Reviewer: _Just_Me_
Date: 08/25/06 15:52
Chapter: Rowena's Box

"OUCH!!!!!!!!! That was not a nice ending! I love this story! "Says the crazy old lady, who just happends to be a teen. :P "I am noto going to live to see next birthday after I read this whole story. It will be such a good ending and stuff. I love it!"

Author's Response: No, it's not nice, and... well... (*whispers* just between you and me, the ending might not be so nice either. The deaths aren't over yet...) Ooooh. Spooky. Hehehe. I love scaring readers. :P Glad you like it, and thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 08/23/06 20:24
Chapter: Breakout

*sniff* I miss Ginny, too. *turns to author* WHY DID U HAVE TO KILL HER!? Harry and Ginny were ment 4 each other!!

“Don’t forget me, Harry, will you? Please... whatever happens, don’t forget...”

“I won’t,” Harry had promised. “I’ll never forget you, Ginny. I’ll remember you forever, I promise...”

He’d promised. He’d told Ginny, beautiful, sweet Ginny... a lie. He hadn’t wanted to remember, and so had pulled away from the memories that caused him so much pain. They hurt. So he had put Ginny in a box, pushing her away in the deepest, darkest corner of his mind where he rarely went and would never have to go. Every time the memories leaked out, he was there, stuffing them back in, refusing to look at them for longer than it took to shove them away again. He had broken his promise.

Oh, Ginny! Harry cried silently. I’ve tried, I’ve tried so hard to forget you! I’ve done all I could to leave you behind me. And I promised... I’m so sorry, Ginny!

He let the memories wash over him, slowly mending his shattered life. The way she could make everyone laugh without really trying... How her smile lit up her entire face... Her fiery temper... Everything that had made Ginny, Ginny... Oh, how he’d loved her! I miss you so much, Ginny...

Tears streamed down his face. Through the blurry curtain of his misery he could just make out Ron, looking thoroughly miserable. “I’m sorry, Harry,” he whispered. Moisture made his eyes seem unnaturally bright. “I know you... probably didn’t want this dragged up again, but I just felt... I miss her too.”

But you didn’t promise t remember, Harry wanted to say. You weren’t the one who got her out of the house, who saw her die in my arms! And I broke my promise... Oh, Ginny, please forgive me!

He cried for a while more, tears staining the street he semiconsciously walked through. Then, all at once, a sense of peace came over him, more than he’d felt in weeks. He knew everything would turn out alright, and, though he didn’t know where Ginny was, he felt he knew without a doubt that she had forgiven him. And with this reassuring knowledge, Harry let go of the guilt and regret that had always lingered with her memories. He let go, and gave his tired mind the peace it had lacked ever since Voldemort’s return, all those years ago. Everything was... fine.

They walked on in silence. Ron’s admission had helped them both, even though he hadn’t known it. “Thanks, Ron,” Harry said quietly.

Thank you, Ginny. Thank you so, so much...

I will remember.

*sob* 10/10



Author's Response: Hey, don't worry, other than the last couple chapters (which I've already written, determining Harry's fate *laughs evilly*) there won't be any more cryfests. Thanks for the review, though!!!

Reviewer: _Just_Me_
Date: 08/23/06 16:58
Chapter: Sirius Avenged

That was brilliant, what Hermione did! I really like it!

Author's Response: Hermione says: "Thank you, _Just_Me_! All in a day's work, really..." Author says: Thank you for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: _Just_Me_
Date: 08/23/06 16:57
Chapter: Unwelcome Visitors

ooooohhh! Creepy!
Harry gripped his wand tightly and lunged down the steps to face Sirius’s murderer.

Cow! That is a really tight ending! Love it!

Author's Response: Oooh, another different adjective describing my writing to add to my list! 'Creepy', that's a good one... I'm glad you love it!!!

Reviewer: _Just_Me_
Date: 08/23/06 16:55
Chapter: A Little Family History

Harry is mad for going back to Privet Drive! But, then again, a hero has to do what a hero has to do...

Author's Response: Hey, who else is going to do it? Thanks for the review, I'm sure I'll be hearing more from you... Keep reading!

Reviewer: _Just_Me_
Date: 08/23/06 16:54
Chapter: Breaking Into Hogwarts

muahhahaha! I bet I know who it is! Is it DD???? :0 I love it!

Author's Response: YES!!!!!!!!! A couple people guessed Snape, but you're right on it. (He's coming really soon, btw...) Thank you!

Reviewer: _Just_Me_
Date: 08/23/06 16:53
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

Wownow! Good twist! I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next! Love it!

Author's Response: You just can't tell me enough how much you love this, can you? Hehe. Scary old lady... To find what happens next, read on!

