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Name: mrs george or fred waesley (Signed) · Date: 07/17/06 2:19 · For: Asher Crellin
yay!!!! sorry im kinda hyper right npw. anyway its finally up and im the second revewer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

STUPID ACCESS DENIED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol! Go second reviewer! *does dance* yes, DAMN YOU ACCESS DENIED! Lisa xxx

Name: ladyofthebookworms (Signed) · Date: 07/15/06 12:46 · For: Asher Crellin
*first review handsprings, backflips, trumpets playing, and lots of floating flowers*
Not only did you update, but I AM THE FIRST!!!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, that was some impressive gymnastic moves there *ducks while ladyofthebookworms backflips through the screen*. lol. SO sorry it took me so long, I had some serious bad look with betas. Should get up this time though! Lisa xxx

Name: dpb0418 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/06 16:35 · For: You Belong to me
Love it. When will the next chapter be up?

Author's Response: The next chapter should be up on here as soon as my second beta is done with it. Thanks for the review! Lisa xxx

Name: LittleDarlin909 (Signed) · Date: 06/01/06 0:42 · For: You Belong to me
Congratulations, you've reduced me to a teary-eyed giggling idiot. I *squealed* for crying out loud! I hope you're happy...

Keep up the nice work ;-)

Author's Response: Woo! Do I get a medal for that? I'm glad you enjoyed it...well i hope you enjoyed it...lol

Name: crazy_purple_hp_freak (Signed) · Date: 05/24/06 9:47 · For: You Belong to me
I'm SO glad the next chapter is up! I would have screamed if it wasn't lol...clifffiiiieeee
Me wonders if the woman is Remus' ex, or same woman as Diagon Alley woman or something...though Harry would have recognised her if that was the case...*gets confuzzled*
And...lets out massive AWWWWWWWW for HARRY AND GINNY !! WOOOO!!! *whups, got overexcited again* It was so cute though...and Tonks was really funny for trying to get them together. I love that song, 'Things I'll never say'...not heard of the other two but will probably check them out.
ooh before I forget: fave quote: 'I donít care how long it takes, a week, a month, a year, twenty years. Iíll wait. '
Thought that was especially cute.
Will now go read the next chappy, coz I can't wait! This story is brill!

Author's Response: LOL, sorry to drop it on you, but the next chapter isnt up...sorry! haha. AWW I know, i just had to go all fluffy...ahwell. And DO check out those songs, especially (sp?) Lifehouse...THEY ROCK! hehe...

Author's Response: hmm...a little help for your theory .... "Harry had seen this woman before; she was the woman who had been trapped under a beam in Diagon Ally. The woman who said she used to know his parentsÖhe would have to talk to her later" ...hmm...and about the remus thing...well, he did know her very well. Thats all I'm saying. *clamps mouth shut*

Name: crazy_purple_hp_freak (Signed) · Date: 05/24/06 9:24 · For: A day in Diagon Ally
Hi again!
Don't have a fave quote this time, as I've only read the chapter once, but have a fave 'bit', where you're describing the dawn, thought that was really warm and beautiful! Kind of shows that even though Voldy-poo's back, the sky doesn't suddenly go dark...woo!
There are quite a few spelling mistakes/grammatical errors in the first part of the chapter that you might want to correct....I won't list, as you won't be able to find them anyway...
I'm off to read the next few chappys, can't wait to find out more about the woman that Harry helped...was she L/J's friend? And does she have something to hide?
Nice to see subtle progressions in the Harry/Ginny field too! Woooo!
Great story...keep going! :D

Author's Response: Wow, this must be he only thing I have ever done that is subtle... and I'll would go check those errors, but I am going away this evening, so I dont have time :(

Name: crazy_purple_hp_freak (Signed) · Date: 05/24/06 6:19 · For: Photo albums, Cameras and the Oak Tree
I really like this version of the story! I hope it continues this way! :D
I'm really glad that Harry has told Remus now, and I also think that you've gotten Remus' character spot on. I loved the bit where Harry saw that Remus had confidence in him..awww
One of my fave lines in this chappy has got to be 'he looked strangely like a red headed, freckled fish out of water' ...made me laugh!!
There was just a little bit near the start where they are having breakfast that I thought got a bit to repetitive...but the rest of it was great! :D (and I love the idea of Bill's present..)

Author's Response: I think I came up with that line when I was on a suger high or something....lol. I have to admit I had loads of help with all the preasents, so that was all me.

Name: crazy_purple_hp_freak (Signed) · Date: 05/24/06 5:40 · For: Good to be Home
Cool chapter yet again...will go read the rest. I hope we find out more about Voldemort and the Order in the next chapter!

Author's Response: thank you!

