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Name: Hpfanofmarauders (Anonymous) · Date: 04/24/06 8:36 · For: Grief
Awww!! I loved Hermione's determination to stick by her friend overcomes her fears, and I also loved Mr. Weasley and Harry. I think the two men who loved Ginny most...her father and slightly-more-than-boyfriend, needed to find some consolation with each other. Great cliffie ending as well that "Two days...it's okay" was brilliant. Anyway, can't wait for chapter 6!!!!!

Author's Response: Oooh, "slightly-more-than-boyfriend"! I like that! Anyways... I actually didn't really like the ending, but if you like it, I guess I'll keep it that way! Chapter 6 might be awhile in coming, I had to rewrite 5 twice, but I'll do my best! Thanks for the review!!!

Name: HorsesandPotter (Anonymous) · Date: 04/24/06 6:19 · For: Grief

Author's Response: Sorry! I didn't like killing her off either. But I do have a couple very good reasons, which you'll see near the end. Thanks for the review!

Name: Hpfanofmarauders (Anonymous) · Date: 04/14/06 10:45 · For: Tragic Mortality
Oh...on a completely unrelated note...are you able to submit new chapters? Because I'm not.

Author's Response: I haven't tried yet, not on the *new* site anyway... The first time I came on I was like OMG WHAT DID THEY DO TO IT??? I'm going to try today or tomorrow, I'll let you know if it works for me!

Author's Response: ...Yes, I have submitted a new chapter. Are you sure you can't?

Name: Hpfanofmarauders (Anonymous) · Date: 04/14/06 10:43 · For: Tragic Mortality

Author's Response: I'm so sorry, I didn't want to make anybody cry!!! When I wrote it tho I hated myself because I knew there'd be some people out there who did cry :'(... I actually submitted #5 once but it didn't get in, so I'm rewriting it now... I'll get it here as soon as I can! Thanks for the review!

Name: Hpfanofmarauders (Anonymous) · Date: 04/14/06 10:39 · For: The Weasleys' Mark
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Ok, I'm done. Short but good. Very good. I laughed imagining Harry hitchiking. Anyway...yes!
P.S.> I really like this story...I added it to my favourites!

Author's Response: Wow! Adding it to your faves is really cool, thanks! (A couple of your stories are actually on my faves too! ^_^) I liked the hitchhiking too!!! Thanks for the review!

Name: Hpfanofmarauders (Anonymous) · Date: 04/14/06 10:39 · For: The Weasleys' Mark
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Ok, I'm done. Short but good. Very good. I laughed imagining Harry hitchiking. Anyway...yes!
P.S.> I really like this story...I added it to my favourites!

Author's Response: Wow! Adding it to your faves is really cool, thanks! (A couple of your stories are actually on my faves too! ^_^) I liked the hitchhiking too!!! Thanks for the review!

Name: Hpfanofmarauders (Anonymous) · Date: 04/14/06 10:36 · For: Wormtail's Mission
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! He's going to kill the Weasley's after the wedding!!!! At Godric's Hollow, where his parents were killed. IRONY!!!!! NOOOOOOO! You're a very good writer, I just have one suggestion: don't be afraid to use strong adjectives and verbs. For example: "I don't ask Wormtail, I tell" could be "I don't ask Wormtail, I order (or I command)" Anyway, good chappie, 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!!! Abd thanks for the suggestion, I'll try it... I actually did it that way for the simplicity, so that it sounds a bit more powerful... Anyways, thanks again! Hope you like the rest of the story!

Name: ermine the one (Anonymous) · Date: 04/05/06 14:14 · For: Tragic Mortality
*big huge gasp* Ginny ... dead? Whoa, not completely unexpected but you have nerve! Just watch out for the readers knocking down your door with pitchforks! Ok, this chapter is definitely the best one yet and I saw no problems with it.

Ginny's death seemed so right and I'm sure that it will link into the rest of the fic somehow. I would start complaining about you killing off the only Weasley girl, but that would be hippocritical considering I end up killing off half of my characters in my fics ...

Well done, and as I've said before: Keep up the EXCELLENT work :)

~Ermine the One

Author's Response: Yeah, right now I'm hiding from the mean scary Weasley fans under my bed ;) OMG theyre knocking down the door! HELPPPP... Lol, thanks for the review!!!

Name: ermine the one (Anonymous) · Date: 04/05/06 14:06 · For: The Weasleys' Mark
Ok, me again, reviewing for Chapter 3 though. I'll get the unpleasent stuff over first.

"The letter had only told Harry that the Weasleys couldn’t get him to the Burrow for Bill and Fleur’s wedding, and that Apparition or hitchhiking were the only solutions for Harry’s transportation problem." -- I'm sorry, but that wouldn't happen. I know that it was probably the only way you could get Harry to see the Burrow on fire and such, but in the days where Voldemort is strong and Death Eaters are out searching for him someone WOULD be able to pick Harry up. Hitch-hiking could put him straight in the arms of a Death Eater, and by walking he could get attacked.

Apart from that, it was excellent, and as many people have said in reviews before me you have great talent. I'm interested to know who's been attacked ... I have my suspscions as to who it may have been ... Harry would be devistated if she died ...

~Ermine the One

Author's Response: Hmmm, yeah, didn't catch that about the hitch-hiking... And you've got the right idea about the attack...:) Thanks for the compliment and the review!

