I cried....thank you. a well written story.
Author's Response: Are you actualy thanking me for making you cry? lol I just have to thank you in return for the nice compliment. If you enjoyed it and if it took you to another place for half an hour, then my goal is met.
that was so sad!!! I'm crying (but in a good way)
that was an awesome story!
Author's Response: and that was an awesome review! thanks a lot!
oh my gosh ! you have no idea how much this story made me cry lol . I couldnt stop , its a right tear jerker ...well done ! lol xx
Author's Response: Sorry it made you cry so much, but thanks for the review. I really appreciate it!
Oh my gosh!!!!This is so good and so sweet!!! I'm crying absolutely buckets!!! I loved it!!!
Author's Response: I can't tell you how much such a nice review cheered me on a really cr*ppy day. I'm delighted that you liked it. I'm sorry it made you cry but, to me, it means that you related to the characters and what they were going through. Thanks and thanks again!
thats mest up i know it may sound childish but i really balled it was really sweet
Author's Response: If it makes you feel any better, you weren't the only one to shed a tear, according to some of my other reviews. Chapters 5 and 6 seemed to touch some people and had them reach for a tissue paper. I thank you for your review, I'm glad you thought it was sweet.
I was re-reading this fiction for the 100th time or so and I still am a HUGE fan of it. I remember when the first few chapters where still being posted and I was reviewing (with a different pen name/user name or A.K.A.: Hermionetonks), I just couldn't wait for the updates. But now it's over and I'm so sad. So I had to write my own Hr/R fiction and I did! All thanks to you! Thanks for writing this fiction and for my first Hr/R fiction! ~MJ
Author's Response: I don't know if you realize it but this is one of the very nicest thing you could tell me. The fact that you think that this story is worth reading twice (or more!) is such a nice thing to hear, because sometime you read a story and you think 'this is good' and you kind of just forget about it and never go back... So, thank you so so so much. *gives you a bone crushing hug* And I'll be sure to check your story once I get some free time. Thanks again!
What a lovely title. It drew me in right away.
I think that this is a very dramatic situation that you’ve set up, and I like it a lot. I did feel a bit detached reading this, however, so more emotion would be welcome. Try to make descriptions more personal and in-depth.
Knight of the Turnip Table
Author's Response: I'm always looking for ways to improve and I will certainly consider your advice once I get the time to write more stories. I hope you will go on with reading the other chapters and I thank you for your review. I appreciate comments so much!
This is my favorite chapter and probably my favorite it had me in tears at the end god i nev thought so much of how that was like me in a way i neva told the one i love i was in love wit her either and i neva got the chance she's not dead just living far away. So thanks 4 tha story it was great
Author's Response: I think we all, in a way, lived something similar. Who was courageous enough to tell EVERY person they loved how they were feeling? Not me. I'm glad you appreciated the story and thank you for your review. I love to hear what people think about it.
ussualy storys make feel sad and thats it but this one the whole time I was trying to stop myself from crying.
This is one of the best stories on here
Author's Response: Merci beaucoup! I didn't want to make people cry but I wanted them to connect to the characters enough to get an idea of how they were feeling... I'm glad you liked the story and I thank you for the very nice things you said in your review.
aww... that's a VERY sad story you got there.. *sniffs*
keep it up!
Author's Response: It is sad. I knew it when I wrote it and people also told me once it was up. Thank you very much for the review. I'm very glad you liked it!
That was a beautiful story, so sad yet wonderful all the same. Ithought i was going to cry. brilliant ending aswell.
Well done you are a very good writer.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's a little sad to see that you almost cried since you're named 'be_happy'... But I still appreciate your review very much. I'm about to start writing another story (just a few adjustments to the plotto do) and I hope I'll be able to do as well on this next one. Thanks again!
The last chapter was positively beautiful. I cried and I barely cry during stories. The last letter really felt like it came from Hermiones heart. You are a fabulous writer. I loved it every step of the way. Great Job.
Author's Response: That's such a nice review! Thank you so much! I tried to keep it as realistic as possible. I'm sorry that you cried but I really glad you liked it. Thanks again!
I really enjoyed your story although through tears. Thanks.
Author's Response: You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for leaving a review, I really appreciate it.
omg so sad....luved it though....
Author's Response: Thanks!
Wow. This fic is definately very different, but still very good. There were, of course, a few typos here and there, but they were easy enough to overlook, with the overwhelming sadness that Ron was feeling. I could empathize with him, and his great love for Hermione was made clear. The letters were great, and their placing was really clever. The last two (well, the last one by Hermione and the one by Ron) very nearly made me cry... That's how sad and how well-written they were! I really enjoyed reading this fic!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed it and thank you very much for taking the time to review. As for the typos, no matter how many times I re-read the chapters, I always forget some. Sorry! And that's why I always get my chapter checked by one (or more) beta before submitting it. They help so much.
Wow...this last chapter is beautiful. It's beautifully written, the way you captured both Hermione's love for Ron, her fear of death, and her need for him to move on past a memory. I found your story in a review for my own story, and the reviewer told me that our stories were alike, and yet very different. Alike in the ways on death of Hermione, and in the was they both seem to bring tears to their readers. Because yours certainly brought the burning to my eyes. once again, very well written, and I hope you might be able to take the time and read over mine. It's only a one-shot. ♥
Author's Response: I'll make sure to check out your story once I get the time to catch up on my fanfic reading. It'll be interesting to see the differences and the similarities... I'll review it after too, of course. And thanks for reviewing mine!
Are you going to be writing anymore stories? I hope so, cause I love your two stories that are up.
Author's Response: A new one-shot is currently in the hands of my beta. It's quite different from this one and I'm still a little confuse. I won't elaborate here. So, unless there's a mojor problem, I should submit it to the queue relatively soon. Hope you'll read it (and like it too!).
Sniffles. I just re-read the ending. Gosh, it was just perfect. I'm not even sure what else to say.
Author's Response: Thanks! I guess that's all I can say, but I really mean it.
So... is a new story coming any time soon?
Author's Response: I'm almost done planning a story that will fit in the general/marauders era category and that'll be revolving around Remus Lupin with Lily as a second character (non-romantic). I just have to decide if it will be a multi-chaptered story or a long one-shot. I think I would need a few more ideas to make it a valuable multi-chaptered. I have a long weekend (4 days off) and I'm planning to start writing then. Since I have all the major events planned and some little side-ideas, it should go pretty smoothly. But you never know, I might hit a wall. Or I might even decide to work on another idea. That's the plan for now!
Congrats on the PI Beta Accreditation!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was so exited when I got the results... my neighbour probably thought I was going mad. I celebrated with popcorn. Hummmmm, popcorn! But thank you still!