This was a fantastic story, I loved all of it, you made Lily seem really real, and whats more, she didn't seem like a b*** who gets mad at every little thing! Please update soon, this is going on my favs!

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much for your totally wonderful review! I loved reading it! I'm glad that you don't think that Lily is a b****, because I really don't think that the real Lily WAS that uptight. I mean, she obviously had to do her job...but if she ended up marrying James she MUST have had some sort of sense of humor. If nothing else than as a defense mechanism! Thank you again for your wonderful review, and I hope I'll hear from you again for the next chapter (which should be up in a week or two)! -MQ

I think this was really good, I just have one comment to make - it being all in bold is very annoying. Sorry, but it is. Appart from that, I loved the Sirius/Peter part, I like how you wrote Peter as a real person, something I have trouble doing in my fic (please read it by the way. If you want. I'm feeling un-loved and reviewless. Just go to my author page, etc etc). Anyway, it was good. By the way, you do know that graphics aren't allowed in summaries, right? I'm just warning you, because the mods have that whole spring cleaning thing going on, and I would hate for this to be deleted.

Author's Response: lol thank you for your review! Ironically, I couldn't agree with you more in all areas of this review...I was really tired this morning and must have left a bold command without a stop command or something, but for the life of me I couldn't figure out where! I went back and now it's showing up normally on my screen, and I hope it is on everyone else's. Thank you for the banner tip as well, I've never posted on Mugglenet before, so I didn't know...they deleted it and now all is well (I hope). It's taken a long time to write Peter as a real person, I have to admit. I will read and review your fic, too...so I guess you'll be hearing from me again then! Hope you keep reading and that I hear from you again in the future! Thank you!!!

this is a well-written story, i can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I really appreciated your review! I hope to hear from you again in the future :D

i like your story, but you said you wanted to make this competely accurate, and you make Lily sound too perfect. when she answers Alice, you quote Lily saying, "Yes, Alice?" she sounds like a second grade teacher. just keep in mind that Lily was a normal seventeen year old. great story, though.

Author's Response: I agree with your statement that Lily should be a normal seventeen-year-old and I'm trying to write her that way. I answer questions with "Yes?" a lot when I'm not trying to be rude, so I think I'll leave it like that in the story, just because "What?" wouldn't be a very Head Girl-ish thing to say. However, I will take your advice to heart and try to keep her normal in the future. Thank you for your review, and I hope you'll keep reading!