Reviewer: LustGarden
Date: 11/23/06 17:41
Chapter: Death of A Friend

wow Luna's dead. this was an awesome chapter. that was exactly like luna to have an exploding purple dark creature killing carrot. she was so badass.

Author's Response: Yeah, I really liked Luna, it just about killed me to kill her. :'( But I had to do it, I had to get rid of Neville and Luna somehow, but I didn't know how to without killing somebody off! Oh, well, she did go out in style. Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Lestat491
Date: 11/23/06 15:29
Chapter: Death of A Friend

excellent chapter!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!! I'll update as soon as I can; thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/23/06 15:18
Chapter: Death of A Friend

Oh. My. Gosh. That was so sad! Is that thought that Harry had a bit of foreshadowing as to the fate of our hero? With all that loss, I would guess that he would... Oh, well. Where is the rest of the Order? I mean, I understand them not going to Grimmauld Place again, but where on earth are they?! The trio and Malfoy need help, so I hope they come into the fic soon! Now that my senseless rambling is finished, I enjoyed the chapter and (ha ha!) did NOT cry this time! I can't wait for the next one.
~Moony : ]

Author's Response: Uh... I don't think I'll answer that first question. :S The Order will be coming into the picture real soon, at least some of them will be... maybe within the next couple chapters? I think I'll only be bringing in a couple, though, maybe Tonks and Lupin. ...Good thing you didn't cry, this chapter was a lot less painful than the Ginny chapters, which were a sort of emotional experiment for me. Thank you for the review, the next chappie should be up soon!!!

Reviewer: GreenMan1966
Date: 11/20/06 21:26
Chapter: Death of A Friend

OMG! Hurry up and validate so I can read!!

Author's Response: Hehehehe.

Reviewer: cellodir
Date: 11/19/06 16:14
Chapter: The Fourth Curse

KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: OKAY!!!!!!! :P Thanks!

Reviewer: LustGarden
Date: 11/19/06 9:00
Chapter: The Fourth Curse

This is awesome. This is one of the best stories ive read on this site so far. i hope the next chapter gets here soon! :D

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'll take that as a huge compliment since there are hundreds of other stories that I think are better than mine... What am I doing?! If you like it, I'm happy! Thanks for the review! Chapter 20: Death of A Friend should be up soon!!!

Reviewer: FordPrefectZaphod
Date: 11/17/06 12:20
Chapter: Breaking Into Hogwarts

I have recently got more into this fic again and I am enjoying it quite at bit. It is quite well written in my opinion. A couple of little quibbley points. I found Hermione laughing at Ron's tumble a bit OOC when sneaking into Hogwarts. She would be more serious in a tense moment like this. Secondly, Hagrid would not "switch on a light" in his hut as there is no electricity at Hogwarts. He would more likely, light a lamp. It just jumped out at me as an error.

Lastly, I think you write Hagrid quite well so don't insult yourself. I found him quite in character. Cheers and good luck.

Ford

Author's Response: Oh, yeahhhhh, he DOESN'T have electricity, does he? Oops. :P Thanks for pointing that out, I would neevr have realized that. I'm glad you think Hagrid's in character (I'm still not too sure but oh well... if readers think it's ok, I guess it's good enough). And thanks for the review, Ford!!! This story's over half done by now, can you believe it? How time does fly... *snif* The next chapter should be up soon! Thanks again!!! :)

Reviewer: DaddiesGrl1919
Date: 11/13/06 20:32
Chapter: The Fourth Curse

Yeah... that cliffie really didn't improve my mood... that was incredibly cruel.

Author's Response: Sorry! Don't worry, though, Chapter 20 should be up very soon, to put you out of yor suspenseful misery. :P Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/12/06 19:17
Chapter: The Fourth Curse

Forgot something: it's number 12, not four. Sorry, thought you may want to know :)
~Moony

Author's Response: OMG, I actually said 12? *is mortified* Jeez, I was getting that and Privet Drive confused writing it, but I had thought I did it right... Thank you so much, I'll change it right away!!

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/12/06 19:10
Chapter: The Fourth Curse

You have officially made me cry twice: Ginny's funeral and now. Poor Snape (yeah I said that!) Great job, I'm hooked; but evil cliffie! Please update soon!
~Moony

Author's Response: Snape's death made you cry?! Hmm... Seems I've found somebody who actually cries easier than me! Wow! But hey, thanks for the review-- Chapter 20 should be finished soon!!!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 11/12/06 14:03
Chapter: The Fourth Curse

Snape is my favorite charceter and I "killed" him and so did you. How depressing. Oh well. I really like it! Good chapter!
MJ

Author's Response: Snape is your FAVORITE CHARACTER?! Holy applesauce! Then why's your name about Sirius? Okay, don't answer that. Have you really even killed Snape? I think Malfoy was lying... Anyways! Sorry I'm depressing... This next chapter is going to be HORRIBLE. I hate myself and what I put these characters through... *sniff* Thanks for the review, MJ!

