Reviews For As the Ink Dries
Reviewer: DreamingOfRon
Date: 10/06/06 18:36
Chapter: P.S.

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Author's Response: sorry again. does it means you liked it? hope so. *hands a tissue*

Reviewer: DreamingOfRon
Date: 10/06/06 18:30
Chapter: It's Time

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Author's Response: sorry!

Reviewer: DreamingOfRon
Date: 10/06/06 18:27
Chapter: Welcoming the Newcomer

:-) lol

Author's Response: tnks!

Reviewer: amethyst_phoenix
Date: 10/05/06 15:00
Chapter: P.S.

Oh wow!!! That was just beautiful, you know?
I dunno why, I normally don't cry but I could feel my tears as I read the last chapter! Oh well, I hope JKR does not finish off poor Hermione in book7 or the other two for that matter

Brilliant.Great Job


Author's Response: I sincerely hope so too! But I can't help but be a little afraid when I think of the outcome of the last book. Thanks for the review, I love to hear from readers! I'm really happy to hear that you liked it!

Reviewer: happilyhufflepuff
Date: 10/04/06 20:29
Chapter: Home

Bertiebottaholic is my friend and she told me to read this, it is great,sad but great.i love it so far!

Author's Response: ooh! a reference! It's great that he/she (it's hard to know from the name) suggested this story. Hope you'll like it! Happy reading!

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/03/06 17:06
Chapter: P.S.

Dun dun dun!!! And the Verdict is... Wonderful, A perfect ten from me and my dog!!!!! Yes, thats right my dog, I read half of it to him, since he was sitting next to me when I read the letter. He fell asleep halfway through, but I think he enjoyed it! I'll write a longer review later, I gotta go eat dinner! Happy Writing!

Author's Response: thank you and thank you to your dog too! I suppose the verdict is that I'm not guilty of awful writing. yay!

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/03/06 16:46
Chapter: It's Time

OMG!!!! Beautiful!!! That was really good, the letter was wonderful. It was so sad, so heart felt. The perfect love letter, indescribable. I loved how he burnt Malfoy's wand with Hermione's. The part how she gave him the wand, even after death, expresses Hermione's sheer brilliance. The story has been everything a story should be up until now! But, of course with the final chapter comes the final judgement....

Author's Response: ooh! can't wait for the final verdict! thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/02/06 13:08
Chapter: Welcoming the Newcomer

That was funny. The Rita Skeeter part was obnoxious though. Not meaning you're obnoxious, but the atrocious woman (whatever that means). I love the Hungarian Horntail thing, you really like to connect to the books, don't you? I like how you brought Harry in throughout the entire chapter. Most authors never really get off the plot. It kind of gives you a break, you know?

Author's Response: that was the goal for this chapter; to give readers (and even me) a break from all the grieving and slightly depressing stuff. You must be reading chapter five right now so I'll wait around and answer your review when you're done! fingers crossed! Hope you'll like it!

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/02/06 12:49
Chapter: Getting Real

This is definately my favorite chapter so far.
I've come to a conclusion; your writing is indescribable. I love how you did the thing with how his arm was wrecked. It was really cool.
I love both of the letters. But what really hit me was the whole thing about the human brain because you described it perfectly. You've managed to keep everyone in character, which I know does get hard at times. You are definately one of my favorite authors on here.
Keep up the good writing! On to the next chapter!

Author's Response: ah! keeping characters true to themselves... you're right, not always easy. even a headache occasionnaly. That why I avoid people I'm not sure I understand enough to write them. Thanks for the first three reviews and I'll go answer the next one. see you above!

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/02/06 12:26
Chapter: Dear Stupid Ron

I liked the letter, it was really good. I'm not sure if this could really be called a romance fic at this point, but I like it none the less.

Author's Response: this is sooo funny! you're reviewing while I'm responding to your previous reviews. I just answered the one on the first chapter and your review about the fourth one just came in! that's the first time this is happening to me and I can't help but laugh! as for not really a romance fic, I'd say it's a different romance story. You don't need kisses and such to qualify as romance in my opinion.

