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Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 12/15/07 18:29 · For: P.S.
*sniff* *snifffffffff* sad sad sad im crying harder than ive ever cried after reading a fan fic before
oh so so so so so so so so so good
this is going on my fave list you are really
awesome i love this story


Author's Response: First of all, I can't thank you enough for reviewing all six of my chapters! I truly means a lot to me to read comments and thought on them. So, thank you very very much. This final chapter took me literally weeks to write, I go rejected twice, rewritten entirely at least three time, I pulled my hair out... but I'm proud of the result even thought it was so much work and so hard to write. no other part of the story gave me that much trouble. That's why the greatest reward is reading reviews like yours. I thank you again, for the addition to your favourites, and all your reviews! *hug*

Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 12/15/07 18:06 · For: It's Time
totaly NOT corny so so good im almost crying and that is a good thing a really good thing
its awesome i cant wait to see what happens so ill go so i can read the next chap


Author's Response: It always make me feel warm inside when I read that readers like my work. Some chapters are harder to write, and Hermione's last letter was a tricky little thing. But as long as, in the end, everything fits and people are happy with it, it's worth the headache... see you after the final chapter!

Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 12/15/07 17:47 · For: Welcoming the Newcomer
this is a really good story i was expecting a tear-jerker but this is also wonderfull
lola approves of your work :)


Author's Response: phew! I got lola's approbation! Thanks to lola!

Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 12/15/07 8:30 · For: Getting Real
so sad poor ron this is so good i like sad chapters this is so great!!!


Author's Response: if you like sad chapters, you're gonna like what's coming cause I've been told that the last two chapters of the story should come with a tissue or two...

Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 12/14/07 21:02 · For: Dear Stupid Ron
thats cute i would have thought that hermione would be the kind of girl to write a letter and never give it to said somebody its great


Author's Response: glad you're liking it so far... now, on to chapter 3...

Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 12/14/07 20:52 · For: Home
i like this i usally avoid stories like this where one of the infamos trio dies but i like this so i'll continue to read


Author's Response: good choice! see you after chapter 2!

Name: moldy999 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 15:24 · For: Home
this is so sad, i have a problem when reading of miones or rons deaths cause both of them mixed together remind me of well... me.. im a girl not a boy, this is beautiful, so sad, truly beautiful... sorry im actually still crying.. thankyou though, for this marvelous piece of "art work" my fave hp couple, i dont think ron would ever get over her fully, how about you?

Author's Response: I also don't think Ron could let go of Hermione, and he wouldn't want to either. I hope you liked the story even thought it made you cry, but reviews like this one are just the best 'thank you' readers can give to an author. So, I thank you for you review!

Name: lily_green (Signed) · Date: 09/20/07 1:43 · For: P.S.
i cried

from lily_green

Author's Response: I hope it wasn't in a bad way... lol

Name: missbja (Signed) · Date: 08/30/07 7:31 · For: P.S.
Probably I'm just one more of thousands of reviewers. But I don't care.
Your story touched me in a way I never felt before. Fortunately for me I've got a person that loves me and holds me in a way I've never imagined before. Reading your story made me think about what would be to lose that someone.
Don't go think it's a bad thing, 'cause it's not. Sometimes you don't give the true value to people in your life, and never say the things you really want to. The last chapter was the only one were a small tear dropped from the corner of my eye. I couldn't help it. I sense that you feel the same way as me, that Hermione didn't need to Ron to tell her (in her grave) that final PS. She knew it, didn't she? Of course.
Sorry to take your story so seriously, but I must admit that this is the best story I've ever read in my life (and I've been in the ff world about two years). You've captured Ron's emotions in a way i can't even describe.

I know I'm just one more reviewer, one more person who enjoyed your story. But remember that I'm too, a person you touch the heart.

Thank you very much for writing this story.

Author's Response: This may sound cheesy, but you are not 'just another reviewer'. To me, all reviews, and reviewers, are important and meaninnful. They are a great motivation to keep writing and it's always a wonderful thing to read that some people liked your work, especially when you put so much effort into it. This story is really simple in a way and the general idea is nothing new, but I still needed a lot of time, rewrote chapters completely up to seven times, negociated with betas, and thought about the plot for a considerate amount of time. So, no, you're not just 'another reviewer'. I would not take the time to reply to everybody if they didn't mean a thing to me. I appreciated your review very much and I'm glad to read that it made you realise the importance to appreciate the important people around us while they're still here. I wasn't intending to put a moral in the story but I wanted people to be able to relate to the plot and the characters. I wanted it to be realistic enough that readers would be able to understand what was going on, even the many unsaid things. You are also right about that; Hermione didn't need to head the P.S. She knew, and I believe she had for a long time. It was hinted in one of the letters. And she knew Ron enough as to not expect it said so bluntly. His actions always spoke better that his words. Well, I could go on and on, but I'm not even sure if you'll read this reply... But I still thank you very very much for this review. It meant a lot to me.

