Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 04/12/06 21:21
Chapter: one-shot

Aww, I liked it. (and for your background info - I didn't think it was corny at all!!) I thought it was really cool how you managed to fit seven years in one short story. I really like it, keep writting - because you're reeally good!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, I am glad you liked it! This is one of my favorite things I have written, and my only one-shot so far... hopefully there will be more to come soon, it depends on how much schoolwork I have though!

Reviewer: weasley_wanna_be
Date: 03/14/06 17:53
Chapter: one-shot

I liked it a lot! A very cute, fluffy story. I love these kinds. I love the 'popsicle' line. The little Rascals are so cute! But, back to the fic: I'd put ways to improve, but I can't think of any right now. I think you shoul'dve put why she went out with him in the last little bit when they're in the Heads dorm. It would have been cute. But, other than that, it's great! 8/10 weasley_wanna_be

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I was considering putting in why she went out with him, but I wanted it to be a pretty short story, and I wasn't entirely sure how to make it fit, and if it was really necessary. Thanks for the input, though. It is a good suggestion.

Reviewer: Jamesrocks
Date: 03/01/06 16:46
Chapter: one-shot

Very funny! James rocks!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! James is one of my favorite characters, too.

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