I think It's a mix between the flying monkeys and mojo jojo. It's rather scary. @.@
Author's Response: I'm sure....snicker.... Thanks for fighting off the evil monkey to come back and review! :D
I feel sad that I left a rather pathetic sized review compared to the person infront of me. *tear* Why most I feel inferior! J/K LOL. Gosh, I don't know what else to say now. uhh....banana? Idk...I just the word banana. BananabananabananaBees! Okay I should go now. I love this story! haha! Something relevant to the story! I knew I could do it. @.< *twitch* Oh no! Not the evil monkey of doooooom!!!! He has come to eat my banana! NOooooo!.......Oops, I think I've gone off track here. So, I'm going now. See yea Kerichi! *huggles*
Author's Response: Is the evil monkey of doom one of the flying monkeys from Wizard of Oz, or like mojo jojo from Power Puff Girls? :D I like reviews of all sizes and relevance, LOL, so thank you for yours! ^_^
I loved it. Especially the end. "Would you care to pick my socks?" I laughed at that. Really good and funny.
Author's Response: Thank you! I see him as having a dry, sardonic humour, when he's not cheesed off by Gryffindors, LOL
Oh, nice. I liked the whole foot thing. That made me laugh. Geez, I'm liking Snape more and more. It's so dangerous, I think. I don't know if J.K.R. would like me view of him to be so screwed, that I wish every female character would shove him into a closet to make-out. Oh, and I liked that you made him call her eyes sapphire. That's so un-Snape. Really. I'd never have seen him saying something so sentimental to a girl, but I always stretch my views to fit a Kerichi story.
Author's Response: He did that on purpose....He was having her on! He said her eyes put sapphires to shame, then said they resembled a potion...the Draught of Desire....That's why he laughed at her when she accused him of making it up. I refuse to believe Snape never, ever, laughs, even if it's short, and at someone's expense, LOL. So don't worry, he'll never go round praising her beauty in flowery terms *gag* and being Un-Snape.
Merlin forbid he be anything other than snarky and complicated! No stretching needed, just re-read that! :D
heheh....This is getting good. I can't wait till the next one is validated! ^^ I wonder how she's gonna answer that question? hmmmm....... Oh Yeah! Thanks for the email. ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! Since I clogged up the queue with a R/Hr chap I stubbornly tried to fix myself for weeks until I broke down and sent it to a beta (my excuse is I didn't get any mod emails, so I was guessing what was wrong...wrongly, lol)...anyway, I owed it to readers to email and apologise. I'll never do that again, believe me!
By the way, did you see that this story is part of a series now? If you'd like to review the 'series', I'd be even more grateful than I am now :D)
A cliffie!...it's been a few chaps since there's been one, so I guess you were do for one, lol.
I like Severus' snarky comments, but I'm still not to the point of thinking he's sexy. I guess I'm still getting my mind around it...Severus:Slytherin sex god...................
I liked the personal e-mail,especially since school has started :( and i don't have much time to check for updates. The MNFF e-mails don't ever come on time.
Author's Response: Anything for readers! ^_^ I know I've wished writers would email me. Maybe one day the site will have instant new chapter alerts, but until then, if you want an email, I'm happy to send it. Got to get you round to thinking Severus is sexy. Forget sex god- that's Draco, lol. Just sexy. :D
Yay! I love updates! Great cliffy!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am a former member of Cliffie-writers Anonymous. :D Had to go off the wagon, so to speak, because I enjoyed it way too much. :D
And second! And THIRD!
... okay I'm going to stop now ...
Author's Response: Having too many reviews is like being too pretty or rich...no such thing, lol. Besides, I get to thank you again....that's a good thing!
Oh my gosh! First review! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks for being the first to review. You rock! ^_^
Hey, this is brokenhearted... or Jane... in my favorite account. I usually write reviews in the other account and write stories in this one, but I can't figure out how to log off right now, so this will have to suffice.
