Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 02/26/06 20:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great job! I really enjoyed reading this! I loved the sequences as she was dropping the potions and right before Tom drank the potion. It was very theatrical, but in a way extremely enjoyable to read. I can't wait for the next chapter! 10/10, definitely, without a doubt!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! It was supposed to be one-shot but now that I think about it, it might be good as a multi-chapter. Thanks again! Scout

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 02/26/06 15:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

Woot. First reviewer! I love how you twisted your imagination to show us how Tom the First left Merope. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I appreciate it.

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