Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil
Date: 08/21/06 11:00
Chapter: One-Shot.

I wish I would have known before how good your stories are. You are a very talented writer, Steph. We'll miss reading more of your wonderful works. Rest in peace.

Reviewer: lily_evans34
Date: 08/17/06 10:01
Chapter: One-Shot.

Steph, I know that you will never read this, but I just want you to know how I felt. I can't believe how much I regret not giving you a review in return for the amazing review that you gave me. But here I am.

That was truly amazing. Your descriptions and language were flawless; it flowed so smoothly that I never took my eyes off it until I was finished. I never knew that you were this good of a writer. I should have read your stories a long time ago.

I know that you are gone, and you'll never get a chance to know how I felt about this amazing story, or you as a person, but I feel like I need to do something for you. I just wanted you to know that we all love you, and you will always be in our hearts.

Reviewer: sugarquill111727
Date: 05/31/06 21:00
Chapter: One-Shot.

I was wondering where that phrase came from. It's short and different then most stories. I liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 04/29/06 14:04
Chapter: One-Shot.

like your other story, this one is really good! you are a magnificent author!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you dear! I appreciate the kind review.

Reviewer: Blossomlily
Date: 03/08/06 5:55
Chapter: One-Shot.

I really like it. I think you've captured the mood before a battle beautifully. The present tense was also and added plus point.. But I think you could elaborate a bit on the ending though.. Harry says 'now I know the meaning of life'.. how did it dawn on him? What, precisely, is the meaning? What would Luna have said at the time.. Of course, if you've kept it that way on purpose, that's well and good.. It's just me.. I like detail. An excellent job on the whole.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I, also, am not fond of my ending. I tried several different endings, but none worked very well. I swear to change it one day, when I finally get a brilliant idea of what to change it to.

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