Reviewer: _Just_Me_
Date: 08/23/06 16:52
Chapter: Saying Goodbye

My eyes are swelled up with tears. I am not going to cry. I'm not going to cry. Can you hand me a tissue?
Really good, sad, horrible, good, great chapter!

Author's Response: Have a tissue. *hands whole box over* Sorry...

Reviewer: _Just_Me_
Date: 08/23/06 16:49
Chapter: Grief

You can’t – you mustn’t come with me.” Harry took a deep breath. “You’re all I have left... I can’t lose you, too. You and Ron, you could be next – you’ve got to stay here.” He automatically clutched at the small locket hanging around his neck. “I’ll look for Voldemort’s Horcruxes myself...”

“But Harry...”

“No Hermione,” Harry said with finality. “I have to do this... alone.”

In the real Seventh book, I really hope that this won't happen. Harry needs his friends to help him win! Oi! I have to finish reading! BTW: GREAT chapter!

Author's Response: Don't worry.... they're not gone for good. Keep reading!

Reviewer: _Just_Me_
Date: 08/23/06 16:47
Chapter: Tragic Mortality

*almost is crying* That was beautifuly {can't spell a word right now. Mind is still freaked out on what happened.} sad and romantic! Love it!

Author's Response: People seem to cry a lot reading this chapter. I wonder why? *wonders with stupid look on face* I hated killing Ginny, but I had to. Sorry... but happy you like it so much anyway!

Reviewer: _Just_Me_
Date: 08/23/06 16:46
Chapter: The Weasleys' Mark

Cliffy! Great way to end the chapter!!! This is sooo on my favorites!

Author's Response: I LOVE cliffies! Thanks for adding me onto your favorites!!! :)

Reviewer: _Just_Me_
Date: 08/23/06 16:45
Chapter: Wormtail's Mission

whooow! This is great! Very well written. A few errors, but its really, very Brilliant!

Author's Response: I think my writing's gotten better every chapter, so it should be even greater soon! Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: _Just_Me_
Date: 08/23/06 16:43
Chapter: Prologue

Great story! This chapter really reminded me of my version of the Seventh Harry Potter book. I started out with Nagini too. How ironic? Hehehehe! Two great minds do think a like!

Author's Response: Hey, everybody loves Nagini! :S Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: rubyphoenix42
Date: 08/23/06 13:16
Chapter: Breakout

you are a wonderful writer. the last part made me cry! *sniff* wow. i loved the scene with Brooks and the way you showed Ron's jealosy-very well done. Also, you make your charcters seem human-not plastic, and that makes the story great as well. great job.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it so much! I try to fill in my characters as much as possible, so I'm happy to know it's paid off. (Sorry for making you cry, though!) :) Thank you for the review!!!

Reviewer: googlebrain155
Date: 08/23/06 6:31
Chapter: The Famous Patient

OHNO!
pleez let his hand get better!!!
how is he sopposed 2 fight voldy with that?

Author's Response: Can't tell you!!! Hahaha, I LOVE putting my readers on mind trips. Don't worry, though, his hand will get better... slightly... hehehe.

Reviewer: xxKatrina
Date: 08/22/06 10:57
Chapter: The Famous Patient

OOOhh. I love this chapter. I feel like we waited to a year to read this, so glad your finally back. I love this story

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I'm back, too. LOL. A month, not a year, but hey, the updates should come in fast now, to make up for a month without them. The next chaptrer is in the queue already! Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: googlebrain155
Date: 08/20/06 10:50
Chapter: Rowena's Box

yay

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: googlebrain155
Date: 08/14/06 10:18
Chapter: Rowena's Box

is this EVER going to be updated? like, EVER?

Author's Response: YES, patience is a virtue, googlebrain!!! :) Just kidding, but I've got a lot of stuff going on right now, and I swear I'll let everyone know when the next chapter is sent in. It's almost done! I'm sorry!

Author's Response: Chapter 13 has been sent in the queue! Woo!

Reviewer: LOTRandHPnut
Date: 08/05/06 22:55
Chapter: Prologue

Thanks for the advice. My story is in the queue as we speak (well more like write, but that's just a frivolous technicality).

Author's Response: Hooray! Great job!!

Reviewer: LOTRandHPnut
Date: 08/04/06 13:45
Chapter: Prologue

I know this is kind of on the random side, but I was wondering how you submitt a story to the queue? I've been trying to figure that out for the few weeks I've been a member at this site and yeilded no results. By the way, great story!

Author's Response: OK, first when you go into your account, you go to a part that's called "Add New Story". Then you write all the stuff they ask you to, name and title and summary and the story and all that stuff. After you've finished, there's a thing on the bottom that says "Add Story"--click on that, and you'll get a page that tells you it's been added to the queue. Then wait a week or so, and you'll get an email saying it's either been accepted or denied. OK? ...And I'm glad you like my story. Hope I helped! Good luck!!!

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