Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 04/13/08 17:17
Chapter: Chapter 6

Fleur is emerging as such a... mean person. ;) Hermione had better get Snape out of that engagement fast! I can't wait to see her plan! I'd also love to find out what made Spane agree to marry her in the first place, though - I hope you're planning on telling us!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 04/13/08 16:54
Chapter: Chapter 5

Hehe, quite the matchmaker, our Hermione. I wonder what her plan for Viktor is! Also, I hope Tonks and Remus make it - Remus is so stupid sometimes! I can't wait to see who ends up together and how the plot progresses! Especially the Hermione/Snape bit! But I hope there's someone else for Fleur... poor girl. ... Must read more!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 04/13/08 16:24
Chapter: Chapter 4

Great argument! Again, I think the vocabulary and the way of speaking is a little OOC - especially for Hermione. But it's so fun to read, that I can overlook that quite easily. It's like... Potterized Jane Austen ;) and it's really a great read so far! Hermione the way you write her is so cool, but then, so's Snape. I hope Skye and Harry end up together!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 04/13/08 16:09
Chapter: Chapter 3

Hehe, undeniable. Poor Fleur, though! I'm still really enjoying your Victorianish writing style, it's very original and makes the narration great to read! I think it's just slightly overdone in the dialogue, though - "pray tell", doesn't really seem like something Hermione would say, for example. Still, your characterization, though a little off the wall, is immensely fun to read, and IC enough to fit into the Potterverse. Loving the story. :D

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 04/13/08 15:42
Chapter: Chapter 2

I was wondering the same thing - why Fleur? I hope we find out eventually! Other than that... :D Can't wait for Hermione to show up. And I hope everyone gets happy marriages, though I know how unlikely that is! In any case, the plot seems good, and I like the rate of progression so far, not too fast, not too slow. I can't believe anyone could pull off the marriage law, but you're doing a great job so far! *goes to read on*

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 04/13/08 15:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

The marriage law... a hard one to pull of originally! But this looks quite promising, actually. I really enjoy your writing style, even though it's vastly un-Rowling. Good though! The characterization is really fun, and so far IC for Potter, even though the universe seems somewhat different. In a very intriguing way though! Think I'll go read the next chapter... :)

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 04/07/08 13:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

I can't read your reviews but i just wanted to say that this story is AMAZING!

Reviewer: ember
Date: 03/21/08 16:21
Chapter: Chapter 29 Part B

I really like it, but i think you should have ended severus and fleur a little earyler becasue it got boring, and i didnt want to read it, but in the end it was awesome. The affection between severus and hermione was 20 time better then in Master of Encahtment. BUt for the series of Master of Ecnchatment you need to make a sequal where they have a baby since you made one where severus knows hermione wants one. Love all your stories!!!!

Reviewer: SlyDraco
Date: 03/13/08 4:56
Chapter: Chapter 29 Part B

only one thing I can say.....way too long...dragged it to much sorry subversa but I normally do likeyour stories maybe I didn't like the fact that Severus was with another woman besides Hermione even at the beggining

Reviewer: Substantia1979
Date: 03/12/08 20:59
Chapter: Chapter 23

Brilliant fight scene!

Reviewer: Substantia1979
Date: 03/10/08 19:54
Chapter: Chapter 6

I love it! Reminds me of Jane Austin meets JKR in a way. Great writing skills!

Reviewer: Substantia1979
Date: 03/10/08 12:39
Chapter: Chapter 2

Love it so far! Fleur and Snape? Yikes! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Gersknightlady
Date: 03/09/08 22:48
Chapter: Chapter 29 Part B

Wonderful amazing story, worth all four days it took for me to read it. I could hardely make myself go to bed last night even though the time chnage made it very late. Awesome Job! Jeannie

Reviewer: Gersknightlady
Date: 03/07/08 14:37
Chapter: Chapter 8

Very touching scene in the last paragraph. This is so far a wonderful escape from real life. Well done.

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 03/04/08 15:44
Chapter: Chapter 29 Part B

I have been completely engrossed in this story for 3 days! I have not stopped to review any chaps because I was too selfishly driven to the next one. I have cried, I have laughed, I have celebrated, and I have mourned. I absolutely love the way you write. I love the way you capture the passion of each of "your" characters. You have made them your own. Unlike any other fanfic, I have been able to completely separate this novel as a story of its own. It does not depend on any other writings (all props to JKR, as I adore her) to support the story. Wonderful!

Reviewer: amandajane31205
Date: 02/20/08 20:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Just so you know I don't normally leave reviews, but I must say that I really enjoyed Master of Enchantment and all of the sequels! lol

Reviewer: AntigoneScorned
Date: 01/27/08 22:28
Chapter: Chapter 29 Part B

What a great story!
You are an amazing writer, and I can't wait to read more of your work!

Reviewer: AntigoneScorned
Date: 01/27/08 17:41
Chapter: Chapter 24

I am addicted to reading this story!
And I think my favorite part so far has been when Snape was considering knocking himself unconcious on his desk, rather than speak with Lupin and Hermione!

Reviewer: FaithintheFutur
Date: 01/26/08 17:59
Chapter: Chapter 17

It's so nice to see a story where the black house isn't a place of pain or sorrow!

Reviewer: FaithintheFutur
Date: 01/26/08 1:41
Chapter: Chapter 4

I like that in this story, Hermione not only strikes back at Snape, but that she instigates it too.

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