Reviews For Broken Dreams
Reviewer: readergirl166
Date: 07/08/10 12:54
Chapter: Broken Dreams

That is amazing. I love it.

Reviewer: hpseekerhg
Date: 12/12/07 14:59
Chapter: Broken Dreams

keep going, cause this is really good!

Reviewer: hpseekerhg
Date: 12/12/07 14:57
Chapter: Broken Dreams

keep going, cause this is really good!

Reviewer: mandala
Date: 07/01/07 10:19
Chapter: Broken Dreams

any sequel ?

Reviewer: voldy178
Date: 01/06/07 1:17
Chapter: Broken Dreams

Very good... depressing, but very good. The song fit perfectly.

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 12/19/06 18:12
Chapter: Broken Dreams

i love this song, but i never thought of it for draco, but now that you mentioned it, i think it fits perfectly. wonderful one-shot. good job

Reviewer: Sammi 1992
Date: 10/30/06 5:29
Chapter: Broken Dreams


Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hermionelover87
Date: 06/07/06 18:31
Chapter: Broken Dreams

well what i think u should write the sequal and u keep ur readers wanting for more!! thats very good!!! great story above all

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: cassandra1992
Date: 05/11/06 3:04
Chapter: Broken Dreams

*yawn* pretty cool story, oh yea. jus a bitsy borin' awh. but thumbs up overall. xoxo. cXxi~~

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: mgle_teacher
Date: 05/04/06 18:04
Chapter: Broken Dreams

it was pretty least it didn't have hte cliche Draco/Hermione features in it. Good job!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: starry_night22
Date: 04/18/06 3:34
Chapter: Broken Dreams

awww.. that was sweet.. =).. nice job.. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you dear, I'm glad you liked it. ;)

Reviewer: hpffreader
Date: 04/11/06 17:10
Chapter: Broken Dreams

The way it was ended does sound like an invitation to a sequel or continuation. The story was excellent!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. I will, unfortuanetly, not be doing a sequal. My life is too busy. However, I will be writing another Dr/H look for that soon!

Reviewer: luna_202
Date: 03/28/06 19:30
Chapter: Broken Dreams

O.k. This story was....TOTALLY WONDERFUL!!!! o.m.g. You HAVE to finish it OR have a sequel. Most difintally.(sp) Can't wait. :-D luna_202 P.S. I rated it a nine cuz I hate hang-offs.;-)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. View author page for info.

Reviewer: PerfectByNature
Date: 03/26/06 22:52
Chapter: Broken Dreams

Hey there. Not too bad. For a reflection fic. i just found it a bit jolty, you know, sometimes it didnt run smoothly and i guess im not really a fan of completely reflective fics, i like action, (which means i thought it got better towards the end) um, im not sure if im explaining myself properly, but i found some of it to be a little boring, i mean, not all introspectives fics are boring, but it felt a little like you were going through the motions... gah, there is another word and i cant think of it! Like you could have written it a different way so that it was more engaging. you could have explained that Draco was lonely and an outsider and all that, but it just felt a bit dull, the way you did it. Id love to read the sequel, hopefully it will be more action *wink* im sorry, it was good, just a little boring for me. but dont give up, we can opnly get better (i hope) cos im definitely not a master author or anything! luv'n'sunshine Alex

Author's Response: Hey there, thanks for the review. That was my first fanfic, and looking back now, I don't like it either. So I don't blame you for not really liking it. It does seem slow and boring ,doesn't it? lol

Reviewer: dracolovesherminy898
Date: 03/17/06 15:28
Chapter: Broken Dreams

i think there should be a seuqual

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! *smiles happily* I am working on a plot for hold tight.

Reviewer: Artemis
Date: 03/16/06 23:42
Chapter: Broken Dreams

Well I'm glad that you weren't angry at my last review...I was afraid that I had been a little to straight forward. Anyway, I really hope that you continue with this story. It could be one of the best. *hinthint* LOL.

Author's Response: Oh, no, I wasn't angry. I just was dissapointed at first, not at you, but at me and my story. You know, when you've got these good reviews and then someone comments on how something's wrong with your story, well, my heart sank. But it's ok now. I see what you mean. For the not having a plot thing, the purpose of this one shot was for Draco to find out what he wants in life. He really was sad and lonely in the beginning, but then, once he saw Hermione, he had something to do in life. If you'd like to see more of my work, another story is up, called Narcissus Rain, in the Monthly Challenge category. I'm so much more proud of it than this one. :) *stops being an advertisement* Thank you for your review. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Artemis
Date: 03/16/06 12:23
Chapter: Broken Dreams

Are you sure you're 13? That was pretty good. The things I saw wrong with it was the song didn't quite fit with the story and also that this story didn't have a purpose. This was more of an opening chapter to a chaptered story than it was a one-shot. You set up the plot at the end of the chapter and then left it hanging. He wants to talk to Hermione what? I think that you should write more to it. Not just a sequel, but make THIS a story. It was well's just incomplete. (8/10)

Author's Response: It's finished for now. I might add to it, like you suggested instead of doing a seperate sequal. Thanks for your review!! I really appreciate all the input.

Reviewer: HermioneG149
Date: 03/15/06 0:45
Chapter: Broken Dreams

Yes! Please do a sequel! Great choice on the song, by the way. I luv it! = D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am doing the sequal...look for it in the middle of April.:)

Reviewer: Emily_the_Poet
Date: 03/12/06 23:03
Chapter: Broken Dreams

really good job! I liked the plot a lot. You should totally do a sequel!

Author's Response: Thank you. I think I'm going to do a sequal. But I don't think it's going to come out in a while. At least, exoect it after March. I need to come up with a plot and all that yak. Thanks for the reveiw!

Reviewer: HPLoverForever
Date: 03/08/06 20:27
Chapter: Broken Dreams

ANNA I LOVE YOU! =] lol Your story is AMAZING!!! You did a fantabulous job on it. Oh and I read that story you recommended...I still dislike that particular ship...and the story gave me a MAJOR case of the creeps.... BUT GREAT JOB!!! xD

Author's Response: Thanks for reading my story!! :) I love you too!

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