i think ur 2nd chapter is really cool,infact its even better than the last one.After reading this chapter i cant wait to read the next one.Plz update soon and keep it up.Coool!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so so so much Felix. Today is a very LUCKY day. First the 2nd chapter is approved and then I get a wonderful review. So i would just say, THANKS!!!
Er- I admit it. Levicorpus and unknown marauder are the same person. That's me. I was actually playing a prank and unfortunately it got your rating down. I'm really REALLY sorry about that. REALLY SORRY! And now let me tell you that I was really impressed by your story and I simply LOVE it. Keep it up and all the best.
Author's Response: Well "that was better than a whack on the nose with a rusty poker" to quote Mrs. Cole. You had really scared me in the beginning and if I'd got your reviews on April 1st I'd have seen through the whole thing. But since everything is clear I can rest. I'm glad you loved the story and hopefully you will keep sending reviews (but not the pranking ones). Thanks! and Enjoy the story! It's a pity about the rating. I wish I could say "Reparo" and set everything right but since I can't, I'll just hope that the damage wont last long. Thanks for the reviews and keep reading.
CUTE! Really funny! Great job! And love the title...
Author's Response: Thanks! No actually thats not what I wanted to say. THANKS SO SO SO SO MUCH! I'm so happy you loved the story and the title. Hope you continue to like it and continue giving such awesome reviews. THANK YOU once again.
im extremely sorry for the first review i gave u. i apologise from the bottom of my heart. ur story was mind blowing. it was 2 cute. i love ur story.and hope u forget everything about the 1st review.thanx alot.
Author's Response: IS THIS A PRANK???????!!!!!!!!! Two people doing the same thing? Or is it two? Honestly, are you and "levisorpus_AARG" the same person? If yes, then thanks for the LATER reviews and hopefully you really liked the story. If not, I REFUSE TO BELIEVE IT!!!!
ur story is too gud!!
Author's Response: ????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!
soooooooo cute! ur story was superb.i dont have words to describe it. u r a born author!!
Author's Response: I must admit your first review hoisted me off the ground by my ankle and I was awfully depressed. I hope you aren't joking and you really mean that you ike the story. That will get me back on firm ground the right way up or I'll collapse! Thanks a lot for all the reviews (There were quite a lot of them) and hope you always like the story.
i luv ur story!!!!
Author's Response: I luv ur review!!!!
excellent!!!!!!!!! u were 2 gud.
Author's Response: THANKS! U r 2 gud.
Author's Response: I'll take it that it was a brilliant idea coz you've said that twice! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully it was a "briliant idea" and I only get these kind of reviews from you.
Author's Response: IS this a joke? Your first review had given me a major myocardial infarcture -er- a heart attack. This has to be a joke! So honestly, do you like the story? or not?
as i told u so many times already,ur story ROCKS !!!Totally!!!its jst toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gud.so keep it up n update as soon as possible.am trying 2 put my story on dis site too.so plz review it wen its up.all d best.n i wud like 2 take credit 4 d 'giant squid' part.LOLZ.
Author's Response: Tnks so much for de wunderfool revu!!!!! I will revu ur storey as soon as eet ees up. U can take credeet for de jiant skwid, eet wuz an awesum idea. TNKS! Gooood luck wid ur storey n tnks again fer de revu. DO I NEED A SPELL CHECK?
Author's Response: Was the story realy that bad? Help me improve. Looking for some constructive criticism.
i am not at all pleased with the story.plz try to improve in ur second chapter.hope ur 2nd chapter doesnt get deleted. plz improve in the horible story.
Author's Response: I can't deny your review was upsetting. Can ou please tell me what you didn't like in the story? It will help me improve. i hope ou ike the next chapter better.
GR8 story! i disagree with the previous review! i think ur first chapter was MIND BLOWING! good luck with the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot Felix Felicis. You made my day lucky with the wonderful review. I am so happy the story is appreciated!!! THANKS a lot. It means a lot to me. Please keep reviewing and share your thoughts about the story.
This is the first time im reading such a horribe story!!!!yuck! I expected alot from this story but the story is not so good.U haven't updated since a very long time....looks like they have deleted ur second chapter.improve!
Author's Response: Hi, I'm sorry you didn't like my fanfic. I am not averse to criticism and please let me know what you didn't like in the story so I can repair it. Thanks.
HATS OFF TO U!!!!!!!for the brilliant idea +title.I think ur title is a very good one . plz update soon ,cause i cant wait to read the next chapter. CHAOO!
Author's Response: THANKS SO MUCH for the seriously GREAT review!!!! I am very happy that the title is a success and I love your pen name. Keep following the story and giving reviews. CHAOO!!
I really think this story is shaping up very well, and like it so far. I think it's a great attempt at a first fic, with a great idea. I really liked the flashbacks. However, I think there are a few parts of this fic which could be cleaner, like parts when you don't skip a line in between paragraphs. However, those are formatting mistakes that can be easily remedied and are very common in first fics. The only true mistake I caught was with Madame Zelda, the barmaid. I know Madame Rosemerta said in the third book how she remembered James and his friends would come in on their Hogwarts weekends. I think even though she seems young, she's really older than she seems. I saw the point you were trying to get with Madame Zelda- that times were changing- but you also have to be careful to follow canon. Otherwise, it was a great job. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review and the constructive criticism! (shows you're reading carefully) lol. I've corrected the formatting mistakes and I'm very happy you pointed them out so the story becomes flawless (I hope). About Madam Zelda and Rosmerta, you'll see in the later chapters how they fit in and I assure you I am not toying with the facts! Thanks a lot once again for the wonderful review and hope I get many more from you! =D
This is a really good story!!! I love the title. Can't wait 2 read more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Sarah! I agree the title is something speacial ;-) and I'm thrilled that you liked the story and reviewed it. Continue doing so (please!)
Great story!!!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I love the title and i think you've done a fabulous job. Plz update soon. I am adding you to my favs. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for such a sweet review. Hopefuly ou'll get to read the next chapter soon coz its posted. I'm glad you've added the story to your favs. Thanks a lot again for the review and keep reading and enjoying the story!