Was that just the first chapter, or is this a one-shot? I loved it - whether this is it or it goes on...
That was wonderful. It was so touching!
Ahh, such sweet H/Hr-ness. Excellent job. I admire how well you worked the song in, as well. Nice job!
Magnificent Job! I like it when Harry realizes that he needs Hermione. She can be a bit of a nag, but it's always done in love. She pushes Harry to do what he needs to do. I can't see R-Hr lasting very long. Can you imagine a computer dating service matching them up? She wants to free house elves, he wishes his family could afford one. They're incompatible intellectually, they have very different ideas about what is funny.
Really good start! Keep writing!
Wow awesome story... I just love it... great job... 10+++
*does first-reviewer dance* i like it... especially the metaphor bright eyes. very nice. just work on some of the wording like "now more than EVER" not never (i think). you're off to a good start. update soon!