Chapter: Summons

*applaudes enthusiastically*
Yay! It's in cueue! ^_^

Nyaha, and I take the honours once again. THIS time I shall do so... hmm...
*loud noise is heard from Leuky's brain*
AHA! I will do a tango! Daaaadrum, dadiiidadum, dadadoooodadum...
*Leuky dances weird tango*

Muwahahahahahahahahah! xD

Can't wait to see what that Charms lesson is about? *smirks* Should be interesting!

Author's Response: Let's just say Snape takes a non-verbal summoning charm to a whole new level. ^_~

Reviewer: Leukhendian
Date: 07/06/06 7:50
Chapter: Lures

Do you have a timeline for this one as well? I haven't been able to notice since I only started reading this when you were at chapter 7... or 8... not really sure.
By timeline I mean like in Promise of a Spring Moon you say you post Fridays (though reading is delayed because of the MNFF system where they check every chap of every story).

*glares out the window at sound of cars making annoying noise*
Stop the honking already! I'm trying to review here!

Oh, lesson? As in school lessons such as Potions? Or another kind of lesson? As in, perhaps, "He has to be taught a lesson!" School lessons, right?

Author's Response: Thank you for mentioning posting! I've got to put 6 of Spring Moon into the queue! :D I try to update this story at least once a week too, and since the queue is clear, I'll put ch 10 in asap- I can't wait to get reactions to how Snape uses his lesson in Charms, lol!

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 07/05/06 20:38
Chapter: Lures

Intresting, I like that Severus knows that he is rather socially inept. I hope he gets his info & he decides not to share it.

Author's Response: He is not a 'people person', that's for sure! :D You'll find out what he does with the information at the house party. Not too many chapters away!

Reviewer: Leukhendian
Date: 07/05/06 18:01
Chapter: Lures

Lol, look at that! My fingers are mixing words. Pything... *snicker snicker* Was trying to say "Python thing".
... And "I might" was supposed to be "it might". But, not that I want to fill a whole review with correcting my errors, just pointing out that I'm not that dim. It's just 01:01 in the "morning" now, that's all.

Author's Response: 1AM and I'm wide awake writing, couldn't help going Ana Nalik (if I spelt that right, she sings the song 'Breathe') Errors, smerrors, I think you're brilliant! ^_^

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 07/05/06 17:59
Chapter: Classes

S o many big words! It's summer holiday, I don't want to have to think too much! lol keep up the good work. I like the nonenti-tree! I laugh for about 5 mins!

Author's Response: I see Snape as the kind of person who is formal in speech, trying hard to be dignified and respected...and then losing it with his temper, lol. I'm glad you liked the tree. Have you ever heard of Piers Anthony's Xanth series? He's very pun-ny. :D

Reviewer: Leukhendian
Date: 07/05/06 17:57
Chapter: Lures

Summons, eh?
*thinks of possibilities*
Nope, you got me on that one, I can't figure out what kinda summoning could take place. A bunch of ideas, but can't say which is more likely. I have a feeeeling that I might have something to do with Voldy, though!
*pokes author for more juicy hints*

Hmm, I think I'm gonna agree with the crowd. Kettleburn rules. ^_^ Hahah, funny one on the Monty Pything. I can actually see that somewhere.
When you first introduced Kettleburn, I admit to thinking, "Oh Gods no, not another one who writes boring and lengthy lessons! xP" I've encountered a looot of those, both here and in Quizilla HP fanfics. But actually, I don't find them lengthy and definitely not boring! Lol.
For some reason, I get the picture of something uncle-ish about him - a different uncle than a Dumbledore or Dung uncle. A whole new HP uncle! Hahahah...

Author's Response: Like the "Uncle" in A Series of Unfortunate Events? :D I do see Kettleburn as a bit Billy Connelly. : ) I can't imagine lessons for anything other than entertaining readers (instructional? LOL!) The summons is the result of another lesson in which Snape learns to be careful what you 'ask' for, heehee!

Reviewer: Leukhendian
Date: 07/05/06 14:45
Chapter: Lures

Dum dum DUUUUUUUUUUUM! And so the sly Slythy placed a little cliffy, lol. It would seem Snape has hidden desires, hihih. Wonder where that'll take him in the end! After all, he's bound to use any means to achieve his ends, eh?

Do you know the difference between Canis Lupis and Canis Lupus? A brief research seemed to give the idea that Lupis - the Grey Wolf - is a descendant from the prehistoric Lupus, but I am far from sure if my info is correct, seeing as it didn't exactly say that anywhere.
However, a site told me that "related to extant timber wolves of today, Canis Lupus roamed the Pleistocene wooded areas and hunted in packs". Wouldn't that give the impression my guessing is correct?

Author's Response: I'm still trying to imagine a pack in "Pleistocene wooded areas" and seeing the wolves from Narnia instead, lol. I'd vote for you in a debate, though!

To give a hint what happens next chap- the title is 'Summons' :D.

Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 07/05/06 14:08
Chapter: Lures

Ohh....I wonder what's he's planning? I absolutely L.O.V.E. Professor Kettleburn! He is sooo funny!^^*chuckles* Now update soon because I love this story as much as Professor Kettleburn!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you love Kettleburn- the name seemed like a Monty Python-ish character, which I find endearing, lol. I'm crazy about your reviews so of course I'll try to update soon! ^_^

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 07/05/06 14:01
Chapter: Lures

Haha. Another great chapter. I really wonder what Sev's plan is. Hm....I love Prof Kettleburn. he's great. Muahaha. I think Sev is really starting to like Eris....I wonder what he thinks about the cat prints...hmm...I liked the Malfoy bit too, I could definetly see him in my mind. Great work!

Author's Response: The best laid plans of mice and Let's just say Severus gets more than he bargains for. ^_~ Yay you like Kettleburn...and Lucius! :D

Reviewer: Leukhendian
Date: 07/05/06 6:46
Chapter: Lures

Auw, how sweet. Well, hope to make your day sparkle again later. ^_~
That little preview of chapter 9 is... interesting, lol.

Wow, I can actually HEAR my male dog growling for attention. I have two Cairn Terriers, Muffin - the male - is turning 6 soon and Cookie - the female - is turning 5 in August.
Remember their months by petnames such as Julius and Augusta. *ahem* Actual names used in Denmark, so, easier than if I lived in... somewhere else... *snort*

But anyways, yeah, Cookie is having that little special period that makes Muffin crazy. Especially because she doesn't pay him any attention, resulting in a sort of protest of I'm-so-hot-look-at-me-pleeeeease growling... or... howling... something, at least.
Funny thing about these dogs. They have different voices to communicate. If I ignore Muffin, for example, he will snort/sneeze at me, hahahah.

...I'm rambling about my dogs. :-P

Author's Response: Thank you, I try to drum up interest as best I can. :D Snape isn't the most popular of characters, lol, and needs all the promoting he can get, poor snarky sweetie. Cairn Terriers are so cute! Poor Muffin, Cookie's lost that loving feeling, heh. I think males of all species snort/sneeze for attention, though, hee.

Reviewer: Leukhendian
Date: 07/04/06 18:49
Chapter: Lures

At least in this story I can make sure I take first place, and this time... hmm... I shall do so with a sneer of my cleverness for figuring that out...
Ah, let's add an evil chuckle there too, methinks.
*chuckles evilly*
Aaaaaaah, that's the stuff...

Can't wait to read chapter 9!
*runs around in frantic circles*
When did you put it up? Just trying to figure how long I can estimate the wait, not pressuring poor admins... ^_^

Not at all...

Author's Response: I'm off to see fireworks, but you've made my evening even more sparkling with your review! I just put 9 into the queue, so probably a few days wait, unless the mods are working like house elves...good thing they aren't really elves, we'd have them validating all day every day, lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: GinnyWantToBe
Date: 07/01/06 0:22
Chapter: Observations

yes i did

Author's Response: Short and sweet- thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the chap! ^_^

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 06/30/06 18:36
Chapter: Ghosts

Very nice. I like how you made Eris a very....what's the word?....beleiveabel cat. Very nice. I do beleive you have mentioned your love of Nightmare. I haven't seen either, so don't hate me! Hehe. Oh, I also liked the part where Eris tucked her brother in. That was sweet. I also don't like Clive. Icky icky him.

Author's Response: I wanted Eris to be a believable cat, so thank you so much for saying that! The Nightmare Before Christmas is better than Corpse Bride (and shows on cable during holidays, lol) so if you get a chance, I think you'd like it. Chris Sarandon (Prince Humperdink from the Princess Bride) is the voice of Jack, and he has more life and charisma as a skeleton than Victor (a depressed sounding Johnny Depp, lol) did 'alive', and the plot and humor is so much better, not that I'm biased or anything. :D

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 06/30/06 6:15
Chapter: Ghosts

Eris & Severus I like it. Actually I like the whole story & hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll do my level best to update every week. ^_^

Reviewer: brokenhearted
Date: 06/29/06 17:19
Chapter: Ghosts

Okay, I'm not a pervert. I knew Eris was a seventh year, I was just doused in with a cold case of disillusionment and thought since Eris and Dani were so alike that Eris took some potion to make her younger. You know, a way to sneak out of her house and take those animagi lessons or whatever. *shrugs* See how smart I am?

Author's Response: You had me worrying I'd made a typing error, heh. She didn't sneak out, she ran off for the summer. You'll find out in a later chap she went to Wales. Your idea would've been an interesting story line, so really, you were just so smart you thought up an alternate plot twist! :D

Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 06/29/06 15:08
Chapter: Ghosts

I liked this chapter. Now update soon. Sorry I'm not in the mood to put a long review. Maybe next time I'll put a very long review. But with me you never know.

Author's Response: On another site, they give a hit count along with the reviews, and the percentage of reviews to hits is depressingly small, so I am happy that you took the time to tell me you liked it, even if you weren't in the mood for a long review! Who knows, next chap I might be thrilled to bits, LOL. Thanks!

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