Reviewer: katiebell360
Date: 05/25/07 23:54
Chapter: A Hard Summer

it was okay.....

Reviewer: tonksosme
Date: 12/09/06 15:14
Chapter: A Hard Summer

come on! its been forever since you updated, you're not just gonna quit? you've got a good idea keep going with it!

Reviewer: tonksosme
Date: 12/09/06 15:14
Chapter: A Hard Summer

come on! its been forever since you updated, you're not just gonna quit? you've got a good idea keep going with it!

Reviewer: HPdiva
Date: 05/24/06 16:53
Chapter: A Hard Summer

I love this chapter and i'm so happy you didn't delete this story...please update soon

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 04/24/06 11:05
Chapter: A Hard Summer

This is a really good first fic! I don't understand why you'd want to delete it because of a lack of reviewer and reader interest- a lot of first fics aren't really noticed at first. I know it's hard to have no reviews while other stories have hundreds, but those stories have been up for a long time and they had rough starts. I think the idea that Lily's parents died has recently become really cliche in fanfiction, but there isn't much you can do about that because it's an important part of your story. If you write the fic good enough, that will make up for it being a cliche. I can't tell much from the first chapter, but it seems like this story will develop well. I hope you remember that. Great story, and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I wrote this story initially about a year or so ago, but I hadn't heard of fanfiction and I was just bored one day. It was only about last December that I discovered fanfiction, and I only branched into more places to post a month ago. I really worry about people thinking it's cliche, but you're right, I can't really change it. Thanks again!

Reviewer: sunshinedaisies
Date: 04/19/06 3:08
Chapter: A Hard Summer

I like the content of the story I just think that it could be organized a tad better if that makes sense. I get what you are trying to do. It is just that you might want to try and explain more at the begining. I think that the story would be more powerful if it wasn't a flashback...just a thought

Author's Response: Since I've only just begun this story and have it all planned out, I'm sure everything will come together for you in later chapters. And I really had to do the flashback -- the other options, which involved either a tearful Lily telling the story to her friends on the Hogwarts Express or a newspaper article, just weren't sounding right. I'm sorry that you didn't think it was powerful...but thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: amnesiac
Date: 04/18/06 12:13
Chapter: A Hard Summer

PLEEEEEEEEASE keep updating! I want to know when James comes in the story and how it turns out.
And if the summary is a bluff, it's definitely working.

Author's Response: I can't think of what you mean by "If the summary is a bluff, it's definitely working." Maybe you could tell me? Thanks.

Reviewer: several_sunlit_days
Date: 04/17/06 23:07
Chapter: A Hard Summer

wow thats really good! keep going! its just, "now was not the time to worry, now was the time to plan" isnt exactly correct, because if you've ever lost someone close to you, especially your own mother, you'd understand that you would be distraught and very worried. she should cry, at least, to make it realistic.

Author's Response: Seeing as she had a ten-minute weeping session, I had assumed that that would serve her for now. I've got later chapters planned out and there will be more tears shed, believe you me.

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 04/16/06 23:08
Chapter: A Hard Summer

hi, please don't delete this story- I would really like to read more

Author's Response: You got it! :)

Reviewer: vanillasweety
Date: 04/15/06 19:37
Chapter: A Hard Summer

intresting start dont delete it people are just too lazy to write reviewsi think its good and would like to see anotheer chapter

Author's Response: Another chapter is in progress. Thanks!

Reviewer: Annagirl
Date: 04/14/06 6:39
Chapter: A Hard Summer

Please don't delete this! It's a good story. Just whatever you do, don't abandon it! I've made that mistake about stories on a different site. It's too hard to pick up where you left off if you leave it.

Author's Response: Yes, I know how that feels. Thanks!

Reviewer: wizard lover
Date: 04/13/06 22:21
Chapter: A Hard Summer

Don't delete this just because people don't review. It doesn't mean that they don't like it. Most people are just too shy to write out what they think. I don't review very often but I love the stories. I really liked this bit, you should add another chapter. 10/10

Author's Response: I'm so glad you took time out of your schedule to review! That means a lot.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you took time out of your schedule to review! That means a lot.

Reviewer: baconandlettuceandtomato
Date: 04/07/06 20:22
Chapter: A Hard Summer

This is honestly amazing! For a first chapter, I mean, great! Please keep going. -baconandlettuceandtomato*

Author's Response: Thanks! I love your penname.

Reviewer: ProngsPrincessLexi
Date: 04/07/06 19:44
Chapter: A Hard Summer

I like this story, and I don't think you should delete it, but to be honest it seems like you are threatening to delete in order to get more reviews through sympathy, which is a bit sad.

Author's Response: I actually did "delete" it, but the Mugglenet authorities sent me a PM saying that they weren't allowing it. I feel upset that you think it's that sad (and here I am assuming "sad" means lame), and I would like you to know that I would never be so desperate as to say that just to get reviews. I'm not that surprised, though, because nobody really knows me on this site and a lot of these authors who don't get many reviews either begin to beg or make threats. I really didn't think I was coming off as a desperate-for-reviews person, saying those things just to make people take pity on me, and I really regret that I gave that impression...but I'm glad you told me in a relatively kind manner. Thank you. I'm also glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: magic_quill
Date: 04/07/06 17:33
Chapter: A Hard Summer

Nice start. I like how you build up the problems in the relationship between Petunia and Lily.

Author's Response: I don't really know what else to say, a million thanks!

Reviewer: hrry4lyf
Date: 04/07/06 15:48
Chapter: A Hard Summer

Amazing begining! I never imagined that when Petunia told Harry about a man telling Lily about dementors she would mean the minister. Please don't delete your story! I love it!

Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much! You know what, now that I've recieved so much positive feedback, I might revise my decision to delete it...thank you!

Reviewer: kaammini_the_kreacher
Date: 04/07/06 12:46
Chapter: A Hard Summer

I think that this is really great and definately don't delete this because it could turn into something marvelous! I'm not too sure if you meant this but this could be a reason as to why Petunia knows about Dementors!

Author's Response: That's what I was thinking...only then I went back, re-read and found that Petunia said that Lily had been talking to James about it...:P oh well. Thank you!!!

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 04/07/06 12:45
Chapter: A Hard Summer

OH!!! PLEASE DON'T DELETE IT!!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DON'T DELETE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! *ahem* anyway, it was a great start, and please please please don't delete it!!!

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 04/07/06 12:43
Chapter: A Hard Summer

OH!!! PLEASE DON'T DELETE IT!!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DON'T DELETE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! *ahem* anyway, it was a great start, and please please please don't delete it!!!

Author's Response: Wow...I really had no idea people liked it so much...thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: Lady Jade
Date: 04/07/06 11:03
Chapter: A Hard Summer

Wow, great start! Have heart, my dear, reviews come with time and chapters :)! This is a wonderful start to a fic, very moving and sad. My suggestion to you would be to revise your summary. James changing is a basic thing here in this category, and if you have something really unusual in your summary, it draws people in :). If you need help, feel free to Contact me. Good luck! Good job!

Author's Response: I'm not exactly sure what you mean by something unusual...but thank you for all your nice comments. They really made me feel better! I'll try and do what you suggested.

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