Reviewer: hp11478
Date: 04/15/06 18:29
Chapter: You Belong to me

excellent so far. hurry up and post the next chapter!! please

Author's Response: i will it just needs a liiiiiiitle bit of tweeking here and there, but i promice i will submit it as soon as i can.

Reviewer: _HermioneGranger_
Date: 04/15/06 16:53
Chapter: You Belong to me

aww remus/tonks fluffliness...
ginny's letter...SECOND THOUGHTS WOOT!
twins floating around in the background like they should be...
i wuv the songs!
#__________________________________________watch the sunrise from the tropic isle____________________________________you belong to me# lol...*squee*ful!! yay theyre together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hopefully...
the way ya write is kewl cos it seems even more informal and personal...i luv this chappie! the fluff and the wedding.the song(s)...probs bcos its got ma fave singer on it but hey!..arghhhh hurry up and write more!!!!!


Author's Response: lol *squee*ful! woo! omg ino ROCK ON JASON WADE (and Lifehouse) !!! woot! informal and personal....thats a good thing right?lol. Yep, they ARE together....i cant believe no one had said anything about THE MYSTERY WOMEN *makes mysterious "ooooohhh" sound* aaaaaaaanyway, chap 6 is written, but i aint even started 7....mebe i should...

Reviewer: ladyofthebookworms
Date: 04/15/06 15:09
Chapter: You Belong to me

Oh, I almost forgot.
I'M THE FIRST, 'IM THE FIRST!
It's not nice to gloat, but then, neither am I. :)

Author's Response: haha! woot for the 1st revew! *does random dance*

Reviewer: ladyofthebookworms
Date: 04/15/06 15:08
Chapter: You Belong to me

That's THREE CLIFFHANGERS I have to deal with today, THREE!!!!
I think if Tonks actually did call Remus 'Remy', he'd tell her to knock it off,in a polite way of course.
And of course it would be Tonks to tell Harry that he's being an idiot.



Author's Response: haha, You love cliffhangers really, i know you do. LOL. And about the remy thing.....he loves it really...he just wont admit it. haha. Yeah, Tonks knows best about these things, she's been their herself so it was only natural for her to give Harry a good telling off. Thanks for the review! Lisa xxx

Author's Response: i just said "loves it really" twice....ahwell...

Reviewer: _HermioneGranger_
Date: 04/09/06 9:04
Chapter: A day in Diagon Ally

*sticks tongue out*

Author's Response: same to you! *sticks tongue out* ;-D

Reviewer: _HermioneGranger_
Date: 04/09/06 9:00
Chapter: A day in Diagon Ally

OMG LISA THAT WAS AMAZINGLY FANTASTIC! lol.. seriously write more i want more story! send me it or sumthin!

Author's Response: Why thank you stacey for the exelent review...you only needed a small kik up the arse to do it...HAHA

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 04/08/06 11:34
Chapter: A day in Diagon Ally

great chapter! super good, it really held my intrest. =) update when ya can! =) -Kate/ RupertsPheonix PS: Thanks fro reading & reviewing my story! =)

Author's Response: lol its ok. I was going to put the new chapter in today, only to find they have closed it! ahwell, at least i'll probs have chapter six done by then...*sigh*

Reviewer: ladyofthebookworms
Date: 04/07/06 10:38
Chapter: A day in Diagon Ally

I'm adding this to my favs! What are you going to do with those mysterious friends of Lily's?

Author's Response: oh wow! im on someones faves! WOW! hmmm...you'll find out about them soon...*zips mouth before she says too much*

Reviewer: ladyofthebookworms
Date: 04/07/06 10:24
Chapter: End of Protection

A...t...u...a...l...l...y... it... takes...almost...a...minute...if ...you ...do ...it... like...this...:) Great start and as soon as I finish the rest of what you already have I will give you a more thorough review.

Author's Response: LOL!

Reviewer: mrs george or fred waesley
Date: 04/03/06 19:46
Chapter: A day in Diagon Ally

hurry up with the fluff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Exelent job!