Name: Annabella Cullen (Signed) · Date: 08/24/07 1:58 · For: P.S.
holy crap.
now im kinda a crybaby in the way of books, but i thought i was getting better.


maybe this is pms or something, but you story was so amazing. be really proud of this. seriously. i havent been this touched in ages.

write more!
and congrats on making me love harry potter more than i have ever.


Author's Response: wow. this is a really really nice review. some people think fanfics are stupid, but I think that when it's done in a right way, it's just a tribute to the actual books. I am really glad to read that it kept you HP flame strong and that you like this story so much. Thank you so much for your review. Comments like these help me want to write more.

Name: viviblue924 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 22:55 · For: P.S.
i've finished reading the story and im STILL crying!!! mainly i cried every time ron read a letter (especially the last one)...it wasn't over the top, it was simple and realistic and heart-warming;)

Author's Response: That was the main goal; to keep it simple, yet believable so people would be able to relate to him and what he was going through. *hands out a tissue* I'm sorry it made you cry, but I take it to mean that you liked it enough and that you related to the story. Thanks a lot for you review!

Name: Radiant_817 (Signed) · Date: 08/05/07 1:21 · For: P.S.
i absolutley cried my eyes out over this whole story, especially the last two chapters. i need some ice cream, and to now go and read a happy fic..that was the most well written thing in this whole sight. but no offense, im not gonna read it again because it just made me so sad. i hope to see a happy fic from you soon. much happier.

Author's Response: Your review made me laugh. I won't blame you if you chose not to read it again. Go have an ice cream cone and read a good humour story. That will certainly do it. I thank you a lot for you review. I really appreciate your opinion and I am umbled by your compliments.

Name: BriaWinky (Signed) · Date: 08/02/07 5:36 · For: P.S.
That was terribly heart-breaking.

Author's Response: I guess it's true... but I hope you enjoyed reading it anyway.

Name: TheGoodOne (Signed) · Date: 07/29/07 20:09 · For: P.S.
Really great job.
I loved it...

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: Lucky_Lily (Signed) · Date: 07/27/07 13:17 · For: P.S.
I LOVED IT!!! the idea is ingenious. i loved the letters, you can really really write. hope to be able to read more of your work later. I'll be waiting for it!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. That was a really nice thing to say. I have some things planned for the future but I can yet tell you when they will be submitted... Thank you for your review!

Name: junior_achievement (Signed) · Date: 07/03/07 0:09 · For: Home
oh, this was SO sad =[ poor hermione.. poor ron, for that matter, living without his true love.
i loved it, it was amazing =]

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for taking the time to leave a review! I'm very glad that you liked it.

Name: stoppy321swimmer (Signed) · Date: 06/28/07 8:34 · For: P.S.
This story is very well written,
This theme holds so true to real life
I think its great that he never says what his p.s is
Even after realizing the mistake he's made by never telling her he loved her
he still can't say the words

Author's Response: wow! This is a very nice review! Thanks a lot! I'm glad you think it has a touch of real life in it. I wanted it to be as real as possible, even if they are witches and wizards. They remain human too. Thanks again!

Name: rsw1022 (Signed) · Date: 06/26/07 20:10 · For: Home
im bawling.

Author's Response: Sorry...

Name: Losers_Lurgy (Signed) · Date: 06/20/07 11:10 · For: It's Time
OMG! That was the saddest most beautiful fanfiction I have ever read. Stories where either Hermione and Ron die are always quite sad... but the last letter Hermione wrote to him ust made so much sadder. It made me cry, and no fanfiction before has ever made me cry. I loved this fanfic very,very much.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm really glad you loved the story as much as you did. I'm sorry I made you cry but that must mean that you connected to the story, which was one of my goals. thanks again.

Name: Sissy K (Signed) · Date: 05/27/07 12:03 · For: P.S.
It's so sad i'm in tears! God I hope she doesn't really die in the 7th!

Author's Response: I really hope so too!

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