Reviewer: raveralways
Date: 11/12/06 9:03
Chapter: The Fourth Curse

I really love your writing. This is one of my favorite "book 7 theory" stories. Please keep doing what you're doing.
By the way, poor Snape, and I really feel bad for Harry and Draco now. Just hoping that they know where they are going to run.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try to keep doing what I'm doing! ;) I'm having a lot of fun writing this story, so the updates should never really cease until the last spell has been cast! (oh so poetic!) No, Harry and Draco really have no idea where they're going, and that issue is going to come up in the next chapter, but anyway I'm rambling sooo much, so... Thanks for the review!!! :D

Reviewer: Lestat491
Date: 11/09/06 19:04
Chapter: The Truth

This is an amazing story, I keep thinking your J.K. Rowling giving us hints about what would happen in the next book. Please keep writing!!!!!!!!! This is on my favorites list

Author's Response: I wish I was JKR, but I'm sorry to tell you that I'm not. *sighhh* Wouldn't that just be fantastic? I mean if somebody on here really WAS Jo, and giving us the book without us even knowing it... o_O Well, anyways, thanks for the review!!! The next chapter should be up really soon!!!

Reviewer: dogluvr
Date: 11/07/06 15:13
Chapter: The Truth

i love it!! its really good. i actaully feel sorry for sevy. hhhmmmm, b4, i didnt like him, but now, with the idea of him being good, i might think he's ok...

Author's Response: Ohmigosh, you actually think he's OKAY now?! (I still don't like him even though I do feel a bit sorry for him!) Well, happy to think my writing can actually change people's minds, that means I'm doing something right! :P But anyway, thanks for the review, dogluvr! The next chapter should be done soon!!!

Reviewer: jimmyxnew
Date: 11/05/06 6:06
Chapter: The Truth

Amazing, you are a great writer, put up the next Chapter soon please XD

Author's Response: Thank you! :P Glad you think so. The next chapter should be done and in queue sometime this week. Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: LustGarden
Date: 10/31/06 18:43
Chapter: The Truth

dude this is an excellent story. i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! Always nice to win new fans LoL! The next chapter should be up in a few days! Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: _Dumbledores Girl_
Date: 10/23/06 18:43
Chapter: Prologue

hey, I've read some of ur other fics, and I really like u as an author. I was about to read this one, but can u just tell me what ships aregoing on, I couldn't tell from the summary. i basically just read the canon ships (ie Ron/hermione and harry/ginny) so i wanted to know what was shipping b4 i read this. thanks!

Author's Response: I'm completely canon! I hate all noncanon ships (except for Draco/Hermione which I just got into and could never force myself to actually WRITE!), so this story ships mostly Ron/Hermione, with a dash of Harry/Ginny in the first few chapters. Nothing else. Okay? Please R&R!!!

Reviewer: _Dumbledores Girl_
Date: 10/23/06 18:43
Chapter: Prologue

hey, I've read some of ur other fics, and I really like u as an author. I was about to read this one, but can u just tell me what ships aregoing on, I couldn't tell from the summary. i basically just read the canon ships (ie Ron/hermione and harry/ginny) so i wanted to know what was shipping b4 i read this. thanks!

Author's Response: I'm completely canon! I hate all noncanon ships (except for Draco/Hermione which I just got into and could never force myself to actually WRITE!), so this story ships mostly Ron/Hermione, with a dash of Harry/Ginny in the first few chapters. Nothing else. Okay? Please R&R!!!

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley Potter
Date: 10/23/06 16:12
Chapter: The Truth

Ooh, that's a really gripping cliffie. This chappie is done really well! There was a lot of information which the readers can obtain from this chapter. Please update soon. My school's starting on 31st October and studying here is becoming a challenge because of the sound of crackers on the occasion of Diwali. Personally, I like the new dresses and henna part of Diwali (you can ignore the henna part of it if you want, but new dresses are a must on Diwali). The crackers are nice when they are peaceful and beautiful rather than noisy and useless. Hey, but the best festival is Vijaya Dashami, where you have to keep all your books for prayer for an entire day. You are strictly NOT supposed to study on that day and then sit and study a page from each book on the next day. ;)

Author's Response: Oh, so your school hasn't really started officially yet? Lucky! Hey, well have fun! I'm glad that with all that's goig on, you still have time to R&R for me! ;) Thank you, Ginny!! The next chapter should be up really soon!!!

Reviewer: arwenevensatr
Date: 10/23/06 15:12
Chapter: The Truth

Truly heart breaking. Since this is au, I really wished it could end up differently for Severus. Great story telling. Update soon.

Author's Response: Sad... I wish it could've ended up differently too, but even if this part won't be in Book 7, I do think that Snape will be redeemed and then die at the hands of Death Eaters... whoops, did I say that? Ahem... slip of the tongue or, should I say, slip of the keyboard? :) Thank you for the review, I'm glad you like it! The next chapter is being written right now!!!

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