I seriously love this story!
My only problem was grammar and spelling sometimes. But the last chapter was a great improvement. Keep the good work and update soon, please!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm planning on going back through the chapters and checking over the grammar. Thanks for the review! Lisa xxx
I want to read more!
Author's Response: lol Thank you! Nearly finished the next chapter, and then it goes to my beta! Thanks for the review! Lisa xxx
oh this is my favorite chapter...it is just so sweet.!!!
Author's Response: lol Thanks!
This story got so much better written as it progressed. Congratulations, and thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really have learned so much while writing this story. I can't look at the first chapter without cringing. Thank you! Lisa xxx
Oh, so sad! Ah well, good chapter. I bet Asher's the new DADA teacher...
Please update soon!!
Author's Response: Sorry for the sadness! It just...slips out...lmao. Oooh, you think so? :D
A nice battle. I was impressed. And a hook with the black haired woman. You might want to trade some of your "wheres" for "were's" though.:)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Ahhhh, you spotted my worst problem...even if it is one of the most basic rules of the english laguage, but ah well.... Thank for the review! Lisa xxx
I like how you're writing. Thanks!
Author's Response: Oh, no, Thank you! Lisa xxx
wow! i like ur story! hehe.. its cool...and its sooo..wats the word? canon? believable? lol...great...and OBVIOUSLY charlie n ashter will end up 2gether..haha cant wait 2 see that! lol
btw LUVED luna in the train! sooo luna! hhe
Author's Response: hahaha Thank you! Hmmm...OBVIOUSLY, eh? you'll have to wait to see how that works out...lol. I had such great fun with Luna! Lisa xxx
Please please PLEASE update quicker I'm on my toes here!
Author's Response: SO SO sorry about my updates. Or lack, thereof...Real Life has really been getting on top of me for the last month or so. Next chapter going to by beta very soon. Thanks for the review! Lisa xxx
Author's Response: Mmmm...thank you...
I love it! It has been a while since you updated. It's great to see a new chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Ohhh I know, I'm so terrible with my updates. I really am sorry ;-D. And *woohoo* for you! You were my 100th reviewer! *cheers* Lisa xxx
Good chapter. Molly asking Ginny if she had clean underwear in front of Harry was very funny. That would be so embarrassing. It will be interesting to see what the year holds for Harry, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, if in real life, a total *facepalm* moment. Thanks again for reading! Lisa xxx
please finish fast i want more.
Author's Response: next chapter is with my beta. thanks for the review! Lisa xxx
Ginny chose Harry to be her "mentor" because she wanted to be alone with him, right? Did she leave her purse on purpose? Also, that woman who thought Harry was James...she's Asher isn't she? I love the action sequence, very descriptive.
Author's Response: hyeh hyeh hyeh, she certainly did. Ahhhh...you will have to read on to find out about that!
I don't know about other people, but I DID love the H/G moment. I agree, any kind of moment like that, no matter who it's with, is great!
ps. Will the couple action start soon?
Author's Response: LOL Thanks! Hey, I'm a h/g sucker, what can i say? There are certainly more shippy moments to come! :D
wow, that was great
Author's Response: haha thanks!
my favourite part was when ginnys brothers all shouted "What the bloody hell is he doing to our sister" that was great
Author's Response: *giggles* well, they ARE her brothers...
your story is really great so far. I love that I can picture everything happening as I read! Two thumbs up ;)
Author's Response: cheers! I'm so glad you can picture what i'm writing, I'm always worried that my writing is really bland and boring...so thank you! Lisa xxx
cool! please continue.
Author's Response: Thanks! next is with my beta. Lisa xxx
very good. Please write the next chapter soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! It is with my beta, so should be up soon! Lisa xxx