Name: ermine the one (Anonymous) · Date: 04/05/06 13:57 · For: Wormtail's Mission
Hmm ... ok, Chapter 1 was great 10/10 without a doubt, although I didn't think Chapter 2 quite matched it. I know you said that you enjoy writing Voldemort, but I still must pick out a few things:

Firstly, he seemed a bit OOC in some places. Mostly: 'SAVE ME, HARRY, SAVE ME!'" ... that would have been very good and effective had you not put it in uppercase! That gives me the impression that Voldemort is shouting, and we know that he does not do that often.

You made Voldemort yell far too much, and made it seem as though he was unable to control his temper. That may hold true when he is confrunting someone who he is afriad of (Dumbledore for example) although I can't imagine him yelling so much at Wormtail ... he would see it as a waste of breath. This may be just my personal opinion, but I imagine Voldemort would speak with a cold and exhasperated voice to his Death Eaters, especially Wormtail.

Although, while we mention Wormtail, he was perfectly in character. So, apart from Voldemort's exagerated temper, it was a good chapter. Keep it up :)

~Ermine the One

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I like people to criticize my writing, it helps me write better next time. Looking back, I can see what you mean about Voldemort, he did seem a little... uncontrolled. Sorry if he was too OOC-ish! (Wormtail's actualy very easy, just put in lots of cringing and he's perfect!) Hard at work writing, the next chapter should be up soon! Thanks for the review!

Name: Pottergirl (Signed) · Date: 04/02/06 18:47 · For: Tragic Mortality
Ginny, dead? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!! *Hits ground, sobbing* HOW COULD YOU!!! WHY!!! She was too young!! She and Harry had a future together! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?????????? WAAAHHHAAAAA!!!!!! The Death list so far: James, Lily, Cedric, Sirius, Dumbledore and now Ginny Why must all the cool people die?!?!?!?!? 10/10 UPDATE!!!!

Author's Response: CONTROL YOURSELF! Believe me, lots more people are gonna die. Besides it's not my fault that all the others died, I wouldn'ta killed Sirius off, thats JKR's fault!!! ANYWAY. I'm almost done chappie 5, I'll be updating soon as I can! Thanks for the review?...

Name: HorsesandPotter (Anonymous) · Date: 04/02/06 8:16 · For: Tragic Mortality
WHY DID YOU KILL OFF GINNY????????? Great chapter though!

Author's Response: I killed off Ginny because... well, I dont really have a reason that I can tell you now, but I did it for a good reason, and you'll see why later on! Thanks for the review!

Name: Crecia Potter (Signed) · Date: 03/31/06 16:20 · For: Tragic Mortality
*is speechless* I can't believe Ginny died. *starts sobbing her head off* THough I have to admit that this was a really awsome chapter. *waaaaaa* Man I really need to control my emotions here...But yeah. brilliant chapter. can't wait for the next one :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! I actually couldn't believe it either, when the idea came into my head I was like "what? No way!" but it's turning out really good. Thanks for the review! Stay tuned for more excitement...!!!

Name: Crecia Potter (Signed) · Date: 03/28/06 9:49 · For: The Weasleys' Mark
I think this is brilliant! I can't wait for you to write more so that I can see what happens to who. The way you write it is just beautiful. You make me want to know what happens, but I dread to know as well. Good job! *10*

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! My writing being called beautiful is something new, I love flattery!! ^_^ The next chapter should be up soon if it's validated, lets keep our fingers crossed! Thanks SO much for the review!!!

Name: Pottergirl (Signed) · Date: 03/23/06 19:45 · For: The Weasleys' Mark
DON'T U DARE KILL OFF THE WEASLEY FAMILY!!!!!! no really- don't! Great start, you've got talent! So, what happens to them? Bill? Fleur? Charlie? Fred? George? Ron? Hermione? Ginny? Mr& Mrs Weasley? *Dan? (*He's not in this one, right?) 10/10

Author's Response: Why should I listen to you??? lol I can kill off whoever I want! MUA-HA-HA!!! Thank you for the compliment and the review! You're going to see what happened to the Weasleys if I ever finish chapter 4, it's turning out really hard to write... I should be sending it in within a couple days though, so hold on! (Oh, and if you like the Weasleys too much, you won't like the next chapter...) OMG, Im giving way too much info away! Thanks for the review!!!

Name: Hpfanofmarauders (Anonymous) · Date: 03/16/06 16:58 · For: Wormtail's Mission
This is pretty good, I think you could add some more angst, but other than that it was awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks alot! It's going to start getting darker when Harry comes around-- even in the next chapter it's a bit more. thanks for the review!!!

Name: TTOOMMYY11 (Signed) · Date: 03/12/06 15:55 · For: Prologue
:ooooo Ooooooo good story :D There are some errors in it but that didn't stop me from reading!! :D! Btw.....you should take out that one of the Weasley's die...because there is only one major weasley...So you might want to take that out :/ But it's good so far!!! Where is Harry..??? Why is the book called Harry Potter and the Seventh Soul? :O! Or can I know.... oooooo...Haha..Good story! 10/10

Author's Response: thanx!!! Harry's coming, you'll see him soon. after all, it is his book ^_^... & there isnt just one major Weasley *hint hint* but I'll take that out anyways, too big of a clue... Thanks for the tip and the review!

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