This story is a) Believable b) Full of emotion c) Is LOVELY!!! I absolutely love the way you portrayed Hermione's death, and Ron's feelings after that. The letter thing was good too, although a little cliche. BUT! Your story was fabulous, full stop. Please update soon! P.S 'It won't bring her back'....*sniffs*
Author's Response: Merci! now I'm starting to get a little nervous... what if all the people who read the first chapter (almost 1000 up to now) and liked it (at least those who said they liked it in their reviews) will be disappointed by the next chapter??! Maybe I'll get cold feet and delete the 2nd chapter before the mods read it... no, I won't do that. But I really am beginning to worry. Next time you'll hear about me I probably won't have any fingernail left! anyway, thank you for reviewing and for your encouragements. I deeply appreciate it.
yes, please update soon! i need to know what's happening now...i'm hooked! haha
Author's Response: You'll know soon... at least you'll know a small part of it *he he he*
Please update I need to see what is in those letters!!! Poor Ron! :(
Author's Response: Read the other reponses I wrote to some of the other reviews and you'll see what's coming... thanks for your review!
Grr... Hurry please!!! I can't stand waiting! Oh, and my first review WAS a compliment... :D
Author's Response: *laughing* Thanks again! As you probably saw it, the second chapter is in queue and I already have the third one ready to go. If the mods are in a good mood, you won't have to wait much longer.
The first chapter was ok but what I really wanna know is what Hermione wrote in those letters! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!! XXXXXXXXX
Author's Response: It's coming...
aha...! This was a really interesting chapter! I'm glad that I somehow came across it! Hope you update real soon...I need to know what's in those letters! Hope they get through soon! Cheers!
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter two is already in queue and the others are waitings to go in queue just after it. Updates will come regularly.
........... Interesting. Update soon 'cause I want to know the rest. You've got me all curious now... You suck... 10/10
Author's Response: ...Err, thanks?
That is so sad!!! Omg! You did an AWESOME job!!! Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Chapter two is in cue... cross your fingers!
I was afraid to read the story because I generally prefer fictions in which all the members of the trio are, well, living. But kudos to you - the story was gripping and suspenseful as well as sentimental without being trite or corny. I especially liked the bit about the stone owl. It had me thinking, "Is this owl bewitched to bring harm to any mudbloods who enter the chamber?!" Hmmm.... (10/10)
Author's Response: Maybe you'll hear more about that owl in later chapters... Who knows? Well, I do but I don't at the same time. It falls into the sixth chapter I'll maybe add someqhere in the middle. My beta and I will take that decision soon. Thanks a lot for your review!
you're right. not the typical R/Hr. but still great! glad i found it ( get kinda sick of the generic ones). the part in the Malfoy Mansion was wicked spooky and the rest was just sad! but interesting. 10/10 and keep on updating! since you're actually capable of doing so. which, I'm not, as I tell people constantly, but... yeah. update!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review, it's always appreciated. Doing something a little different is risqué but I believe you need some variety. And that's why we (I) love the HP series, because it took ne somewhere new, to a totally different world.
I almost started crying. That was great. I REALLY wanna see what the letters say! Please add more chapters soon! Cheers!
Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't write this chapter so people would cry but there were things I needed to put in to help to set the mood Ron was in at the beginning. Chapter two is almost on its way to the queue!
Wow. I think this plotline is (1)Amazing and (2)Sad :( but awesome!! Love it love it love it!! Keep writing and subimitting the chapters Missy!! LIZ-MUST-READ! Well I hope they don't reject them and that he reads them, because I want to know what they say Although that isn't really in canon for him, he'd probably do what ou made him do :), good observations. You are a great writer and I hope to hear more from you (Communication and Chapters). Can't wait to read the remaining chapters :) Last of all RON AND HERMIONE DO BELONG TOGETHER!!!! Yours Sincerily, Elizabeth
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for your enthusiastic review! I was a bit worried of how people would react this plot but so far so good. To my eyes, Ron is unique and can do unexpected things at times. And if it's not really canon, I don't really mind because I don't want her to die in the first place! The next chapter will be submitted soon. Thanks again!
cant wait for the next chapters
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll submit the next one at later on this week