Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 05/25/06 19:51
Chapter: The Weasleys' Mark

I am shaking all over! this is soooo good. I bet that many people have said this, but its kindda true, your writting style is a lot like jkr. But, yours is a bit more relaxed and in a bit more detail. This is a GREAT chapter! I'm going to print off your story,{if it's okay with you} and read it at one of my Harry Potter Parties. I think that you are doing really well in the english and writting area. You could, {if you wanted to} keep writing and be able to come VERY far. Keep it up! And don't let the hard bumbs and scares from us reviewers get you down! Your doing great!!! :+P

Author's Response: OMG nobody has ever told me I write like JKR!!! Wow, that's like the best compliment I could get! :) *grins sappily at computer screen* I don't care if you print it out, that's what it's for, so people can listen to it and read it. And I try my best, I actually want to be a writer when I get out of school. Thanks for the review, I'm SOOO glad you like it so much!

Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 05/25/06 19:44
Chapter: Wormtail's Mission

Dude! This is creepy! But, I LOVE it!!! I can totally imagine this in the seventh book! *sighes an "wow" kind of sigh* This ROCKS!!!!!!

Author's Response: Whoa, if you can imagine it as Book 7, it must not be too bad, eh? ^_^ Thank you, thank you, thank you for the review!!!

Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 05/25/06 16:55
Chapter: Prologue

Wow! GREAT!

Author's Response: Thanks!! Hope you like the rest of the story!

Reviewer: Amarie
Date: 05/24/06 22:34
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

I like this chapter. The old lady was interesting to say the least. I am curious to see what becomes of what she said. I'm glad that Harry's friends are back with him and that it wasn't Death Eaters. It was my understanding that you couldn't apperate anywhere on the Hogwarts grounds. Why couldn't Harry have just used the secret tunnel in Honeydukes? I really like your writing style, you have a good combination of description, dialogue and thoughts. The reader is able to get a sense of what's going on inside a person, but it doesn't slow time down too much with every detailed thing. I wonder how much Dumbledore will be able to tell them. Isn't Lily's blood Petunia? I can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm glad this chapter wasn't as sad as the last. Good job and good luck.


Author's Response: "Isn't Lily's blood Petunia?" Ooh, you're SO close, I wish I could tell you everything but I can't until the next two chapters are accepted!!! The old lady's message has lots of clues as to what's coming next. And I know, I thought about the secret tunnels and stuff after I'd already finished the chapters, and there's a lot I would have to change. A glitch in my otherwise perfect plan! Argh! :D Thanks for the review, the next chappie's in the queue!

Reviewer: Amarie
Date: 05/24/06 22:34
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

I like this chapter. The old lady was interesting to say the least. I am curious to see what becomes of what she said. I'm glad that Harry's friends are back with him and that it wasn't Death Eaters. It was my understanding that you couldn't apperate anywhere on the Hogwarts grounds. Why couldn't Harry have just used the secret tunnel in Honeydukes? I really like your writing style, you have a good combination of description, dialogue and thoughts. The reader is able to get a sense of what's going on inside a person, but it doesn't slow time down too much with every detailed thing. I wonder how much Dumbledore will be able to tell them. Isn't Lily's blood Petunia? I can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm glad this chapter wasn't as sad as the last. Good job and good luck.
Reading on...

Author's Response: "Isn't Lily's blood Petunia?" Ooh, you're SO close, I wish I could tell you everything but I can't until the next two chapters are accepted!!! The old lady's message has lots of clues as to what's coming next. And I know, I thought about the secret tunnels and stuff after I'd already finished the chapters, and there's a lot I would have to change. A glitch in my otherwise perfect plan! Argh! :D Thanks for the review, the next chappie's in the queue!

Reviewer: Amarie
Date: 05/24/06 22:14
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

Wow! I didn't think I could cry more than I did for the last two chapters but I was wrong. You did a great job once again. I liked the diary, it sounded like Ginny. The Funeral...well, I'm not sure what to say...It was really sad...really realistic...I wish Harry would let his friends come with him but I know why he doesn't. Things are going to be hard. I'm not sure Harry can take much more death and destruction, I'm not sure what I expect from the next chapter. I just hope it's not quite as sad as this one, but in war, things just happen. You have a great way of capturing characters and evoking emotion in your readers. Good job and good luck.
Reading on...

Author's Response: I'm just making everybody cry, aren't I? I almost made myself cry writing it. *sniff* Thanks for the review, hopefully the rest wn't be as sad...

Reviewer: Amarie
Date: 05/24/06 21:42
Chapter: Grief

You do a very good job at capturing what it's life to grieve for a loved one. The confusion, the tumult of emotions, the shock, pretending to be calm when inside you're screaming, the helplessness of it all, etc. I think everyone's reactions are very realistic. It will take a while to heal. I hope Harry learns to understand that his friends are coming with him and not bother them about their decision. He just lived throught the best example about how no one is safe anywhere, so Ron and Hermione joining him won't be a risk. Anyway, i'm rambling. Looking forward to what comes next even though I have a feeling it'll be sad. Good job and good luck.
Reading on...

Author's Response: Yeah, no one's ever going to be safe again till Voldemort is dead. I'm glad you thought the emotions were right, I wasn't really sure in the beginning. Thanks for the review, and I hope you like the rest of the story!