Gosh! You make Snape so... so... sexy! How in the world? He repulses me, yet in your stories, I want to be Slytherin just so I can see him everyday. Although... I do like be Ravenclaw. How could I be anything else? I think too much. What house are you in?
Speaking of houses, Eris really shouldn't be a Slytherin. I find few Slytherin qualities in her. Besides, she's too... err... cool? to be Slytherin.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Eris uses any means to gain her ends, lol....that, and if the Sorting Hat gave her a choice between houses, she picked Slytherin, to be with her friends and family. I'm a Yank, so because Jo says no transfer students, I refuse to be categorized. Depends on my mood and the time of the month, lol. I think everyone could be in all of them, depending on circumstances. Thanks for the compliment about Snape. If you look through my eyes, he's sexy as hell. :D
this is blooody amazing its the bomb i never thought i would say this but you actually make me like slytherins and snape i especailly love eris/epis
write more soon
Author's Response: Thanks for the 'bloody amazing' review. You made my day, and I just put another chapter into the queue! ^_^
O_O Oh me Gods... I thought he'd turn her down coldly, and then he bloody snogs her and accept her offer? Holy...
I didn't expect that one bit. Humm, what if Tom is indeed after Eris as well??? I can't wait to find out! ^_^
Author's Response: You'll find out how Tom uses that potion in the next chap. As for Severus, he's not actually a human icicle, although he can freeze a girl easily enough with a glare, LOL.
Author's Response: Severus isn't the love-at-first-sight type, is he?....or even seventieth sight, heh. Maybe seventy times seven....:D
I've already finished it, but oh well. Haha. You've got a really big gap between the first scene and the second, if you want to know. haha. Wonderful like always, even though I jsut skimmed it. hehe.
Author's Response: Why that is, I haven't quite figured out, but thanks for telling me, and for the review! : )
Haha! I just wanted first review for this chapter, even though it's not validated yet :P. You see how big a fan I am of you? That reminds me. I was wondering... out of all the stories you are writting or you have written which is your favorite?
Author's Response: Wow, that reminds me of a pal who just asked which HP guy I find the sexiest! The answer is the same....when it comes to stories, or guys (only in the literary sense, because I'm a one-man-woman! :D) I honestly love the one I'm with! If I'm writing Snape, nobody compares or beats his story....until I write Sirius, and no one tops him...until I switch back to Remus....
I hope you think that's a good thing!
I'm torn between "Awwww" and "Ewwww," but I think "Awwww" wins, because the way you write Severus makes me like him as a character in a way that I never have before. Still don't like the idea of a girl running her hands through greasy hair, lol.
Author's Response: "Greasy" is the way Harry and the other, negatively biased, characters view Snape. I prefer to think he's got a little natural oil, not greasy, but silky and shiny, :D. If it helps, just think about thin, clever lips and ignore the hair, LOL.
LOL, I was listening to Dani California when I was reading this chapter and I had to laugh when I read Eris' cousin's name.
Author's Response: Red Hot Chilli Peppers and HP...interesting mix...LOL.
Besides, love tends to make blind, so I don't think Eris cares so much about any negatives about his looks. As long as his brains are excellent, they outdo possible negatives, if you ask me. ^_^
Author's Response: He's either your type, or not. :D Some women only like pretty boys, others have eclectic tastes. I think Snape's the kind of guy that a girl might find strangely attractive, then slowly find irresistable.
Yeah, who's to say he's really as disgusting as described in the books? That's how his enemies see him! Wouldn't it be shocking if they thought he was good-looking when they hate him? I can't think of it to work properly if Sirius added, in the middle of taunting, "By the way, you look good today!" LOL
Author's Response: It might work in a slash story, but Kerichi don't write that, lol. I do believe he's the kind of guy who has a snarky appeal to some and not to others. An acquired taste, heh.
Unhinged Severus! WooHoo go Eris! Great Chapter!
Author's Response: He needs someone to loosen up his buttons, doesn't he? :D