Reviews For Searching for Love
Reviewer: FreetheElves
Date: 07/19/06 11:07
Chapter: (one-shot)

Oh, I feel very bad for Harry. Although I love Ron and Hermione as a couple, I don't think they would go behind their best friend's back like that. But that's why it's fan fiction, right? Good story.
:)

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 05/10/06 5:40
Chapter: (one-shot)

Thats sad. Even though I do fully and are extremely in favour aof Ron and Hermione. I still think that fics where one of the trios hearts are broken are really sad. The reason I decided to look at this fic is because I felt a bit sorry for you only getting one review. Poor you. Anyway I like the story and it made me smile with the badge. I got why you called it that. I can't really think of anything to say that is bad about this fic. And I couldn't find any mistakes.

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 05/10/06 5:39
Chapter: (one-shot)

Thats sad. Even though I do fully and are extremely in favour aof Ron and Hermione. I still think that fics where one of the trios hearts are broken are really sad. The reason I decided to look at this fic is because I felt a bit sorry for you only getting one review. Poor you. Anyway I like the story and it made me smile with the badge. I got why you called it that. I can't really think of anything to say that is bad about this fic. And I couldn't find any mistakes.

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 03/11/06 11:57
Chapter: (one-shot)

First to review!

LLL, this is a wonderful story! You keep us guessing until the very end. (I shall not give it away.)

Your descriptions are poetic, and that is your strength. This one in particular struck a chord with me, because I know I've felt that way before:

The priest’s voice sounded far away. He was reading quotes about the creation of man and woman. Two made from one. She swallowed hard. It was odd. His voice was so soft, like he was standing in another room. All she could hear was her breathing, and the manic drumming of her heart. Harry smiled at her… and it was all over.

This is very clever and so appropriate: A square, silver badge slid out of the chute where returned change normally drops. In small letters it said “Hermione Granger, Searching for Love.”

You have managed to produce an emotional, interesting, and well-written story. It's hard to believe this is your very first fan fic! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! - Sea Isle Witch

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