Reviewer: prongs00092
Date: 03/23/06 2:05
Chapter: On a Date in Hogsmeade

i think that your story is really cute and i liked the flash back idea and my fav part was when u left snape frozen and forgotten.Very well written and update soon i cant wait to read ur next chapter. COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the really spirit-lifting review!!! It meant a lot. It was very nice to hear that you like the story and plot and hope you like the next chapter even more. Keep reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/21/06 16:16
Chapter: On a Date in Hogsmeade

Awesome job. First of all, I just wanted to tell you congratulations on picking a fine title, because that's what drew me in...that was one of my favorite parts of HBP :). Your writing style is really good; my only suggestion would be to make James and Lily a little less formal, get some contractions in there, lol. But other than that, I love it! You're in my favorites :). Good luck!

Author's Response: Thanks about the title Natasha and thanks a LOT for the review. It just encourages me so much to write. I'm glad the story is in your favourites and hope it remains so. Thanks a lot for the reveiw again and keep reading.

Reviewer: JustMelissa
Date: 03/17/06 21:10
Chapter: On a Date in Hogsmeade

that was really good! i liked the flashback, and the way sirius thought that girls were a waste of time. it was funny because it was completely backwards. i also liked how james didnt really change, but lily still liked him, and that madam rosemerta was working at the three broomsticks. really good, i hope you update soon!

Author's Response: THANX SOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!! I've already posted the second chapter.It will be up soon.

Reviewer: Andromeda Black
Date: 03/06/06 23:57
Chapter: On a Date in Hogsmeade

It was cute! You might add a little more transition where young Lily starts yelling at them, it's rather out of the blue, when she aparently doesn't talk to them much. But good job, it was very sweet!

Author's Response: HI Erika Thanks so much for such an awesome review. That was my first review and it came just within hours after the story had been up and you dunno how much it meant to me...I was thrilled. Thanks so so so much. Btw I share your views about Harry being super stupid in the sixth book. Hope he does better in the seventh one. My fav character is James. There is no one like him. Yeah Ginny is good too. It was a good idea of making Ginny date Zabini. And once again I want to thank you for being so encouraging, so awesome, so kind and so so wonderful. Your review meant a lot and I promise I'm taking the suggestion you put in very seriously. That was a good point. Actually for the second chapter I had decided that James will speak to Lily and you'll come to know that James Potter was very popular and everyone knew him including Lily. She just didn't appreciate all his pranks. KNow more in the second chap thts under construction. Hope you'll like it. And THANKS a lot once again.

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