Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 12/25/06 22:42
Chapter: one-shot

I really liek this story! Its so good!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Lilyflower24
Date: 12/14/06 16:41
Chapter: one-shot

AH-MAZING story, I love it... the way it skips around in time is so very, I don't know, the only word I can think of, is kool. Well, anyway, good story!

Author's Response: Thanks =)

Reviewer: voldy178
Date: 12/12/06 21:59
Chapter: one-shot

Great fic! It was really funny and really sweet at the same time :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 11/08/06 17:28
Chapter: one-shot

this is one of my favorites! i loved it! 100000000/10!

Author's Response: LOL. Thanks a bunch. I appreciate the review =)

Reviewer: The Queen Marauder
Date: 10/15/06 19:01
Chapter: one-shot

AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was so cute!!!!!!!! I usually don't approve of Lily and James fics with James falling in love at first sight at the age of eleven, but you have absolutely won me over with this one!!!!!

Author's Response: Hehehe. I'm glad you liked it so much! I appreciate the feedback! :-)

Reviewer: sirius_rox
Date: 09/18/06 21:07
Chapter: one-shot

u should have put in more about how they actually got together.. like the actual moment.. n when they found out their parents died.. u could have made it more chapters.. it was really good, lol

Author's Response: Yeah, when I wrote it out, I realized that I was leaving a lot of important events out, but I figured that I could leave it up to people's imagination. I really wanted it to be a one-shot, and in the end, I was really happy with how it turned out. I'm glad you thought it was good! Thanks for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 09/11/06 17:43
Chapter: one-shot

I actually really liked it! Good work!

Author's Response: You "actually" did?! Great!

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 09/07/06 20:23
Chapter: one-shot

aw so cute. i love what james said to the sorting hat
I took a deep breath, and refusing to let anyone see how nervous I was, sauntered up to the hat and pulled it onto my head. 'Please Gryffindor' I thought desparately. 'Why Gryffindor?' the hat asked. 'Well' I thought to it (all while mentally kicking myself for doing something so uncool as talking to a hat) 'all my family has been in Gryffindor, and those guys I met on the train were just put into Gryffindor, and you put Lily in Gryffindor. I’m marrying her. You can’t separate a husband and wife!' The hat didn’t answer for a minute. It made a funny noise, almost if it were laughing at me. But I knew it wasn’t. Because hats can’t laugh. And I hadn’t said anything funny. So it must have been coughing or something. Except hats can’t do that either. Maybe they can. Well, anyway, it soon answered. 'Erm…okay…if you say so… '“Gryffindor!!!"
great story, looking forward to reading more by you :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! That was one of my favorite bits, too. I have another one-shot in queue, and a couple others that aren't finished yet. :-)

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 08/31/06 6:13
Chapter: one-shot

that was a very sweet story.
it gave me the kind of sadness that you get at graduations like your sad that all the happy times you think about were in the past and you can't go back.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 08/31/06 6:12
Chapter: one-shot

that was a very sweet story.
it gave me the kind of sadness that you get at graduations like your sad that all the happy times you think about were in the past and you can't go back.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes it is kind of sad, but happy at the same time

Reviewer: sinfonia_concertante
Date: 08/16/06 14:23
Chapter: one-shot

This is a very sweet story. I like the whistle idea a lot!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: siriusly_ginny
Date: 08/10/06 12:35
Chapter: one-shot

omg this was guddd
write another one plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'm working on a couple of other one-shots at the moment, as well as finishing up the next chapter to my chaptered-fic.

Reviewer: iluvhpsomuch1_7
Date: 08/04/06 23:00
Chapter: one-shot

Well you don't know that they weren't killed in an attack. They could have been. So its not AU its Fanon.

Author's Response: Actually, I'm pretty sure that JK Rowling mentioned at some point in time that neither set of parents died by Death Eaters' attacks. They all died in fairly normal ways. Thanks for taking the time to read and review my story! I appreciate it!

Author's Response: Alas, a quote from JKR herself, from the TLC and Mugglenet interview. A couple months too late, I know, but here it is nonetheless: MA: What about Harry's family - his grandparents - were they killed? JKR: No. This takes us into more mundane territory. As a writer, it was more interesting, plot-wise, if Harry was completely alone. So I rather ruthlessly disposed of his entire family apart from Aunt Petunia. I mean, James and Lily are massively important to the plot, of course, but the grandparents? No. And, because I do like my backstory: Petunia and Lily's parents, normal Muggle death. James's parents were elderly, were getting on a little when he was born, which explains the only child, very pampered, had-him-late-in-life-so-he's-an-extra-treasure, as often happens, I think. They were old in wizarding terms, and they died. They succumbed to a wizarding illness. That's as far as it goes. There's nothing serious or sinister about those deaths. I just needed them out of the way so I killed them.

Reviewer: gryffindors_girl
Date: 07/31/06 23:03
Chapter: one-shot

That was really cute. i like how she always knocked him out

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: BoodaDuck
Date: 07/18/06 15:56
Chapter: one-shot

Excellent, excellent story! James is so cute. I love him. Just one thing... I can't imagine that they would celebrate the Fourth of July in England... what with the Revolutionary War and all that...

Author's Response: Yeah, I already was informed of that mistake. oops. Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Okay, mistake fixed. =)

Reviewer: KeriPotter3
Date: 07/17/06 12:51
Chapter: one-shot

I loved this story. It was very cute. I liked reading a story written strictly from James' point of veiw. Very fluffy and sweet. Keep up the awesome work. Hopefully you will continue to write. Sweetness!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate it! I am currently working on a chaptered fic, with which I am having a few small difficulties, but the next chapter should be posted pretty soon. I also have a couple of one-shots that just need a few tweeks and then they are good to go. Once again, thanks for taking the time to read and review my story.

Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso
Date: 07/07/06 12:58
Chapter: one-shot

"popsicle on the fourth of july" They live in the UK, lol! I loved your fic, though! I think ive read it before, but i read it anways again because it was so good!

Author's Response: Haha I wasn't thinking, sorry, slipped my mind about the Fourth of July joke. I can't believe I missed that mistake. But I suppose it would still be hot outside on 4 July in the UK, right? Even if it's not Independence Day there... Thanks for your review, I'm glad you like my story.

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 06/04/06 12:48
Chapter: one-shot

That was really good and funny! I loved the interactions between James and Lily (especially when they were younger!) and how they remained similar throughout the fic. Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: fluffahoy
Date: 04/25/06 5:22
Chapter: one-shot

sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet! Thats all.

Author's Response: lol thanks for reading and reviewing. I believe that is the first review I have ever had that had seventy nine e's in a row...or even seventy nine e's total!

Reviewer: heliopath
Date: 04/23/06 9:41
Chapter: one-shot

i loved your story. it was very funny & you potrayed James' personality very nicely. I enjoyed it thoroughly. thumbs up to you. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that I portrayed James's personality correctly, I sometimes worry about things like that.

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