That was amazing!!!!!!! I cried during this. How did you come up with this??!!
Wow. Honestly, that was very amazing. It was so incredibly heart-warming, while heart-wrenching all at the same time. Absolutely wonderful!
~ Annalise x :)
Wow. Honestly, that was very amazing. It was so incredibly heart-warming, while heart-wrenching all at the same time. Absolutely wonderful!
~ Annalise x :)
oh my!!!! i loved it!!! had me on the edge of my seat the entire time...great job
Wow, that was an awesome story =D
A bit towards the end it did remind me of Beauty and the Beast (i can't believe i just admitted i've seen that -_-), but it was still a really original idea, and it was so sweet =D
Good job!
OMG!!! That's is such an amazing story!!!! Thank yuo 4 sharing it with us. Keep writing.
That was amazing...
Author's Response: Thank you.
*hugs*
Oh! That was beautiful! It made my day :)
Author's Response: And you made my day!
*sniffle* So beautiful! My heart was pounding at the end! I love it!!!!
Author's Response: awww, I´m glad you liked it.
Oh. sad. But so romantic and so Sirius. i'm gonna cry. :*(. Good writing! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)
Damnit! that's the second time i've read this story, and it's the second time i've cried over it! It's very well written, but one small comment...did you get the idea for this story from Beauty and the Beast? if you did thats ok, because it worked ^_^ its very rare that i cry over a story twice, and i only do it if its written well ^_^ congrats and continue writing, and perhaps write something of your own invention instead of a fan fic? im sure you could do it! If you did, im sure you'd become as famous as J.K. Rowling ^_^
~Winter
Author's Response: *dreams about being as famous as Jo* *dreams about meeting Jo* *dreams about bitch-slapping Jo* Sorry, that went a bit to far. It happens quite often with my day dreaming, and sometimes my plots. I'm actually writing my own fiction. That's why I haven't posted anything new for a while. Thanks for the review!
i started to cry. i love this story
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot to me.
i love this story it's so poetic and beautiful
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. That's what I was aiming for,
Powerful story, man. I was pretty close to tears actually, thinking of Sirius dying and how sad Remus was. I'm a big R/S fan myself even though I've only written one, so this story was particularly pleasing to me. You really capture the love of their relationship in an interesting new light, and I love the creative storyline of the rose.
I see that this is the first fic you wrote (yeah, I actually had so much time on my hands I got to look up your other fabulous stories ;) and I see a marked improvement in your work. Not that this is bad by any means because it's wonderful, but your mechanics in Ariel and the Triwizard Tournament compared to this story are much better. Definitely a great piece--especially for your first! Glad you kept up the hard work. :) --GG
Author's Response: Oh my! I'm so happy you liked this. This is actually my second story. I started writing Ariel before I wrote this one. This story was posted between the first and the second chapter of Ariel so you could say this is my first complete story. I'm thrilled you liked it. Thanks for the review!
aw ! I really liked that... I think you did a good job with the suspense and I thought Sirius was going to die for a while ):
Author's Response: Sirius will never die in one of my fics *winks* thanks for the review
That was absolutely amazing! I would list all of the mistakes I found through the story, but there's one problem... I didn't find any! That's because I was waaayy too into the story to care about spelling and junk.
This was a beautiful story. The little myth at the beginning and end was an amazing touch. You have so much writing talent. I could totally see the whole story as if I was watching it on a TV. Though it was better than TV because with a TV, it's harder to picture the emotions. You wrote the emotions fabulously. Now I realize I'm running out of adjectives to use to describe for your story. To sum it all up...
Amazing x2
Beautiful
Fabulous
~Gabby
Author's Response: Gabby!!!! *huggles* "I would list all of the mistakes I found through the story" i gt so scared when i read that! I was like, noooo. I didn't know I had that many! lol You could see it on the tv? Wow, maybe I should seel the idea to some network :P I'm so happy you liked the story! *huggles again* thanks for the wonderful review!
Wow, that was really cool. :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Wow, that was really cool. :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