Name: crazy_purple_hp_freak (Signed) · Date: 05/23/06 11:51 · For: End of Protection
This is the first of your work that I've read and I'm so glad I stopped to read it!
This first chapter sounds really promising, and I can't wait to read the rest!
It sounds like a really good intro, and I really enjoyed the way that you've portrayed each character. It's very JK-ish! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: WOW! Thank you! JK-ish? i dont know about that but thanks!!!! *Squee*

Name: MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd (Signed) · Date: 05/23/06 9:52 · For: You Belong to me
love it...I especially love the part where Tonks asks the singer to dedicate the song to Ron and Hermione. Speaking of the singeer, I believe she is one of Lily's friends from that picture who *possibly* used to date Remus...anyway love the story cant wait till you update.

Author's Response: :D hmm...possibly...maybe...then again, maybe not...my mouth is zipped.

Name: MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd (Signed) · Date: 05/23/06 9:35 · For: A day in Diagon Ally
I looooooooooove it. The plot's great!!! My only issue is your grammar and stuff---there were some places where you probably should have used a comma, and quite a lot of homophones you used. For example, I believe you used 'aloud' instead of 'allowed' somewhere in this chapter. Anyway its great and I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE it

Author's Response: heh, yeah im trying to filter them out, and I'll probabley have the first five chapters beta'd at some point in time... Thanks for the review! Lisa xxx

Name: jk_charlie (Signed) · Date: 05/17/06 10:24 · For: You Belong to me
i like it so far.

Author's Response: think you!

Name: CraftySlytherin (Signed) · Date: 05/11/06 16:09 · For: A day in Diagon Ally
More action, excellently done. I have a notion that the strange woman Harry ran into in the midst of the chaos was one of Lily's friends from the photo. I just knew that when Ginny forgot her purse, and Harry had seen the poster of escapees...that something bad was going to happen. Well, unfortunately I'll have to read the next chapter later. I have to run! Excellent job so far, and I'll put you in my faves list so I can keep reading!

Author's Response: hey! I like this reviewing every chapter thing...oooh well i cant say anything YET...she turns up in chapter 6...here's a clue *drum roll* chapter 6 is in the queue. hehe Lisa xxx

Name: CraftySlytherin (Signed) · Date: 05/11/06 15:55 · For: Photo albums, Cameras and the Oak Tree
I don't think your h/g moment was rubbish, I think it was done well. It would have been too easy to just have them start kissing :) You're holding off the inevitable to make your readers come back for more. Go you!

Author's Response: Go me! Well, i've never done ANY writing before this, except some random orignal stories that i will NEVER let anyone read, and my first time i've ever written romance - I'm still learning...slowly but surely... lol

Name: CraftySlytherin (Signed) · Date: 05/11/06 15:45 · For: Good to be Home
Well, this may not be one of your favorite chapters, but every chapter can't be filled with action. I think my favorite thing was Ginny's 'Stay Out or DIE' sign. Very cute and very appropriate!

Author's Response: lol thanks! I like Ginnys sign too, she told me to put it there *wink wink*...you know these charecters have a mind of their own sometimes...

Name: CraftySlytherin (Signed) · Date: 05/11/06 15:39 · For: End of Protection
You know, I used to make a habit of reviewing for anyone who reviewed for me. As that is no longer possible, I'm going through and trying to do so when I can. You're first! I have to say this was an excellent beginning! Very exciting! I saw a few words that should have been capitalized (like Stunned and Burrow) but other than that is was terrific! Excellent job of hooking your reader right off the bat!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: CraftySlytherin (Signed) · Date: 05/11/06 15:38 · For: End of Protection
You know, I used to make a habit of reviewing for anyone who reviewed for me. As that is no longer possible, I'm going through and trying to do so when I can. You're first! I have to say this was an excellent beginning! Very exciting! I saw a few words that should have been capitalized (like Stunned and Burrow) but other than that is was terrific! Excellent job of hooking your reader right off the bat!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll go try and fix those capital problems now, thaks for reviewing. Yay for being first!! Lisa xxx

Name: rileyowen (Anonymous) · Date: 04/25/06 10:11 · For: You Belong to me
wow, i love this story! keep going! i cant wait for chappie six! 10/10.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! You just made my day! Next chapter is in the queue, as it has been the pas few days, so hopefully it should be up soon!

Author's Response: Oh, and btw, (this has nothing to do with my story) I just read ur bio and it said u r havin ur sats soon...SO AM I!! gah, i hate revision.....sorry bout that....just a random outburst....Lisa xxx

Name: Molly_Wobbles (Signed) · Date: 04/16/06 1:56 · For: You Belong to me
Wow i love your story... it is incredible.
please update soon.
My fav bit was when Harry danced with Ginny!!!

Author's Response: incredible? wow. awww that bit was kinda sweet...i wasnt really sure about it at first...but it stayed and im really glad you liked it! Lisa xxx

Name: Yun Harla (Signed) · Date: 04/15/06 20:26 · For: You Belong to me
hey loved the part with Tonks brillient way to get Hermoine and Ron together and Harry and Ginny. Really funny too.
Cant wait to read the next chapter!!! Keep it up.

Author's Response: hehe i love that bit too. when i heard that song, it just screamed RON AND HERMY!!! uh, yeah.... next chapter up soon *cross fingers and toes*

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