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 10/02/06 12:15
Chapter: Home

Ok, I really liked that. You're an excellent writer, and the plot is great. In the beginning of the story, I almost forgot that it wasn't J.K.Rowling writing. You have the same style as she does. I can't wait to read the rest, so I will go read it, NOW!!! lol

Author's Response: keep on reading, there's five more chapters! see you at chapter 2!

Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 10/02/06 1:53
Chapter: P.S.

absolutely beautiful

Author's Response: short and sweet review! thank you!

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 10/01/06 18:39
Chapter: P.S.

I sobbed all the way through it.
It was really good.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it! thanks!

Reviewer: jillybeans
Date: 09/30/06 10:26
Chapter: P.S.

thats was so beautiful! When reading Hermione's last letter i almost cried...

Wow

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: hermyron
Date: 09/30/06 4:51
Chapter: Home

okay, so let me get this completely clear: IT WAS FABULOUS! the last letter that Hermione wrote to Ron was a masterpiece. Honestly, I think I'll have to treach my bf how to write letters to me by setting this as an example!!
Hey, tell you what, you have the potential to become a real writer, and i mean it. I won't say I cried while reading the fic, but I was at least deaf to the perfectly marvellous song by Britney Spears that was going on with it in the background while reading this! I am stunned, and I think this was one of the BEST and MOVING love story I have read in Ron/Hermione category, and for that, in any category.
I ask you not to make a sequel, cuz that'll only lessen the majestic beauty of the story. This is a classic and should be appreciated as it is, not by publishing a sequel. I have already copied the whole thing down on my pc, and i promise that I'll read it again and again until my eyes get weary...
Great job... lovely theme... congrats!!!!

Author's Response: wow! You said some really nice things in that review and if you really think them, it's making me happier than I can express. What I especially like if that you think it's worth reading twice. because sometimes, you read a great story and just forget about it, but apparently you'll like mine for more than the 20 minutes it takes to read it! *hugs her laptop* thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: smiley10792
Date: 09/28/06 18:46
Chapter: P.S.

This is a great story. Very sad, but very real. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 09/28/06 17:21
Chapter: P.S.

That was so powerful. My eyes are filling up with tears! I'm so sad. Amazing chapter! I love it! I'm so glad how this turned out! Good job! How many more chapters?

Author's Response: This was the last one, so no more chapters... thank you for the very nice review! I might write an epilogue or a short complementary story in some time but that remains to be decided. I'm really glad you liked the story, though!

Reviewer: secret_lover
Date: 09/27/06 23:43
Chapter: It's Time

You’re my alphabet. that has got be the most romantic thing i have ever heard!!! OH!!! that is now right up there with proposing with a Ring Pop!!!


Author's Response: lol that's funny. I've actually never even heard about that!

Reviewer: hpgirl_91
Date: 09/27/06 23:33
Chapter: P.S.

I was tearing up so badly in this chapter! It made me feel so much for Ron and was beautifully written. I loved the story, you did an amazing job!

Author's Response: Merci beaucoup!

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 09/27/06 22:37
Chapter: P.S.

other stories have made me tear up... but now I've been crying so much I can't even see the keyboard... I've never read anything so sad! This story was beautifully written, but it was the first story to make me really cry since ********** died in the HBP... you should put something in maybe... Hermione's POV, but the same story pretty much... that would be awesome, but probably sad, too... :) great story

Author's Response: From what I gatter from some reviewers, I should have bought a tissue compagny before I submitted this story. I could have made a galleon or two! That's just kidding, of course. As I already told, my goal was not to depress readers or have them cry their eyes out but just to show another angle of ron and hermions relashionship or lack of relationship. It is sad, I'm not denying it but I wanted to show some emotion and if a few reader cry then maybe it means I was able to touch them and to make them believe in the storyline. Hermione's point of view is not off the table at this point but I'm still pondering on the idea. Time will tell! Thank you, I really happy you like it.

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