Reviewer: Amarie
Date: 05/24/06 21:30
Chapter: Tragic Mortality

OMG!
That's really, really, really sad!
Most stories don't kill her off and I can see why.
I think you got Harry's character down really well. Harry the hero. I wouldn't expect anything else when Ginny's life is on the line. Ginny's still Ginny, even in her last moments. This is going to be really hard on Harry. I hope his resolve doesn't firm up to the point where he does something stupid, but now he's really going to hate Voldemort. I hope he can remember love in the end. I'm really curious to see how this evolves. Good job and good luck.
Reading on...

Author's Response: :'( *sorry... I didn't want to kill her but I had to... I hate myself... WAH!*

Reviewer: Amarie
Date: 05/24/06 21:19
Chapter: The Weasleys' Mark

Wow! that certainly wasn't what I'd expected! I never thought that Harry would have transportation difficulties and have to go cross-country and I definately never thought that bad stuff would happen this soon. I guess Wormtail did know where he was going. I hope things aren't too horrible. I'm glad that I'm reading this now b/c i don't have to wait to find out what happens next! Good job and good luck.
Reading on...

Author's Response: Wormtail's not THAT stupid, you know! ^_^ The cross-country thing seemed to get a lot of people riled up, tho, so I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Amarie
Date: 05/24/06 21:12
Chapter: Wormtail's Mission

Good chapter. I always like seeing what's going on with Voldemort and the Death Eaters. It looks like Harry and his crew will see some action soon, hopefully it won't be too deadly. I like how you write in Voldemort's mood swings, very fitting, and Wormtail is his usual whimpering self. I'm looking foweard to the next chapter. Good job and good luck.
Reading on...

Author's Response: "...hopefully it won't be too deadly" Muahahaha, if only you knew!!! Thanks for the review!!! (Wow, I rhymed! :))

Reviewer: Amarie
Date: 05/24/06 20:31
Chapter: Prologue

I like the beginning. It's a very unique point of view, from the snake. It already creates suspense, wondering how much Voldemort knows. He's already a step ahead of Harry. I like how it answered the horcrux question, that's nice for the reader to know, that Dumbledore's guess was correct. I like the story so far and I'm looking forward to what's coming next. Good job and good luck.
Reading on...

Author's Response: Yes, I wanted to let the reader know about the Nagini-Horcrux thing, and I wasn't quite sure how to do that except this way... It happened to the snake, so who better to tell it than the snake? Anyway, thanks for the review, I hope you like the rest of the story!

Reviewer: ronlover7117
Date: 05/15/06 15:32
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

its great plzzz update soon

Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can, I think I've told this to a million people already, but Chapter 8 is almost finished! Thanks for the review!!!!

Reviewer: MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd
Date: 05/14/06 19:11
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

very nice update


Author's Response: Thank you!!! Another chappie should be coming soon, so stay tuned!!!

Reviewer: Silvygreen
Date: 05/14/06 16:41
Chapter: The Weasleys' Mark

i'm sorry, but hitchiking? U do remember who Harry is to the wizarding world? I'm sorry about. Don't mean to sound harsh, just Harry hitchhiking is a funny concept. ANyhow, good fic.

Author's Response: Yeah, lots of people have reacted to "Hitchhike Harry" that same way. I wonder why? *Pretends to be clueless* Anyways, thanks for the review, the next chappie should be coming soon!

Reviewer: Ginny785
Date: 05/14/06 15:40
Chapter: Tragic Mortality

why did ginny have to die???????!!!!!!!!!!!
you had better make up for it.

Author's Response: Sorry I killed her off, but it was COMPLETELY and ABSOLUTELY NECESSARY. :) Well not really, I didn't have to make her die, but I do have my reasons... I'll try to make up for it, you let me know if I do!

Reviewer: Bono_Melody_luvr
Date: 05/14/06 13:16
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

OMG! Great job! Post more ASAP please ^_^

Author's Response: I'm typing, I'm typing, I'm typing!!! Thanks for the review, I'll update fast as I can!

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley Potter
Date: 05/14/06 5:06
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

I really liked your story uptil now, and I have even added it to my favourites! Well, please update soon and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I'm sorry I killed off your (apparently) favorite character. Thanks for the review, when someone says they put the story on their faves, that's a really big compliment. The next chapter's coming soon!!!!

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 05/14/06 0:18
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

Update or I'll kill you. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: AAAGH, please don't kill me!!!!! I'm updating, I'm updating, YEESH!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 05/13/06 20:12
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

That was SOOO sad @ Ginny's funeral, he goes up there, cried and says he loves her. I was sobbing at the end of that one! And WHY did you have to close Hogwarts, Harry's home!? 10/10

Author's Response: I seem to be making everyone cry. Hmmm. Oh well, I guess that means I'm doing something right! And I didn't want teachers and classes and stuff getting in the way, that's (partly) why I closed down the school... But thanks for the review, Chapter 8 should be finished really soon!!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 05/13/06 20:08
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

Oh, man, I hope they make it!! 10/10 UPDATE!!!

Author's Response: So do I!!! I'll update as soon as I can, the next chapter is almost done!

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