Reviewer: HStarRunner23
Date: 06/04/06 20:43
Chapter: Panicking

Wow... Oh, just... Wow! Um great great great great great chapter! I just loved it loved it loved! 10/10 for sure! Super job! Ladies and gentlemen, I can't believe here it is, a super great story! They kissed! Oh my they kissed! It's taken 9 chapters, but they pulled it off! I'm so proud! You should be proud its a great story! I'm trying to find constructive criticism, but there is none! There's your answer! I see no constructive criticism, except maybe one grammatical error. Maybe. Not for sure. But super awesome and I advise to keep me posted! Haha keep up the good work and I hope the next one gets posted soon! ~HStarRunner23

Reviewer: HStarRunner23
Date: 06/04/06 20:43
Chapter: Panicking

Wow... Oh, just... Wow! Um great great great great great chapter! I just loved it loved it loved! 10/10 for sure! Super job! Ladies and gentlemen, I can't believe here it is, a super great story! They kissed! Oh my they kissed! It's taken 9 chapters, but they pulled it off! I'm so proud! You should be proud its a great story! I'm trying to find constructive criticism, but there is none! There's your answer! I see no constructive criticism, except maybe one grammatical error. Maybe. Not for sure. But super awesome and I advise to keep me posted! Haha keep up the good work and I hope the next one gets posted soon! ~HStarRunner23

Author's Response: *blush* Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter so much. :D

Reviewer: silverstorm
Date: 06/04/06 12:22
Chapter: Panicking

Great chapter..... bring on the next soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. And next one is on the way :D

Reviewer: cedriclover
Date: 06/03/06 1:06
Chapter: Panicking

hope this gets accepted soon! =]

Reviewer: cedriclover
Date: 06/03/06 1:06
Chapter: Panicking

hope this gets accepted soon! =]

Author's Response: I hope so too :D

Reviewer: cedriclover
Date: 06/03/06 0:16
Chapter: Revelations

wowww. this is great=]

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: blackgem
Date: 05/23/06 6:37
Chapter: Revelations

Hello!

i just read your sotry and have fallen completely in love with it. I love what you have done with it so far and hope the you update soon as I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you like the story. I'll hope you like the rest as well.

Reviewer: primagirl89
Date: 05/22/06 22:42
Chapter: Revelations

I don't usually go Hermione and Charlie but I love this. I am a history fan and like all the little tibits you put in there, like Snape and the slave rebellion. After this, would you consider writing an American Revolution story with Hermione and possible Draco as a loyalist? Keep up the good work!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm very glad you like it, and I hope you like the rest as well. As for a Draco/Hermione story, why don't you write it yourself? A good plot bunny is always best handled by the one that got the bunny in the first place :D

Reviewer: HermioneTwin7
Date: 05/22/06 16:58
Chapter: Revelations

ooooooooooo, i cant wait for the next one to be written and validated!
please hurry!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm sorry It's been a while but I've updated now :D

Reviewer: HStarRunner23
Date: 05/22/06 15:54
Chapter: Revelations

How sad... Very well written, of course, but so very sad. I had hoped he would tell her before she found out. I hope he can explain it to her before she runs away from him. I'm very nervous now. Oh well... I'll have to wait. Very good chapter and I have no constructive criticism. Such a unique story is hard to find! Keep me posted! ~HStarRunner23

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you like the story so much. I've updated now, so hopefully it won't be too long.

Reviewer: sonal
Date: 05/22/06 6:21
Chapter: Revelations

this is getting really exciting. hermione's views n the circumstances r just too pefect for the story.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. Thank you.

Reviewer: Leahr
Date: 05/21/06 20:36
Chapter: Revelations

wow. really great story. I like the parallels between real Harry Potter and this story, like the Thomas family and Fred and Angelina Johnson. I hope Charles explains the truth soon!

Author's Response: Thanks :D I'm so glad you like the story.

Reviewer: sonal
Date: 05/20/06 3:45
Chapter: Changes

poor hermione, falling off like that n everyhting. i'm guessign this confusion is not goin to get cleared up very soon n some other things may happen meanwhile.. really what's gonna happen. waiting for ur update

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy the story :D

Reviewer: HermioneTwin7
Date: 05/18/06 20:46
Chapter: Changes

very good keep it up!


Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: HStarRunner23
Date: 05/18/06 15:21
Chapter: Changes

Oh gosh... Such a surprising chapter! He almost told her and even I got annoyed when she wouldn't listen and insisted on seeing the fields. At least she hasn't seen the workers yet. Very well written and great story so far. I love it! ~HStarRunner23

Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm so glad you do.

Reviewer: sonal
Date: 05/14/06 3:05
Chapter: Turning Point

i luv ur factual descriptions wasnt charlie trying to tell hermione about da slaves when they were interrupted> update soon

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. And yes, Charlie was trying to tell her the truth when Lucius spoiled everything. Feel free to toss him over the balcony at any time *grin*

Reviewer: mewmint92
Date: 05/12/06 16:55
Chapter: First Impressions

very engaging so far. xD

Author's Response: Thank you. :D

Reviewer: HStarRunner23
Date: 05/11/06 16:39
Chapter: Turning Point

Okay, I thought I already submitted a review for this chapter.... I guess it got messed up. Well, what I wanted to tell you is this story is probably one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. It's fantastic and I think I'm hooked. This is an awesome story and I think I only found like one spelling error.... Ithink. But other than that it is really a superb story. If you changed the characters, you could probably get it published! (It's that good!) ~HStarRunner23

Author's Response: I'm so flattered. Thank you for saying such lovely things. I'm delighted that you like the story so much, and I just hope that you'll like the rest of it as well.

Reviewer: Stepherz8907
Date: 05/08/06 21:15
Chapter: Turning Point

i just want to let you know that this story has become one of my favorites to read. i think that it has to be one of my all time favorite fics and i would like to thank you for making this story as great as it is.
You have perfect characterization and i love how you blend the historical and make the story seem so new all at the same time
Good Job Keep up the Good Work!!!! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad to hear that, especially that you like my characterisation :D

Reviewer: happyreader
Date: 05/04/06 23:49
Chapter: Turning Point

I am really enjoying this story thank you


Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I'm glad you like it.

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