Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 12/17/04 3:44
Chapter: In The Courtyard

Up late but happy for it . . . Draco's demons make me want to shudder. He keeps fighting his humanity, and his humanity are his thoughts. If he'd only let himself think freely, he'd be all right in the end . . .

Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 12/17/04 3:36
Chapter: In The Courtyard

I'm up too late . . .

Reviewer: myne
Date: 12/16/04 19:07
Chapter: After the Fight

I think that your story is really something and how it all conects to something bigger. I was wodering if you ever thought about becoming a proper author yourself if so please send me an email. I thought your writing style was really good and it sounded as if it was coming right out of J.K rowlings thoughts.

Author's Response: Thank you! :blushes: I've never considered being a writer at all....but I do enjoy doing it on the side. I'm glad you've taken the time to review though...any feedback is always appreciated. :)

Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 12/15/04 14:30
Chapter: After the Fight

I like how the story centers around the thoughts of Draco and Ginny . . . I think some good dialogue development would help things along, as well. I know I can get lost in my own thoughts and dwell there for ages without making any progress, I hope the story isn't the same way. But otherwise, good job thus far.

Author's Response: Actually, the original chapter had the entire dialouge of the fight...but I took it out because it made it really long...the important part was that she said he had no heart. There will be more dialogue as I go on. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 12/15/04 14:26
Chapter: After the Fight

Procrastination wins again . . .

Reviewer: Moca
Date: 12/14/04 14:28
Chapter: The Library

Very very good. It's weird when Ginny claims she hates Draco, but then wants him to pay attention to her. At least Draco admits his feelings now.

Author's Response: Ginny doesn't really know what to think of Draco...she only beleives what she's been told over and over... ;) And Draco hasn't ever denied his feelings for Ginny, he just hasn't told anyone about them. :)

Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 12/13/04 13:48
Chapter: The Library

You're very good at descriptive writing. I could imagine every second of the library scene . . . good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 12/13/04 13:42
Chapter: The Library

'This is your life, are you who you want to be?'

Reviewer: Hagrids_Ho
Date: 12/08/04 15:48
Chapter: Repercussions

I skimmed through it but I've decided that I hate reading off the computer screen...I can't concetrate and it gives me head pains...but I'll keep skimming? Its good...but why is Lucious so evil?

Reviewer: Moca
Date: 12/08/04 14:55
Chapter: Repercussions

keep up the good work. I'm still confused about the connection between Draco and Ginny. But I like the way you write Ron. It's just like the way he's in the books. Good Job with that!

Reviewer: Moca
Date: 12/07/04 14:28
Chapter: Malfoy vs. Finnigan

Great fight scene. It must have been a really really bad fight if they knocked over that gigantic table. Is there something going on between Draco and Ginny already?

Author's Response: Well, I forgot that those tables were huge, LOL. There is something going on between them in Draco's mind, he he...and maybe in Ginny's too. :)

Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 12/07/04 0:18
Chapter: Malfoy vs. Finnigan

I'm really interested to see how Draco is going to earn Ginny's compassion and trust, it looks like it's going to take a lot of faith on her part. Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks... :) is good...;)...she might already feel more compassion for him than she knows. :D

Reviewer: Hagrids_Ho
Date: 12/06/04 18:30
Chapter: The Morning After the Dream

good. i hope this is appropriate >:O

Author's Response: yes, very appropriate...thanks for the review. :D

Reviewer: Moca
Date: 12/06/04 16:03
Chapter: The Quibbler

Yeeyaeeeee! Post soon. I like this story, but keep it moving. I know that all beginnings are slow. Even for me the HP books, when I first started to read them, were slow, but the more you write, the more I'll read! Luv Ya!

Author's Response: I'm quite the long winded one...but I hope to pick it up soon...I hope. :D

Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 12/02/04 22:52
Chapter: The Morning After the Dream

I'm intrigued.

Author's Response: Yay...that's a good thing. Thanks so much for reading. Stay tuned....

Reviewer: Moca
Date: 12/02/04 19:34
Chapter: The Morning After the Dream

Yep. You are impressing me now. I just can't wait til things start to enfold with him and Ginny.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) It will take time, but hopefully it'll be worth it. :)

Reviewer: Diana Marie
Date: 12/02/04 14:33
Chapter: The Morning After the Dream

I really like this so far. I like how it begun and I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I develop things slowly, but I should have the next installment pretty soon. :)

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