Author's Response: haha im trying! it should be up soon! Im just making it perfect ;-)

Reviewer: hpnut
Date: 04/03/06 11:08
Chapter: A day in Diagon Ally

That was a GREAT chapter!!!! I hope this gets Harry and Ginny back together. Keep it up and update ASAP!

Author's Response: lol thanks! I will, it just needs to add few finishing touches with details I thought of yesterday. LOL.

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 04/02/06 8:54
Chapter: Photo albums, Cameras and the Oak Tree

Wow! These first three chapters are sooooo---> good! =) And I loved the h/g moment by the pond. Great job with Harry's "inner conflict." I'm so glad that you had Harry tell Remus. That was good. And I like how you made each of Harry's gifts unique. When you described them, you could tell which person/people bought it for him, which I thought was really clever! =) Great job and please keep writing! =) +10/10

Author's Response: omg wow! thats must be my best review so far! And i have to say, i worked hard on those gifts, im glad someone relised that. You mite see somthing else from ginnys prezzie...i will say no more...lol! I am writing, the next is in the queue!

Reviewer: HandG4eva
Date: 03/30/06 10:44
Chapter: End of Protection

I like the story. Keep it up

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Jade X Malfoy
Date: 03/28/06 14:11
Chapter: Photo albums, Cameras and the Oak Tree

OK, I really like this story, it's got pretty good potential. There were a couple things that your beta reader(s) didn't get, though. "where" in just about every sense written in this story should be "were," but other than that, not bad. I'm interested to see where this is going

Author's Response: oh god sorry...shes losing her touch LOL only joking stacey! ill go fix that now.

Author's Response: P.S. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hpnut
Date: 03/27/06 21:58
Chapter: Photo albums, Cameras and the Oak Tree

That was a good chapter! Keep it up and update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! next chapter- "Day in diagon ally"...ill get it up as soon as i can. Later today if i can get back on the computer.

Reviewer: hpnut
Date: 03/16/06 19:15
Chapter: Good to be Home

Great job!!! I like this story and can't wait to see how you handle Harry and Ginny. Keep it up and I will keep R & R!!

Author's Response: wow thanks! lol next chaps in the queue! thanks for r&rm, hope to hear from you later! Lisa xxx

Reviewer: _HermioneGranger_
Date: 03/12/06 9:27
Chapter: Good to be Home

Woo! up at last! lol ginny's door sign...

Author's Response: Yup its up!!!haha...now if i could just get some more reviews....lol

Author's Response: Yup its up!!!haha...now if i could just get some more reviews....lol

Reviewer: AstroFire
Date: 03/08/06 19:02
Chapter: End of Protection

Hi. Well, I think this chapter was pretty good. It is a nice way to get the things moving. One thing I think you missed is what happened with the Death Eaters? I mean, did they escape or were they captured? Besides that I don't see anything that should be changed/improved. I liked your descriptions and hope to see the next chapter soon :) Oh, and don't worry about reviews. People usually reads but doesn't review, and I know it can be pretty upsetting/annoying, but keep your spirits up! I know why I'm telling you this, it happened to me, true story :D

Author's Response: hi! thanks for the great review! You find out about what happened to the death eaters in the next chapter, which is currently in the queue! Lisa xxx

Reviewer: _HermioneGranger_
Date: 03/06/06 12:01
Chapter: End of Protection

Woooo! its up its up its up! u alredy know wot i think but im gona review anyways...bella.needs.to.burn. but i like her voice/accent thingy! im all hyper and its not even my story! woo! the dursleys are great! and remus, and tonks...im not gud at criticisin so there ya go...all gud! lol submit the next chappie!

Author's Response: thank you stace! lol i couldn'T have done it without you mate! well, i could but it wouldnt of ever been added! and thanks for the ideas uv put into the 3rd chap ur a STAR! a shining STAR!

Author's Response: I just submited chapter 2! woo!

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