Wow, this was really good!!!!! It was so sad; i cried! I think that you captured the moment perfectly. It was really great, and I'd give it a 100, but I'll just have to settle with 10...
Author's Response: My friend just high-fived me for fianlly making someone cry! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it - it's one of my better ideas for a fic ... meaning they're usually really lame. I'm happy you think I captured it right - that was really ijmportant to me. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: My friend just high-fived me for fianlly making someone cry! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it - it's one of my better ideas for a fic ... meaning they're usually really lame. I'm happy you think I captured it right - that was really important to me. Thanks for reviewing!
This story was so touching. I almost cried! You write really weel. Please continue. I will be looking for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm actually glad you found it emotional (it means I was doing my job). And I will continue writing because fan fiction = like ohsocool. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked my writing!
I loved it! I think it is a perfect idea of what happened that night.
Author's Response: Thank you! I always wondered what happened that night, and it must have been very emotional, though I'm not sure if I captured as much as would have been there in reality. It's very hard to write touching peices! I'm glad you liked this though, thanks for the review!
This is so sweet, you really should have more reviews. I really like thois story, it's well written. NO matter how many reviews you hvae, keep your chin uop and keep writing!! 9/10
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much for the encouragement! It does get a little sad when you don't get reviews. So a big thank you for the encouragement, I really need it sometimes. On those days when you just sit and wonder if you should even bother writing anymore...
What? No reviews? I must fix this! Did you know that I used your excerpt from MMFF forums for my BA challenge banner? And then I found the whole thing, and I must say I like it very much. It was very sweet, and captured that part very nicely. Definitely a ten.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! You used it for a banner? Crazy! Haha. I'm so glad someone reviewed, thank you so much. I'm really glad you liked it! (That's what I'm here for) :P