Wow. This is the first Fan Fiction I've read on here, and it was amzing! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks a ton! Chapter Two will be here ASAP as I'm having my editor (long story) read it and then she'll send it back to me, and I'll send it in. So, be expecting it very soon.
This was really good! =D =D I liked how you wrote it, it was a distinct style. I got your review for my story, so I decided to return the favour :D
I can't believe you only have one review. I understand completely what you mean, I've had over 900 reads and only 15 reviews. Keep up the good work and please update soon!
By the way, one tiny little mistake. It says The threesome past by her. Hermione gave her a small wave and a smile. It should be the threesome passed by her. But that's nothing major. Please, update soon! Even if you don't get more reviews!
Author's Response: Thanks for catching that mistake! I would have probably never have realised that, so thanks. Hopefully Chapter Two will be up soon.
I liked it, keep it goin. Not too fluffy or desperate. I also know how hard it is to write a first chapter since mine totally sucked lol.
Author's Response: Yeah... Know who your feeling there. LOL. The next chapter will be up as soon as I can type it. This is actually my...what is it...fourth version of Chapter One. But, you know how it is...