Reviewer: Sway Wellington
Date: 04/19/06 18:38
Chapter: The Meaning of Loneliness

You are an extrememly talented writer! You have tons of detail and you make it seem so real. The story you have come up with must have taken a lot of time. You must update soon. If you'd like another proof reader I would be glad to help! Thankyou for sharing your imagination with us all!

Reviewer: marcia
Date: 04/18/06 12:56
Chapter: The Meaning of Loneliness

update soon, please! really a good read! thank you.

Reviewer: marcia
Date: 04/16/06 3:00
Chapter: The Meaning of Loneliness

Well done! I just found this story the other day and read through all 29 chapters. Enjoyed it a lot. But you're slow to post so nudge, nudge!!! Thank you for sharing it with us. Marcia

Author's Response: LOL, slow doesn't cover it. It is so difficult to update lately with everything going on, but I am working on it, promise. Thanks for reading. I appreciate the comments.

Reviewer: A_W
Date: 03/22/06 17:55
Chapter: The Morning After the Dream

Absolutly amazing story! I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 03/17/06 19:31
Chapter: The Meaning of Loneliness

omg, that was soo sad! *tear*. cant wait for more. update asap!

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 03/17/06 1:05
Chapter: The Meaning of Loneliness

Aaaaaa!! *looks back* Where did that loop come from?! I didn't expect Ginny's confession so soon. Well thank you very much, I'll be depressed the rest of the night. That was just plain sad and still gloomy. But it was a good update!

Reviewer: ronsgirl123
Date: 03/10/06 17:43
Chapter: The Raids Begin

whats with the capiltlization? i think it would be better if you put them in italics.

Reviewer: punkin02
Date: 03/09/06 14:14
Chapter: The Meaning of Loneliness

That chapter was sad..I almost cried. :(

Reviewer: alia17
Date: 03/01/06 8:35
Chapter: Loyalties

I discovered this story a few days ago, and i just absolutely love it. it's well-written and makes sense with the characters...for the most part, lol. i neeeeeeeeeeeeeeed you to write more!!! *please*

Reviewer: alia17
Date: 02/24/06 16:19
Chapter: After the Fight

I'm really enjoying your story. I feel pretty sorry for Draco, so that's a compliment in and of itself!

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 02/20/06 19:45
Chapter: Loyalties

that was so glad u updated!!! =D for some reason, i feel that draco will choose his father and the death eaters over ginny...i dont know why...just a feeling. maybe because i want the opposite to happen so bad, and knowing its almost impossible with the real draco...not sure.. keep it up! this is getting quite good. dont keep us waiting!! we want more! LOL ;D

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 02/19/06 3:00
Chapter: Loyalties

HURRAY Update!!! And the gloom continues... but does Draco REALLY have to be a Death Eater? Loved how you portrayed Draco's feelings of "alone" before he was interrupted by Dumbledore. But Draco's conversation with Dumbledore did lighten up the atmosphere, just an itsy bit.

Author's Response: I'm floored that people come back even though it's taken me so long lately to update! Thanks! :) The next chappie is coming soon, I hope. I'm nearly done revising. Unfortunately, the darkness of the story will continue into the next chapter. But as I've gotten comments about lightening it up a bit, I might work something a bit more hopeful into future chapters. :)

Reviewer: LiveLaughLove
Date: 02/17/06 14:21
Chapter: Loyalties

I love your story so far! it really is amazing, update as soon as you can because i am just DYING to know whats going to happen!

Author's Response: Thank you! I always welcome new readers and their comments. I'm actually in a writing frenzy lately. Next chapter is coming shortly.

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 01/28/06 9:49
Chapter: Darkness Falls

this was such a dark chapter as hawaiian said, but it was great nonetheless. cant wait to read on! please write again!

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 01/27/06 16:52
Chapter: The Heart Has Two Sides

that was wonderful! i love draco's deepness! hes sounds so insightful and sensitive. this is a great story you should be proud of! keep it up! ;D

Author's Response: I am, as always so grateful to my readers. Thank you for making it through all these chapters. I'm trying hard not to dissapoint, and the next installment is coming along slowly as there is so much other stuff going on now. Wait for it though. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 01/20/06 14:36
Chapter: Divorce Annoucement

YES!! I can't wait to read what happens next and see what happens when she talks to Draco! And i want to compliment you on this chapter, very well done of course. and i loved this part: He set his jaw firmly and willed himself not to cry. Awww, that was so cute! Draco crying? That must be first! Excellent job! You got a 10 ;D!

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 01/18/06 19:44
Chapter: After the Fight usual! =D lol. i love reading this story because ur so descriptive in ur work! interesting to see what will happen next! keep it up!

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 01/18/06 18:24
Chapter: Malfoy vs. Finnigan

That was great! Can't wait to read the next chapters! Excellent! I just <3 it! =D

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 12/08/05 0:47
Chapter: Darkness Falls

You certainly set the mood with this chapter. Even I felt depressed, darkness didn't just fall, it practically consumed the whole school. I'm going to need to recover before I read another story. Something really bright and cheery, like a cheesy teen flick.

Reviewer: I_love_HP
Date: 11/26/05 18:43
Chapter: The Heart Has Two Sides

I love this story, I have not been able to stop reading it since I started. My mother told me to get off of the computer and I found myself sneaking on whenever I could, write more soon please!

Author's Response: LOL...thanks! I appreciate you risking the wrath of your mother. ;) My current chappie is in queue, so anytime now...hopefully.

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