Reviewer: ginny96
Date: 07/05/12 14:57
Chapter: one-shot

this is an absolutely awesome story. it is so well written and the plot line is ingenious!

Reviewer: Aquamarine39
Date: 04/21/12 11:19
Chapter: one-shot

This is a mix between "D'aww that's so cute," "James, will you ever learn?" and "LOL that is too funny!!"
Thanks for writing this, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Reviewer: darn_snitch
Date: 06/23/08 18:16
Chapter: one-shot

really cute and funny
seriously the best one i've ever read

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 06/23/08 14:45
Chapter: one-shot

I loved it!!! Little yellow whistle ^-^ Sorry.

Reviewer: GryffindorGal87
Date: 12/10/07 14:18
Chapter: one-shot

that was so cute AND sweet ! =]

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 11/21/07 7:45
Chapter: one-shot

Wow AMAZING!!! I totally caught that little rascals reference and i totally thought you would add in that little note that the 2 little kids (god their names escape me) no wait ive got it buck weed and porky said to darlay when it was really supposed to say how much alfalpha loved darlay but i was that other one!! I totally thought you wouldve added that in!! Hey are you the same crumplehornedsnorkack thats a cheesecakian? Oh its Remi by the way incase you didnt figure it out!!

Reviewer: loveismagicharry
Date: 10/31/07 19:13
Chapter: one-shot

I love it
!I especially love how James proposed with the whistle, that was cute.Great story!

Reviewer: flyingphoenix
Date: 10/22/07 17:56
Chapter: one-shot

Second time I've read this...and once again it "made my heart melt like a popsicle on the fourth of July" - and with that sentence I'm referencing both you and the "Little Rascals"...what could be better???

Reviewer: aussigirl
Date: 09/20/07 21:58
Chapter: one-shot

Oh my god, That was so fluffy and absolutly wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the whistle-too cute!

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 08/25/07 0:38
Chapter: one-shot

Amazing! This was extremely funny and well-written with a great plot. One of the best I've read in a while! Going to faves. Awesome work =)

Reviewer: chinese_fireball
Date: 08/16/07 16:02
Chapter: one-shot

I loved it, it was so sweet and funny. Two thumbs up!

Reviewer: luna_longbottom88
Date: 08/08/07 21:52
Chapter: one-shot

loved it. please keep writting

Author's Response: hehe thanks for the review, I hope to keep writing

Reviewer: musiclover Valerie
Date: 08/08/07 2:44
Chapter: one-shot

OMG! That was awesome! LOL, I laughed like crazy everytime James proposes with the plastic whistle!

Author's Response: =) thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/02/07 5:19
Chapter: one-shot

Aww that was so funny! I'll have to go and check out your other fics now. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the review

Reviewer: _Izzy_
Date: 07/28/07 11:00
Chapter: one-shot

We dont have quarters in britain... try a twenty P coin :P. otherwise its cute :)

Author's Response: ahaha I'm sorry. I can't believe I did that. stupid mistake. thanks for telling me. And thank you for the review!

Author's Response: Okay, fixed! I think.

Reviewer: Aura_light
Date: 07/18/07 8:50
Chapter: one-shot

aww... it's cute :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 07/07/07 19:28
Chapter: one-shot

Awwe, that was so sweet!! I reaaally liked that!! Good job!

Author's Response: =) Thanks a bunch! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: ginnyluvly
Date: 04/22/07 16:07
Chapter: one-shot

I absolutely loved it. It shows the meaning of true love and it is actually hilarious. It gives me hope that there is that special person for you somewhere, and thats the only one you are sopoused to be with. Incredibly written, simple and marvellous! Keep it up!

Author's Response: =) Thank you very much for the lovely review!

Reviewer: flyingphoenix
Date: 04/01/07 20:43
Chapter: one-shot

That's so sweet...I love the whistle! Thsi is a great little story - it's so cute!

Author's Response: Thanks...I'm glad you liked it! =)

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 03/13/07 16:52
Chapter: one-shot

I love the part about the river in egypt.....really fun and cute story
Keep writng more storeis!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hehe thank you for the lovely review! I really appreciate it! I've been working on some new stories, but sadly I have to put school first...

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